ShraMan SS:Pyaar Hai Chapter 6 - Pg 14(27th April)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys!!! i know i know...i will update 'Kabhi hua na aise' soon. but i though of this Short...shorter Story on SharMan. so this will probably a 4 part story...max of 5 part, loosely based on the current track.hope you guys like it and please do let me know what you think.

PYAAR HAI
Chapter 1:

Shravan was driving back to his house earlier than usual, his eyes were on the road but his mind wandered off to the most important part of his life...SUMAN. His marriage with Suman may not have been at his best interest even though it was one of his life goals. But living with her under the same roof was no piece of cake, he wanted to show Suman how much he hated her but instead everyday showed him how much he loved her.

His hatred towards her was slowly making its way out of his heart, the very reason he hated her was now making sense to him...felt reasonable. Suman again looked more like the girl he's always been in love with...Shravan's Suman. His confusion over his feelings got worse with each passing day. But every time he takes a step towards her his father pops into his head.

His father was his whole world and anything to hurt him would kill Shravan. The sky outside was filled with dark clouds, just like his thoughts clouding his judgement. On the way, a site caught his attention and he instantly applied the brakes jerking him out of his seat. Across the road, he saw Suman and ADITHYA talking...his blood instantly boiled, his anger for both reached a new height...his death stare was enough to melt an iron sheet.

At once dashed out of his car and rushed to beat the rest of the life out of Adi. He almost reached them but stopped in his track when he heard Adi scream at Suman. He could now visibly see the loath Suman had for Adi through her eyes. Shravan slowly hid himself behind a tree near the platform while they were talking on the side of the road.

"Shravan tumse nafrat karthahe Suman...woh tumse kabhi pyaar nai kiya...woh sirf tume isthamal karahe..." Adi screamed making the fallen leaves on the road to shiver. Shravan wanted to punch the life out of this guy for saying such things about him...especially to Suman. His focus shifted to Suman who was also boiling in anger with her wrist clenched and shooting dagger at Adi. Adi laughed an evil laugh "kisiko patha he...woh isse pehele esse kis kis ke sath..kya...kya" Adi words fell when Suman's palm made hard connect with Adi's face, making both Adi and Shravan stand in stunned expression.

With shock Adi regained his form but Suman's finger shot up in air up to his face in warning "chup...bilkul chup...ek aur shabad Shravan ke baare mein bola tho...dekh na" Shravan eyes almost watered hearing her words. Suman continued "...woh mera pathi he...aur tum jaise neech log uske baare mein baath karna tho durr...soch na bhi math" Suman's words rang in Shravan's ears. His thoughts were disturbed when Adi loudly clapped his hands...with a disgusting sarcastic smile on his face.

"Acha...abb aarahahe usse...sorry sorry...tumari husband se itni pyaar..." he again sarcastically laughed "paise keliye...kuch bhi..." Suman's eyes remained closed in anger while Adi spoke. Shravan stood there rooted in his place, unable to react to Adi's words...his confusion flashed again in his eyes. His eyes were now fixed on Suman for her reply.

Adi suddenly grabbed Suman's hand by force and spoke in at most disgust "Bol...itni lalchi ho tum???" he screamed making her flinch. Shravan wanted to rip his arms out for holding his wife...his own thought was making him realize his love for her. Suman reached her breaking point, she forcefully withdrew her hand with a hard swing "HAAANNN..." she screamed silencing the entire road. Shravan heart skipped a beat, he felt like his heart was ripped open with bare hands. The small hope that lingered along his heart died leaving a big scar. Shravan turned his back towards them into the tree trying to control this pain he's experiencing now.



so that's the first chapter...Sorry for the mistakes, will defo try to update all very very soon(been busy with other things).
please do like and comment on the chapter...will really appreciate every comment.

CHAPTER 2 - Pg 4
CHAPTER 3 - Pg 7
CHAPTER 4 - Pg 9
CHAPTER 5 - Pg 12
CHAPTER 6 - Pg 14

love you all..take care
-Divi😳
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Gurveen thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start
One more misunderstanding between them
Hope it gets cleared soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start looking forward to next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you so much guys...loved each and every comment. will definitely try to update soon.
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BTW PMs will be sent soon...probably by tomorrow.
thanks again for reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is really a good one
Keep writing & UPDATE SOON.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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divi thanks for the pm...chapter was amazing..god this adi...i really hate him...
n sumo she said tht haan in frustratn n anger...pls dnt create mu btwn thm...there's already a lot in serial...pls ...waiting fr next pm..update soon ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all sorry fr being late with the comment as i was busy with my exams

awesome update dear
really loved it
hope no misunderstanding get created b/w tham
waiting fr nxt prt

nd thnx fr the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry guys for not posting the chap...been upset with the off air news😭
our love for ShraMan is undeniable and unshaken, so i will be updating it this weekend...im looking forward for you guys to read it.

see you soon🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update soon
Nice story want to know for what she is lalchi
Love of her Shravan or something else.

Waiting

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