Arshi FF- BREACH OF VOWS- Is posted again. - Page 31

Originally posted by: A...

Excellent story and very detailed. Love, longing, pain, passion, helplessness... Yu captured every emotion beautifully. I'm really looking forward to know the reason for their separation.. Their impending divorce and khushi's reation to tht tragedy. Also i'd love to see her memory back soon and how the new dynamics of their relationship affect their future.Hey, A..your comment did make my day, yes it has been disappointing that this story could not generate much response on this forum. It was already posted and finished in FF forum. I am glad I got to post it and few of my friends and now, got to read it too. Hope you enjoy the rest of it too.

Keep writing and update quickly:) 👏

Ps:Though its strange tht this story is not getting its deserving response and love but i assure yu as a reader tht this is one of the best works till date on this forum.This has to be one of the best comment, I got for this one. It touched my heart. Thanks.So plz do complete this story irrespective of the number of readers yu get.Never leave a story wthout a closure

Originally posted by: nik1310

An intense chapter, worked well for me. Not much of of flashbacks and baby.. 😉 Hey, Nik! I know, many readers got distressed with that hehe.

The clouds are clearing, aren't they ? Liked how Khushi is keen to unravel the missing bits, the way she without being despondent about it is looking to hold on to one thing she is certain of her love for Arnav and takes it from there. Doubts she is having thanks to Arnav's attitude of trying to avoid her.Her reaction does amazes me. She is pretty resilient and the constant is this realization that she loves Arnav.

Well, i felt it strange that for a person recovering from head trauma/injury/amnesia, she was left alone to fend for herself without family around that is. Arnav just witnessed her collapse in his arms the previous day due to the shocking revelation; i felt it strange that he chose to work away from home for so many hours...forget his predicament, these kind of recovering people tend to be unstable due to medications and what else that goes on in their head tho ajeeb tha. just telling. Ok, You are absolutely right , about head injuries. But she was not in a fatal car crash and physically she didn't suffer much. I think Arnav is using her car accident and her health for blanketing his desires for her. With Khushi, it is more psychological than physical now. She was in a car accident more than a month ago and she did get a clean bill of health from the doctors. Her Amnesia is not due to head injury but is a condition called hysterical amnesia. We have to see what triggered this amnesia in her. Now this reason could be, what lead to that accident, what was her state of mind before that and why her mind is blocking this part of her life. It is because maybe she doesn't want to remember her pending divorce period and the pain she was going through.

But it is much bigger reason. and we would get to know soon.

So I hope you got satisfied with the answer. And yes, more truth comes out in next part.

So he finally tells her that she wanted out does he and she takes it for the present in a ok manner...will wait for the next update.Let me post it now.

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: matosarah

<font color="#ff0000">You would get the closure to this one. It is one of my finished work. I won't be posting the ending here but last few parts would be on the Blog. But I will let you guys know when the time comes.😃</font>