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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb story dear
Read all part to gather
Pls continue soon

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Fanna
Chapter 14


Its 10 am in the morning Piya goes to the washroom to change while Abhay calls the room service and orders 2 cups of coffee. Piya comes out of the washroom. She is wearing a pink dress. Her hair is loosely tied. Her face reveals the tiredness of the night... She comes and sit near abhay at the coffee table. Abhay constantly admiring her beauty...

Piya: Aj mujhe bohot nind aa rahi hai abhay...

Abhay: Koi baat nahi Piya, coffee pilo to fresh ho jaoge...

Piya: Nahi mujhe nahi pini hai.. mujhe bohot nind aa rahi hai...

Abhay pours down the coffee for Piya in a mug and lovingly makes her have it...

Piya: Ab main kya bolun abhay, ab to mujhe pini hi hogi, aakhir tumne itne pyaar se jo banayi hai...

Piya and abhay both have their coffee...Then Piya goes in front of the mirror and combs her hair... She leaves her hair open... She applies a rosy pink lip gloss. She wears a pink earing. Then she picks up silver locket to put on...
Abhay comes and grabs her from the back.

Abhay: Nahi tum vo locket nahi pehnogi... main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon.Bohot khoobsorat... It will compliment your beauty... 1 min ruko...

Piya looks at her self in the mirror and smiles.. Abhay comes from the back with a diamond neckclace in his hand.
Abhay removes Piya's hair from her back first and then kisses her... and then vo Piya ko necklace pehena deta hai... Piya looks at her self in the mirror and admires the necklace...

Piya: Wow Abhay! Its really very beautiful..Par isme Abhiya kyun likha hai? Tum to Abhay ho na dear?

Abhay: Uff meri bewakoof wify... Aao mere paas aao main tumhe batata hoon Abhiya kya hota hai...

Piya: ufff har chiz me romance!! Tum mujhe yehin se batao yeh abhiya kya hota hai??

Abhay: Nahi Piya... pehele tum mere paas aao...

Piya: Lo abhay ab main tumhare bohot kareeb hoon, ab to batao...

Abhay: No Piya... Come closer...

Piya: Gets closer...

Abhay : aur paas... and vo Piya ko apni oor khich leta hai... ab un dono ki bich koi bhi dooriyan nahi hai...

Piya: Abhay ab to bata do dear...

Abhay: Piya abhiya hum dono ke naam se bana hua ek shabd hai... Abhiya humare pyaar ki nishani hai...

Piya: Abhiya ek aisi mazboot dor hai jo kabhi toot nahi sakti. Abhay aur Piya ye do naam mohabbat ki duniya me itehas (history) ban jayega...

Abhay: Abhay aur Piya ko koi bhi juda nahi kar sakta... Ek aisi mohabbat jisne bejaan dil pe jaan la diya...

They both were very close to each other during this conversation when they suddenly realized that they were getting late for their sight seeing...

Piya ( pulls her self away from abhay) : Abhay we are getting late... ab tak to car bhi aa gaya hoga hume lene ke liye...

Abhay: Haan Piya! Hum dono ek dusre ke pyaar me itna kho gaye the ki hum to sight seeing ke bare me bhool hi gaye the... Love u Piya... Suno tum niche utro apna touch up karke main driver se mil kar aata hoon...

Piya: ok dear...
Abhay goes down and is talking with the driver...

Abhay: Sir would you mind to lend me your car...?

Driver: Sir but you are new to this place... will u manage it?

Abhay: When my love is with me... I can manage anything..

Driver: Best of luck sir!!!

Abhay: Thank you...

By that time Piya also came...

Piya: Wat?? Abhay tum drive karne wale ho??

Abhay: Haan Piya... lets move in...

They both get into the car...

Abhay: Piya main nahi chahata, ki hum dono ki bich koi aur aye...

Piya: Wow!!! Kitna maza aane wala hai hume... I am just thinking... Romantic drive to the beach... Its amazing...

Abhay puts on a soft and romantic music and continues to drive ... Finally they reached the beach...
The roaring of the sea is heard... Tall coconut tree can be seen... Abhiya moves towards the beach...

Piya: It will be so much fun na abhay... Sitting under the coconut tree and having coconut water wow...

Abhay: yup piya runnn

Piya is running towards the sea and abhay following her... finally Abhay catches Piya and lifts her up...
Episode Ends



Edited by Mannu_pkyek - 9 years ago
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Fanna
Chapter 15

Piya is running fast towards the beach and Abhay following her... And finally Abhay catches her and lovingly lifts her up...
Then the background score : Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda
Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa
Mila karu sirhaane pe
Ohhh
Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda
Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga
Hooo
Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Abhay aur Piya dono apne pyaar me itne khoye hue the, ki vo bhul gaye vo ek public place me hai...

Piya: Abhay vo dekho vahan coconut water mil raha... chalo na mujhe peena hai...

Abhay: okay sweetheart chalo... par promise me uske baad hum don horse riding karenge... trust me Piya it would be fun and adventurous..

Piya: Haan baba I promise... ab chalo bhi... I am really thirsty...

Abhay: okay Piya!!!!! Run again... Dekhte hai pehele kaun pohochta hai... If I win then you gonna kiss me and if you win then tum jo kaho vohi hoga aaja...

Piya: okay!!!!! Ready steady and go...!!!!!!!

Both running towards the coconut water stall, midway something pricks on her feet and she stops, abhay was ahead of Piya but he comes back to her, they both sit down on the sand, Abhay takes out the thorn from her feet, and softly kisses her on her feet...

Abhay: Come on Piya... Now runn!!!!!! You are a brave girl!!!!

Piya: And you are mad...!!!!!!

But eventually Abhay reaches the stall first!!!!

Abhay: Jaldi aao na Piya... Dekho I won...!!!!!

Piya comes... Vo haap rahi thi... Abhay come on where is my coconut water?

Abhay: But darling where is my prize???

Piya: Prize???? Kaisa prize???

Abhay: Oye don't act smart!!!!

Piya: Oye I am not acting smart!!!! But I am smart!!!!!

Both of them then very joyfully had their coconut water... they paid the money and then left!!!!

Piya: Chalo now its time for the horse ride!!!!

Abhay: But 1st give me my prize...

Piya: Pagal ho kya? Yahan sabke samne... it's a public place babu...!!!!!

Abhay: I don't care... humlog apne honeymoon me hai...

Piya: No shona!!!!!

Abhay: Very bad!!!! Par main apna gift lekar rahunga...

Piya: haan dear tumhe apna gift zaroor milega... but not here atleast!!!!!!!!!!!

Abhay: Ohh wow!!! Really?

Piya: haan haan!!!!!

Abhay: okay then lets go for the horse ride!!!!!!

Piya: Yippi!!!! But mujhe bohot dar lagta hai...

Abhay: Jab tak main tumhare sath hoon tumhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai Piya... Jab tak main hoon, main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga Piya..

Piya: Isliye to Abhay, sirf isliye, main tumhare har faisle me tumhare sath reheti hoon... zindagi ki har mor par tum mujhe apne sath paoge... I love u abhay...

Abhay: I love u too piya!!!

Abhiya fir horse riding ke liye jaate hai... Abhay first talks with the horse man...

Horse man: Aap ko kitna ghora chahiye bhai sahib?

Abhay: ek...!!!!!

Horse man: Thik hai sahib!! Chalo mere sath vahan mera ghora hai,,

Abhay: Kya aap chalaoge ghora?

Horse man: Jii sahib

Abhay: Kya aap mujhe de sakte hai chalane???

Horse man: Waise to hum kisi ko dete nahi... Ghora ko kabu me rakhna bohot mushkil... kuch hogaya to hum malik ko kya javab denge.. mera naukri to chala jayega...

Abhay: Dekhiye uncle hume kuch nahi hoga... main bohot baar horse ride kiya hai..

Horse man: Thik hai par extra charge lagega...

Abhay: Extra!!! Never mind!!!

Piya: Abhay tum pagal ho??? Tumne kab horse ride kiya hai...??? Agar kuch ho gaya to... dekh rahe ho yeh beach kitna rough hai,,, mujhe nahi jaana tumhare sath...

Abhay: Kuch nahi hoga Piya...trust me... I'll manage it...

Piya: Oye Mr... Shayad tum bhool gaye ho ki ab tum ek sadharan insaan ho... you are no more a vampire...

Abhay: uff Piya be brave... chalo na maza ayega..

Piya: okay...

Piya sits on a white horse... abhay sits at the back of her and holds her tight...

Piya: Please dheere dheere chalana, mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai...

Abhay: Main hoon na Piya... daro mat...

Lovely breeze blowing, roaring of the sea can be heard... and amidst all Abhiya romancing in the horse...
The horse ride is over... Abhay gets off the horse... while Piya feeling scared to get off the horse... abhay slowely lifts her down... Both looking at each other...

Abhay: Mujhe bohot bhook lag raha hai... kuch khaoge piya????

Piya: Mujhe "papri chaat" khana hai, dekho na vahan mil raha lekar aao na dear

Abhay: Thik hai tum us pathar ke upar baitho main lekar aata hoon...

Abhay goes to buy chaat, Piya sitting on the rock in the sea shore... Her hair flying in the winding, water splashing on her face... Piya looking so innocent and beautiful here...
Abhay comes back with the chaat, he also sits beside Piya on the rock... Piya was resting on Abhay's shoulder.. both had the chaat and were looking at the sea waves lashing the sea shore... The sea waves was wetting them...

Piya: Abhay ye jagah kitna khoobsurat aur kitna sannata hai na... aisa lagta hai ki ise pyaar karne walon ke liye hi banaya gaya ho...

Abhay: Right piya... mujhe to Dehradun vapas jaane ka man hi nahi hai...

Piya: Waise ab andhera ho raha hume nikalna chahiye... fir fresh ho kar hume dinner ke liye bhi to jaana hai...

Abhay: Ya now let us leave...

Both of them gets ups and walks holding hand towards their car... And they drive towards their hotel...

Piya: Abhay stop!!!

Abhay: kya hua Piya???

Piya: Mujhe vo coolfi khana hai...
Abhay: Yeh raasta bohot sunsaan hai... tum baitho main lekar aata hoon...

Abhay gets down to buy coolfi... when Sid and Panchi was passing by from another car...
Sid say abhay and points to panchi...

Panchi: Abhay??????

Sid: Shhh!!!! Lets wait and watch!!! Koi awaaz mat karo hum chup chaap unka follow karenge...

Abhay buys a coolfi for Piya and sits back in the car...

Piya: Tum nahi khaoge???

Abhay: nahi... ( continues to drive)

Piya abhay ko bhi apni spoon se coolfi deti hai...

Abhay continues to drive towards the hotel...
Sid and Panchi following them...

Sid: Now we caught them!!!!! Ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!

Episode Ends

Edited by Mannu_pkyek - 9 years ago
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Fanna
Chapter 16

Abhay and Piya driving back to their hotel. Sid and Panchi following them in another car. Their car passed through a road which was very crowded. The place seemed to be very colorful. Piya opened the glass of the window to peep through what is going on there. Piya noticed a blue color banner in which it was written in bold " Thailand Sea Festival". Piya got excited seeing the joy rides and different stalls which looked very colorful...

Piya: Stop the car Abhay!!!! This place is just wonderful!!! Vo dekho yaar. Just look at those rides. Hmmm giant wheel dekho... its driving me crazy...

Abhay: No, Piya. Fir kabhi ayenge. We are getting late. Dinner me bhi jaana hai na dear...

( Sid and Panchi are still at the back of them, waiting 4 them to move further...)

Piya: Nahi Abhay! I don't wanna hear anything. Mujhe jaana hai. Come on. We are on our honey moon...

Abhay: Okay dear as you wish... Chalo!!!

They both came out of the car. Abhay locks the car gate after parking the car at the side...

Abhay: Haan ab bolo kahan jaana hai tumko? I wonder how do these rides fascinates you... :p

Piya: Bohot maza aata hai... try to karo... waise bhi dinner to late se jaana hai... Itna jaldi vapas jakar kya karenge...?

Abhay: Waise karna to bohot kuch tha... anyways leave it chalo... tumahara fair ghoom kar aate hai...

Sid and Panchi seems to be confused...

Sid: Vo log yahan kyun rukh gaye??? Where are they going?

Panchi: Sid read Abhay's mind!

Sid: Maine koshish kiya... I can't read it... mujhe kuch feel nahi ho raha... tum koshish karo.

Panchi: Maine pehele hi try kiya kuch nahi ho raha...

Sid: Aisa kyun ho raha... ? I am angryyy!!!!

Panchi: Don't panic... side me aao fast!!! Vo dekh lenge hume... We need to hide... fir chup chaap unka follow karenge...

Abhay and Piya moving towards the fair... Piya comes across a stall there, where she sees a beautiful lehenga...abhay even looks at it...

Abhay: This is really beautiful...!!!! Traditional too!!!! Tum ise kharid lo ...

Piya: Yup!! Main bhi yehi soch rahi thi...

Piya goes to the trial room and tries the outfit, she looks at her self in the mirror and checks out the fittings... and then comes out to show it Abhay.
Piya was walking towards Abhay... And abhay was staring at her continuously... And then the background score: Tere waaste...
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Tere waaste...
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Rab ki qawali
Hai ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali
Hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali
Hai ishq koi
Subah ki laali
Hai ishq...

Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...
Ishq...

Sochoon tujhe
Toh hai subah
Sochoon tujhe
Toh shaam hai
Ho...
Manzilon pe
Ab toh meri...
Ek hi tera naam hai

Tere aag mein hi jalke
Koyale se hira banke
Khwaabon se aage chalke
Hai tujhe batana

Tere waaste...
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Tere waaste...
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Saath saath chalte chalte
Haath choot jayenge
Aisi raahon mein milo naa
Baatein baatein karte karte
Raat kat jaayegi
Aisi raaton mein milo naa

Kya hum hain
Kya Rab hai
Jahaan tu hai
Wahin sab hai
Tere lab mile
Mere lab khile
Ab door kya hai jaana

Tere waaste
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Tere waaste
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Rab ki qawali
Hai ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali
Hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali
Hai ishq koi
Subah ki laali
Hai ishq...

Mere dil ko...
Tu jaan se juda kar de
Yoon bas tu...
Mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu
Meri chaal tu
Bas kar de aashiqana

Tere waaste
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Abhay: Piya you look perfect!!!!

Piya: Thank you!!! Thank you!!!! I am taking this then...

They took the dress and walked further...
Sid and Panchi hiding behind a tree and watching them...

Piya: Mujhe vo giant wheel me chalna hai... chalo na abhay!!!

Abhay: Haan chalo...

They both are walking hand in toward the giant wheel...

Sid: Abhay marne ke liye tayyar ho jao!!!

Panchi: But promise me tum Piya ko koi nuksaan nahi pohochaoge... You won't hurt Piya...

Sid: Panchi!!! Panchi!!! Panchi!!!! We are vampires!!! Hamare bich emotions kab se aa gaya...

Panchi: What ever sid!!! Piya meri sister hai...! I can't afford to hurt her...

Sid : Now you are a vampire Panchi... tumhara koi family nahi... koi behen nai... koi apna nahi...

Panchi:
Abhay and Piya goes and sit in one of the seats in the giant wheel. They were very cozy. Piya rested her self on Abhay's shoulder as the joy ride started...

Sid and Panchi comes there... Sid goes near the engine from where the giant wheel works...

Every one enjoying the joy ride... everybody shouting in excitement...

Sid pulled the big chain of the giant wheel and most of the people was struck in the mid- air... Crying and howling of people could be heard... Some people managed to jump who were near the ground. Alas!!! Our abhiya and few others were stuck mid air...

Piya: Mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai... whats happening??/ Ye rukh kyun gaya

Abhay: Trust me Piya kuch nahi hoga...

Sid still near the chain... but no body could notice him... Sid broke the chain with his fangs... And the seats of the the giant wheel was falling down almost going to bang the floor...
Abhay aur Piya dono ek dusre ko bohot kas ke pakar liya...

Piya ( shouting aloud): Abhayyy

Abhay: Piyaaa

And the giant wheel banged down... few people managed to escape... But some were lying on the floor with blood scattered around. Abhay and Piya too lying on the ground unconscious...

Panchi: Piyaaa!!! Omg Sid piya ko dekho...

Sid: Control Panchi!!!!!

Panchi: Piya is my sister yaar..

Sid: dekho udhar dekho!!! Blood!!!!! Yummy!!!!!!! I am thirsty!!!!!!

Episode Ends...

Edited by Mannu_pkyek - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Wow abhiya getting their fantastic honeymoon
Not knowing any danger
I don't like it at all that misha hide abt Sid & panchi truth from abhiya
When she know both r in danger
Now what's gonna happen with abhiya
Continue plz

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