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INDEX


part 16 on page 1

part 17 on page 10

part 18 on page 13

PART 19 on page 21

part 20 on page 28

part 21 on page 37

PART 22 on page 42

poem on page 46 (4 posts)

PART 23 on page 47

PART 24 on page 58

part 25 on page 63

Part 26 on page 72

part 26 B on page 75

part 27 on page 86

Teaser on page 90

Part 28 on page 93

part 29 on page 106
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Summary


Geet left her love behind & ready to marry asad only for her abbu happiness... zaira (her friend & bhabhi) , asad (best friend) & jenny (asad wife) ...trio try , geet confess love for maan in front of maan & own family...she confessed her love for maan in front of him , but not ready to marry him... she don't want to go against her abbu wish...

At past, she get to know biggest truth of life...her abbu is not her real abbu ...she is his abbu sister daughter... her heart break know this truth ...on this day she lost all relations...its take five years for tying all relation, its tied but sweetness or believe lost somewhere...now geet have no courage lost again her abbu trust...

She ready to destroy her happiness for her parent's happiness or love...

But, before marriage life takes u - turn. And her family know about asad marriage...her ammi go against her husband wish and make understand him geet happiness with maan...

Maaneet marriage fixed, all around only happiness...but kismet playing own game...maan meet accident on marriage day & go into coma...

She marries him in coma state...

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Geet toh kho gye
Muhabbat mein fana hogya
Aur maan aj bhi us k dard nahi dekhta
Guror tha usko k woh uski ankhey pad leta hai
2sal yeh ankhey roti nahi usko Khabar bhi na hoi


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Part 16

Maan

Happy anniversary

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Shaadi ??

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maine nhi kaha tha aapki beti ko

Yaha rhehne ke liye

Wo khud rhi

Aur na mein is rishte ko manta hu

 

.

.

Kaisi shaadi daadi

.

 le jaaiye isse yaha se

Waise bhi isne humesha bs aapki hi baat maani hai

Aapke liye phle bhi chod diya tha humara rishta

Aur shaadi ke mandap mein jaake tk baith chuki hai ye

.

Fir ye dikhawa kis liye

.

Geet : maan ye aap kya kh rhe hai

Maan : jo sch hai

Tumhara

You know only how to play with emotions

So better just get out from my life

no mere maan mujhe yaha se jaane ke liye nhi kh sakte hai

I heard wrong

Daadi : geet beta

Geet : daadi relax

Maan jaroor kissi baat ko leke pareshan hai

Mein baat krti hu unse

Amjahd held her arm and said abhi aur kuch bhi sunana baki hai tumhara

Chalo yaha se

Geet remover his hand and said abbu

Aap jaaiye yaha se

Sbko leke

Zaira : geet tu thik hai na

Geet : mujhe kya honga

Mere maan hai mere sath

Fawad : won hi hai geet

Geet : wo hai

Unke kuch sbd

Humare pyaar ko khatam nhi kr sakte hai

Sabhana : geet bete sun

She don't want to hear any more word against maan,

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
She run from here and held room door tightly and tear fall from her eyes , he standing near window, his one hand on window and another on waist.

Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna

 

He feel her presence, but not moved, this time maan you can't fall week again, she always did same, she play your heart , your emotions every time , this is your mistake maan you always give chance to her and she only keep above own family on you and you bear this pain... and now this time she crossed all lines , she sit with another man in mandap... geet why you doing this with me...what I did wrong with you

Why you proving every time wrong to me, I am wrong in loving you

Next moment he feel her soft body pressed on his beck, her hand moving on his chest , he feel he burn with her touch... his soul just want to take her in arms and kissed her...

She run and hugged him tightly from back...

Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho

Maan

Her word take him again in dark world...no maan you can't fall weak ..this is all lie... her tears is fake...she only loves own parents not you...again she go , and leave you alone...

Her tears making his shirt wet...But he not moved...

Maan look at me

He removed her hand and turns, sees her teary face, he want to wipes her tears and take her in arms...

 

Dekhiye shahid ka call hai

 

Waise toh shaadi se phle milna mna hota hai

 

Par baat toh kr hi sakte hai na

.

Wo mere bina ek pal bhi nhi rh sakta

.

Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Dil mera maange bas ye duaa

He pushed her and sits on bed...

She little shocked, but then smile, wipes own tears and come near him, sit on floor near his leg...

 

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

She held his hand and place kiss on his knuckles...

Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

Geet : maan

Look at me please

.

Her one hand holding his hand and another hand she place on his cheek turn his face own side and try to see own in his eyes...

Geet : maan dekhiye apni geet ko

.

Waise maan gussa hona mera bnta hai aap pe

Aapki patni aapke liye sazi hai

Aur aap hai ki usse dekh hi nhi rhe hai

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Ase apni biwi ko ignore krna achi baat nhi hai

.

He take own hand back and stand from bed and laughed ...

Geet : maan why you laughing like that

She also stands and asked this...

Maan : hassu nhi toh

Aur kya karu mein geet

.

What you said now

Aapki patni

Apni biwi

.

When I never married with anyone

Toh meri patni ya biwi kaise huyi tum

.

He held her shoulder tightly and said tumhe dusro ke sath naam jodne ka sok honga

Mujhe nhi hai

Ase bemane rishte banane ka shok

.

He pushed her , but she held his hand , she getting shock one by one, but she can't leave him alone...

Maan aap kuch bhi kahe

Mein bura nhi maanugi

Mein nhi jaanti

Aap kyun gussa hai

Kis baat pe naraaz hai

I only know one thing

Am yours

And you are mine

.

He tries to remove her hand, but this time she holding his hand tightly...she says some lines to him like poem...

She cupped his face and said Humdard hai, humdum bhi hai
Tu saath hai toh zindagi

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He removed her hand again, she come in front of him...

Tu jo kabhi door rahe
Ye humse ho jaaye ajnabi
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo

She pulls him closer and gives kiss near his lips...try to hold him closer...
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Kaise kare hum usko bayaan

but next moment she fall on floor... maan don't want to take more closeness, she try to kiss him again, before her lips touch him, he held her arm and give slap to her, due to sudden slap , she fall on floor... he bend little but her mehendi hand flash come on his eyes and writing shahid name ...he just left from here angrily...
.

He tore the shirt and starts the push up...

Maan see this dress

Ye meri wedding dress hai

.

Nice na

.

Jo aapne pasand kiya tha na

Wo bhi acha tha

Par ye dekho

Ye mujhe ab jyada acha lag raha hai

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhulna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

 

Geet not able to move from here, her maan slapped her, she touching same cheek again and again..no maan never did this...

Jaagi bhi hai royi bhi hai
Aankhein ye raaton mein mere

Maan why you are so hurt

.

She cried ...

Kyun har ghadi milke tujhe
Lagti rahe bas teri kami

Another side maan also tired from push up, but inner fight or fire not cold till ...he starts breaking ice...

Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho
Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho

But he not feeling peace, he fall on knees cried ...

Why geet

Kyun tumko paake tumse juda

Why

 

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

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New day come but two soul spent full night in cries... he come early morning sees she sitting on same place, where last night he left her...he not able to see her face because she looking down ... he going to bend but his mind stop him...

No maan

This is only one more drama of her

He left.

She hear his feet sound, she want to see him, but now she not able see in his eyes any more...last night is enough for this pain... from last night she thinking same why maan is angry on her...why she sees pain in his eyes...but she have some hope when his anger cool down he come to her but now this hope also break he come and left to washroom..

Maan get ready and left for breakfast...

Daadi : maan

Geet kaha hai

.

Maan

Hum aapse kuch puch rhe hai

Maan : daadi mein koi geet ka nauker nhi hu

Jb usse bhook hongi

Wo aa jeeyengi

Filhaal wo room mein hai

Daadi : aapne jo kal kaha

Wo kya tha

Maan : sch tha us ladki ka

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Geet come down to see him from far, but hearing his harsh word, she not able to carry own self any more...she sit on floor and seeing him from above corridor...

Karan : bhai ye aap kya kh rhe hai

Maan : yhi sch hai karan

Us ladki ka

She only knows play

Phle ladko ko apne pyaar ke jaal mein fasayo

Jb usne mann br jaaye

Toh unhe chod do

Marne ke liye

Savitri give him one tight slap and said aap geet ke baare mein asa soch bhi kaise sakte hai

.

Geet

She tries to say more, but she feel immense pain in heart...

Maan : daadi

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Daadi

Please aankhen kholo

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Geet try to balance own self... but from lunch she not eats anything and whole night makes her so week... she just slipped on floor...

Maan , karan, and karan wife left to hospital...

Precap : maan hate me

Geet maan hates you

.

Maan daadi kaisi hai

Naam mt lo tum meri daadi ka

Aaj tumhari wajh se

Wo hospital mein hai

Kash tum meri zindagi mein kbhi aayi hi nhi hoti

If anything happen with my daadi na geet

I kill you with my own hand

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Maan maine kuch nhi kiya hai

I love you

I really love you

.

But I hate you geet

Galati thi tum meri

Geet

Just go from my life please

 

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part yaar ye maan to bohut galat kar raha hai pura sach to jaan le ye par nai bechari geet waiting for next update soon 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congo 4 new thread thats horrible hate the way maan behaved geet tried so much but he didnt listen precap more sad
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Awesome update dear, feeling bad for geet,please clear maan is mu soon
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Congo on new thread priya
Yeh maan pagal ho chuka hai
Geet tried to near him but he slapped her
Now blaming for dadi condition.
Agrhhh I hate him
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It was shocking. How could maan behave like this. He should have talked with geet for once. Poor geet couldn't qble to get the reason of maan's behaviour. This is the limit. How could maan slap Geet . she sacrificed so much in her life still he is so rude with her
 I know he is having misunderstandings but for sake of his love he should have given her a chance to explain. Omg dadi got heart attack. Maan again blamed Geet .waiting for next dear.