AnShi OS: Aaj Ibaadat

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shivaay turned away from her and left the place as he saw Annika moving towards to thank him for saving her life.

She was really thankful to him and to Saumya for telling her what happened with her and how Shivaay saved her life as she was unconscious for a long time..

Shivaay went towards his room and opened his tie in a hurry and gulped down a glass of water to release his tension.

Images of Annika being unconscious and her not waking up was constantly flashing infront of his eyes.

He remembers how he smiled seeing her fine and conscious. His heart did skip few beats when he saw her unconscious.

Annika slowly opened the doors of Shivaay's room and entered with baby steps. She scanned the entire room but didnt find him there.

She advanced towards the pool area and found him there,looking majestic in his white kurta pyjama and his creamy white feet dipped in the water.

She slowly sat beside him and dipped her feet in those crystal clear water and matched the rhythm with Shivaay..

Shivaay was aware of her presence and he let her be herself and allowed her in the area. Only he knew what kind of storm is brewing up in his heart and mind.

Annika tried to keep her hand on his hand when he moved it away and answered back really rudely, ''Dont you dare.."

Annika was startled and became sad.Already,she was sad from before when her mind went towards the scene when he shouted at her so loudly infront of everyone for making fun of him.

She actually shouldn't have done that.

She wiped the corners of her brunette eyes' by looking away and raised her feet to leave when her mind made her stop and said, "Woh.. Aaj aapne meri jaan bachayi hai.. Thank you! Aap na hote toh main..."

She couldnt say anything further as his cold palms covered her warm,pale lips. A shiver went through their body as their skin reacted to the touch. She felt loved but what if she was dreaming? Was she doing right for hoping to be loved only by him?

"Agar phirse wahi baat tumne repeat kiya toh.."
He replied in anger.

"Toh kya,Mr.Oberoi? Main toh aapki kuch bhi nahi lagti? Aapki employee hu aur ek mamuli si employee keliye itna gehra feelings acchi nahi hai.." Annika replied softly as her hot tears fell on his cold palm which made him aware that she was aware of his feelings.

"Tum mamuli nahi ho.. Yeh jo gehra feelings hai na woh sirf aur sirf tumhare liye hai aur kisi keliye bhi nahi.. Tum mere liye bohut khaas ho jo kisi language mein main tumhe bayaan na karpaunga.

Aaj jab maine tumhe uss halat mein dekha toh meri rooh kaaph utthi thhi... I..I..didnt know what to do.. Doctor keh rahe thhe ki tumhe jagake rakkhe warna tum coma ki jasakti thhi... Woh mujhse bardasht nahi hota..." Shivaay replied with tears.

Annika could feel his love for her... So deep and sacred. She softly carressed his face and placed a kiss on his forehead.

She sucked his warm tears and placed a kiss on both of his green eyes which she loved the most. Her beautiful and soft touches made butterflies flutter in his stomach.

He actually felt longed,loved and cared from her.. The love which he actually craved for,is right infront of him. He knew,she is the perfect choice for him

She made him lay his head on her lap and stroked his jet black hair softly like a mother does to her son.

This scene was witnessed by everyone from outside and they knew,Annika is and will always remain the right choice for Shivaay.

"Om mangalam bhagwan Vishnu..
Mangalam garud dhwaja..
Om jai jai om aa..
Mangalam pundarikaaksham...
Manglaaye tano Hari...

Aaj ibaadat...
Aaj ibaadat ru-ba-ru ho gayi..
Ru-ba-ru ho gayi..
Jo maangi thi.. jo maangi thi..
Uss duaa se guftgu ho gayi..

Aa..

Mere Maula, Mere Maula..
Mere Maula, Mere Maula..
Tera shukriya..

Aaj ibaadat ru-ba-ru ho gayi..
Ru-ba-ru ho gayi..

Dard ke andheron se..
Aa gaye ujaalon mein..
Ishq ke charagon ka..
Noor hai khayalon mein (x2)..

Nazron se teri chaak..
Dil pe raffu ho gayi..
Dil pe raffu ho gayi..

Mere Maula, Mere Maula..
Mere Maula, Mere Maula..
Tera shukriya..

Aaj ibaadat ru-ba-ru ho gayi..
Om mangalam bhagwan vishnu (Maula..)..
Mangalam garuda dhwaja (Mere Maula..)..
Om mangalam pundarikaaksham (Maula..)..
Manglaaye tano Hari (Maula...).."

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The End... The OS was entirely about how Shivaay realises his love for Annika when she goes to thank him... My personal take hai isme bhi...

Do hit like button and comments dena..

silent readers: Allah tumhare computers nasht karde,barbaad karde,comment karne ki taaqat na de...

regular readers: May Allah bless you..
Edited by VidyutKiDeewani - 9 years ago

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wafa.M thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
lovely ;-)
kash aise kuch jaldi tv par dekhne mile... :-)
have read all your stories...n they are simply awesome...do continue writing such stories...i enjoy reading them...:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww that was so cute Ani! Kash aisa ho jata!
Ps. Silent readers se itni nafrat kyu? Aakhir kyu???!🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Awesome as always
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
beautiful OS
poor shivay got so scared seeing anika like that 🥺
finally anshi comfort each other with their love ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haaaye .. He realised what she is to him.. And the way she goes to the lions den haha..
Awesomeee OS!!!!
Lmao ur silent readers comment 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
That was indeed a beautiful scene...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anika!🤗
You are back with your amazing stories😃
I loved this OS, for many different reasons dear!
First of all all of the emotions were penned down perfectly, creating a beautiful image in the reader's mind👏
My favourite scene is probably when Anika realizes his love for her❤️
Overall it is another masterpiece👍🏼
Do write another story soon dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it!
i love your OSs and read all of them. i just stopped being silent after u asked allah to nasht my computer 😆

and decided to comment, u write very well dear! keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Superb...
Loved the way Anika comforted him...it was a os filled with so much care and affection..
Nyc one..
Love Sharmi

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