The Masquerade (AnShi/ShivIka FF)- Epilogue UPDATED (Pg 130){COMPLETE} - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Please PM me when u update next. Ur writing is too good :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Phail gaya raita... Chikni to giyo 😆.
LMAO Khusti with bag.. 🤣..
Shivaay really need to control his anger.. he says so many things in anger that he doesn't know it could hurt someone really badly.. bechari Anika . I hope OM finds out and put some sense in Gadha Singh Oberoi's mind 😆.
Amazing update.. and you better continue 😳.. Thanks for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Hello!
Thank you so much for those lovely comments! They really encourage me to continue with this story.

Thanks MysticRiver, --Nargis--, VJDIPA, Cookieg, love_never_dies, sweetie_angel, SRKian, dimpled.smile, Tanu156, ArhiIPKKND, Javeria3991, MissSparkling, ...Angels..., shail_j15, pritzz and Sophia21 !!

Thank you all for taking the time out to let me know your thoughts! 🤗

The next chapter will be a short one, just to lay the ground for what is going to happen next.


Edited by twerping - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Loved the exchange between Shivika though I am kinda mad at Shivaay for hurting my girl, again! Poor Anika, I hope she finds a friend in Om while Shivaay gets his head sorted!
I am eagerly waiting for the next update!
Please update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Awesome loved it plz do pm me the next chapters!!!!
Thanks and continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ayeshachanna

Loved the exchange between Shivika though I am kinda mad at Shivaay for hurting my girl, again! Poor Anika, I hope she finds a friend in Om while Shivaay gets his head sorted!
I am eagerly waiting for the next update!
Please update soon!


Yes... I don't know why I get drawn by the idea of this kind of aggressiveness.. in real life,I hate guys who are like this... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Shivay, do you enjoy fighting with her?

"Bhaiya, I was joking when I compared you to SRK in Darr par ab toh yeh sach ho raha hai!"

"Will you two stop it!"

Om had returned from his drive, disturbed by thoughts of an uncharacteristically silent Anika and had tried to find out what had transpired between the two. Despite not knowing the exact details, he could easily surmise that Shivay had said things hurtful enough to disturb Anika. Normally their fiery spirited wedding planner took Shivay's barbs in stride giving back as good as she got but today some line must have been crossed. Shivay had clammed up and refused to talk about it but if his two brothers had one thing in common it was their perseverance.

"She was crying, Shivay! What is wrong with you?!"

"Anikadi toh aaj saara din kitni khush thi. Uski bhai koi National Mathematics Quiz mein apne school ko represent karne Bangalore jaa raha hai...isiliye toh chaat ke treat bhi diya unhone ussi khushi main."

Shivay didn't know how to explain to these two that something about Anika unsettled him. However much he tried to think of her as just another employee, she seemed much more. And this raised his hackles like nothing else could. He simply couldn't bring himself around to trusting her. And the fact that she had already made quite an impression on the rest of his family made him suspect her even more.

Especially, of late his two brothers seemed to be spending more and more time around that woman. Rudra was already peppering his speech with those uncouth phrases of hers. However the far greater threat was this silent admiration that Om seemed to be developing for her. He could not let this grow into anything more. His brother had gone through enough already.

He looked up to see Om pick up one of those beads. He should have had the room swept.

'What's this Shivay?'

Shivay turned to Om and smiled wanly.

"Now, what kind of a game is this, Om? You expect me to know what every speck of rubbish lying around my room is?"

Om sighed and shook his head in exasperation.

Rudra was going through his instagram page but evidently had his ears tuned to the conversation. He straightened up on hearing Shivay and said, "But Bhaiya, only the other day I heard you tell Anikadi that there was nothing in this house that was unknown to you. Tari maar rahe they?"

"Language!" Shivay muttered to himself.

"Aur yeh beads toh saara ghar mein pheyla hua hai!" Om spoke almost to himself.

Rudra looked at Shivay oddly and said, "Bhaiya, kya yeh aapke koi kaprey se..."

"Are you mad?!" Shivay cut in.

"Toh phir Tia ke? Aila! Don't tell me, were you guys having a tussle here? The lovers-waale tussle!"

"Ishqbaazi, eh?!" Om and Rudra were now beginning to grin like the Cheshire cat.

"Those are from Anika's bag." Shivay said, desperate for this conversation to stop.

"Anika's bag?" Om looked amused.

"You know how Anika is, right? She calls her bag by name and apparently has some kind of kinship tie with it. So, accidentally her bag strap tore and she left in tears. Trust me, it was really weird seeing a grown woman cry over a bag."

Om looked at him closely, trying to figure out if Shivay was lying. But Shivay had years of practice at this game and wasn't about to fall short at it now.

"So that's what she was crying about," Om said slowly turning the bead around in his palm.

"What else? You know how silly she can be at times!"


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Edited by twerping - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Shivaay the liar...he is trying to deny the feeling he had for anika...his feelings have not yet reached to the level of love...but seed has been planted...he is denying in his own way... lashing out at anika...poo re anu...please let her teach him a lesson..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
I loved it
Pls make it longer and add romantic scenes and jealousy scenes of shivika

PM in next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
It was short😭😭 please update soon n shivay is jealous of on 😃😃 wow !!!

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