The Masquerade (AnShi/ShivIka FF)- Epilogue UPDATED (Pg 130){COMPLETE} - Page 30

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

Okay, at first it was interesting to see such effect Shivay has on Anika. She was rigid because he sat next to her in the Car. You know this Anika is so real, while reading I was imagining me as Anika as the things she was doing at her place I would have done ! Watching a high class place for the first time how he felt was so touchy, I would have felt same ! Like I don't belong here kind of feeling ! Kudos yaar specifically for this paragraph 👏

I don't know what Shivay is doing now ! He must have understood by her antics and actions that she is not so much interested in Om, still he was getting close to her ! Hope, when the truth comes out Anika won't be too depressed ! But the dance, the hug was soulfully sensual to read ! Loved it you you say Anika felt like a stranger in front of the mirror !Again 👏 for writing so brilliantly ! Atlast the kiss ! That was unexpected that I couldn't stop blushing for sometime. ☺️

Another superb Chapter ! Can't wait for the next. This time update Soon! Thanks for the pm and keep PMing me 😉 Take Care 🤗


Wow!! You got every single thing that I was trying to bring out in this update!! Thank you so much for this comment! As that song goes, 'You got me!"🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Arrey yaaar!!! what an perfect update👏.
Loved it to the core...
Shivaay saring at Anika continously...was sooo amazing.
Nd the dance was sooo dreamy.
nd finallly the kiss...loved how u just brought it...he waiting for her outside...caging her...soft talks wid a spark in his eyes...nd finally his lips on hers...Perfect☺️.
continue sooon
Love Sharmi


Thanks Sharmi!! It means a lot coming from you!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Fabulous progress despite the communal date!😆 I love the way you depicted the intensity with with he observes her, and the helplessness of his staring sessions... even amongst the group...such that casual bystanders give her a once over out of sheer envy!. Poor Annika...so distressed during the car ride with him sitting beside her...taking over her space and her air too! I am glad he noticed the depth of her character...how much she hides about her realities behind casual laughter. And the dance...hayye...to be plastered across SSO's chest...stuff of dreams! And if that wasn't enough for poor Annika to deal with...the cornering outside the bathroom and the kiss...yaar maar dalaa! 👏 Can you imagine the surprise that she must have felt and the overwhelming gratification too, to know that the SSO was waiting for her outside the ladies room...!😳 Looking forward to the next update...dying to see both of their reactions to the kiss! I really do love that he can't help himself...it's so much fun!😉😆


hehe! Thank you so much for this response!! Am glad you liked it... I'm entering a completely new territory as far as I'm concerned... all this passion is so not my forte! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

omg awesome updates

i read all the updates in one shot
loved it very much
omg this shivaay nah kabi nahi badalega
iam really excited to read more
i know shivaay is jealous in subconscious mind in fact he already starts to fall in love with anika i guess.
plzzz do continue soon😊


Thank you so much!!Glad you found it interesting enough to continue! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

oh my ☺️
what a fantastic part⭐️, especially the last few paragraphs👍🏼. take a bow hon👏👏👏
this was worth the wait😃
shivaay-anika weren't doing much, but just by your amazing writing skills, there was so much passion☺️, gawdd!! im a goner
i wonder what's gonna happen because the course this particular chapter took was unexpected
totally excited for the next part😃😃



Thanks so much for saying that! That was exactly what I was trying for...the fact that these two don't actually have to do much to share a crackling chemistry... glad it came across..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Onyx.

That was awesome! You're good at creating tension. I've read stories where authors jump straight to sex and the moaning and grunting and I'm like what the hell, where is the build up, where's the sexual chemistry? And here they they just danced and stared intensely at the other and I felt breathless. Kudos!


Thank you so much! I know exactly what you mean! But I don't know if this also owes something to the fact that I am delaying writing a more explicit scene until the time I absolutely must! This is new territory for me😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Slap!

Anika looked at her hand and then back up at his face! Had she slapped him?! She watched in horrified fascination at the crimson spread across that cheek until a sudden movement made her look towards his eyes. The fire was still there but as she watched, she saw the ice creep in. He still held her other hand but the hold tightened until it became painful. She tried to wrest her hand away and this time, he let her go with a jerk. Then straightening up, Shivay Singh Oberoi turned around and walked away. Anika fell back against the wall, palm stinging from the slap, wrist still sore from his grip and her hand slowly rose of its own accord to her mouth. Her lips still tingled from that soft touch. Oh, what had they done!

Trying to gather her nerves, Anika returned to their table to find everyone preparing to leave.
Priyanka came up to her.
"Bhaiya has just got an urgent call and needs to get home immediately."

Anika glanced around trying to see if the man concerned was anywhere around. He was standing with his back to her a few steps away and speaking to Om. She quickly turned to Priyanka and said, "Haan, it's also getting quite late. Mujhey bhi chalna chahiye."

"But it's quite late. Are you sure you'll go all the way to your house now?" Priyanka asked in concern.

"Arrey, chinta mat kar!" Anika smiled at her. "Taxi lekey Churchgate chali jaungi aur wahan se toh train mil hi jayga."

As they were speaking, Shivay walked towards them. Anika fell silent as he came and stood next to them.

"Prinku, let's go."
"Bhaiya, I was just asking Anika how she is going to get home at this time of the night."

Finally Shivay looked at her, his face taut and cold eyes revealing nothing.

"She should have thought about that sooner." he said with an air of cool dismissal. He turned back to his sister. "I'm in a rush, Prinku. O's leaving with Riddhima and Rudra, Soumya and you are already well past your curfew. We can't go about wasting our time like this."

Anika had had enough.

"Don't worry, Priyanka. I'll manage" she said not wanting to hear another word from that man. "Chal, bahar chaltein hai."


Saying this she went to gather her things. Priyanka ran up to her and said, "Okay, we'll drop you off at Churchgate Station and you can't say no."


Anika tried to return the girl's eager smile.

This time around, Shivay drove. Seated beside Priyanka in the back, despite her resolution, Anika couldn't help but look at his face reflected in the rear-view mirror. Through the evening whenever she had turned to him, she had found his eyes on her. She had found that unsettling and had wished he would stop. Now he looked straight ahead. She wondered if the fire she had seen in those eyes earlier had been a figment of her imagination. Anger rose within her in waves.

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"Shivay baby, you have to select a colour!"

Shivay sighed as he looked at the piles of material spread out across the table, the couches and parts of the floor.

Tia looked at Anika, who sat a little distance away beside Pinky.

"Did you get those prints I ordered for the upholstery?"

Anika nodded her head and said, "They'll send in samples by tonight."

Pinky looked at Shivay and asked him, "Toh Shivay, tu jaldi bataa de curtains kaun sa colour ka pasand hai tujhey."

Shivay looked up in exasperation. "Maa, you all dragged me here from my work for this!

Tia was busy running her fingers through the various materials. "Baby," she said, "We are selecting curtains for our room that we will share and I want you to feel positive about the colour choice. And if you feel positive, your aura will be bright and shining."

Shivay glanced through the materials and then picked one. "Okay, this one is good."

"Are you sure, baby?" Tia asked doubtfully. "Isn't that a bit too dark?"

"Okay,well then what about this?" Shivay picked up another.

"That's better!" Tia said in a delighted voice. "See, don't you feel good about making this decision?"

Shivay's face hid whatever happiness he was feeling exceptionally well. Tia went on, "You see how making a decision gives you such satisfaction. What you are experiencing is inner peace."

Tia explained to Pinky how indecision affected one's aura as Anika tried to focus on drawing up the list of fabrics selected. Not once did she look towards the place where that man sat next to his fiance, his arm casually flung around her. She concentrated on the task at hand, drowning out everything else.

Since that night, she had felt like she had been branded. The feel of his lips pressed against hers, that unique scent of his that had clung to her, seemed sensations that were imprinted on her now. Nothing she did could make her erase that. Unconsciously she had taken to rubbing her lips as if she wanted to rub that memory away into nothingness.

As for the man, since that night, he had acted like she had ceased to exist and that suited her quite well. He was nothing but trouble and if he was happy to avoid her, then it only made her life easier. She had done the same,in fact. She had found a great deal of angry satisfaction from seeing through him, pretending he wasn't in the room or just by blocking out his presence.

She was brought back to the present by the sound of laughter. Tia was laughing at something Pinky aunty had said.

"Oh my maata! Shivay! I'll ask Mummyji to call panditji today itself for the dates!" Pinky said.

A brief glance towards the man showed that he was looking as happy as was possible for someone like him to look. Anika turned back to her half-written list.

"Yes, get him to suggest a few dates and then we'll pick one." His voice rumbled across the room.

"Shivay, you have made me happiest today!" said Pinky as she left the room, excited to inform the rest about this development.

"Baby!"

How many yards of that gray floral patterned material did Tia say? Was it 3 or 7 yards? Anika resolutely penned in both numbers putting a question mark in the margin. She will not look up. She will not see how happy he was to have finally come to some kind of decision. She will not see him experience inner peace.

"Shall we take a selfie to celebrate this moment?!" Tia was saying which was soon followed by the click of the photo being taken. Then came a soft sound and despite everything, Anika looked up. Tia was straightening up from having planted a kiss on his cheek and as Anika's disobedient eyes turned towards the man, she found herself being watched by him in turn.

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Note: Really sorry about the delay in updates. But the show itself has given us such a high in the last few episodes, nothing else seemed good enough in comparison. And the writer's block continues with me hating everything I am writing. But anyway, have decided to stop worrying about that and just let you decide whether something is working or not in the story.

Edited by twerping - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww Twerps...this is good...why are you not satisfied? So the date is set...she has resolved to ignore him totally. Would love to know what his thoughts are...how does he feel about the total ignore? Its gotta be rubbing away at him. I know why Annika refused to acknowledge the kiss...and perhaps the slap too...as How could he do that when he was engaged to be married to another woman? Did he simply close himself off too...or is he more frustrated now than ever before? Looking forward to the next part! AND BTA loving the episodes this week...watching them non-stop! Shivika are so cute!😳
Edited by --Nargis-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

haha! That was super-quick!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping


haha! That was super-quick!


Had just checked this tread like an hour before for an update...so you can imagine my surprise!😃

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