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Another update is ready. Okay I decided to keep my two stories (Bol Do Na Zara and Humnava) on a hold, this story has five parts to end, so from now I will give you regular update and after finishing it, I will continue the others.

Here you enjoy the next update.

Chapter 28

"RK..? Where are you taking me now? What will ma, malik think about us.. Why didn't you let me go with them? What's going on in your mind?" Madhu was continuously asking million of questions but RK decided to not reply her, he concentrate on his driving, "RK.. I am asking you something. Are you hearing me?" She slightly shook his arm when getting irritated RK parked the car aside and looked at her saying, "Sshh.. Biwi.. You talk a lot." "You aren't giving me any reply." She said annoyed. RK sighed, "We are going for a long drive." Madhu looked at him and was going to say something but RK said, "I took permission from your maa so relax. Please." "RK.. From tomorrow the wedding rituals will start and.." "Yes. That's why. I took you here." He looked straight saying, "Maa told me after mehendi ceremony which means from next day we can't see each other. We will meet on the wedding day and you know how much it will hard for me to keep myself away from you.. So I decided to spend this night with you and.." He leaned on her slightly and whispered, "And will make every moment special.." Madhu looked down shyly. "Now if you get your answers, then let me drive." She shyly nodded.

RK halted the car when Madhu looked at her left side, "RK.. Where we came?" RK didn't say anything, he gets down from car and walked to her side, RK opened the door for her, "Come..!!" he forwarded his hand for her, Madhu placed her hand smiling. They stood in front of the house, "You know Madhu.. I and Abhay bro used to come here during our holidays, we had fun here. You know.. From my room you can get a full view of the ocean. Come let's go in." He dragged her inside excitedly. "RK.. Its dark.." Her voice choked and she held his arm tightly in fear, "Don't worry biwi.. I am here only." saying this he entangled his fingers with hers and they walked inside pushing the door. "You wait here... Let me switch on the lights. And don't panic.. I am here only." RK said caressing her face and went from there, suddenly the lights turned on, and rose petals showered on her, Madhu looked around and found the decorated room his flowers and white curtains, she looked up and the petals touched her soft skin. Madhu realized RK wasn't there, she looked around when saw RK walked in smiling, he approached to her. "RK.. All these?!" "Sshh..!" He placed his finger on her lips and then bend on his knees, "Biwi.." But he stopped, "Tch.. Tch..!" He hold a bunch of red roses and said, "Miss Madhubala Malik.. I know I am not so perfect but when you came in life everything seems so perfect. I knew many girls who cares for me, who are concern for me but I never felt so special when they cared for me, but I felt so special when you took care of me, to get such treat from you I am ready to be ill for life time." Madhu gave him a glare hearing the last few words but she had the smile on her eyes, "You know when you hug me, you fit in my arms perfectly as if you are the one who made for this arms, though I was living a colorful life before but after you came it became more colorful, full HD..!!" Madhu chuckled, "The way you took care of my every single things, my parents I couldn't stop myself from loving you. You made me complete Madhu. So, I.. Rishab Kundra promise you to keep you happy forever. Will you be my life partner? Because only you have the patience, strength to handle RK." Hearing him, Madhu's eyes filled with tears, "Shed the tears later. Tell me fast, my knee is aching." Madhu chuckled amidst her tears and shook her head in yes, RK stood on his feet and hugged her tightly, "I love you Madhu." "I love you RK.." They stood in same position for sometime, RK then parted her from him and kissed on her forehead, "Thank you for coming in my life." She smiled. "Someone took my words seriously.." She said looking around, "But it's so beautiful. By the way which one is your room?" She asked excited, RK took her in the room and switched on the lights, Madhu was amazed seeing the view, she walked to the glass window and looked straight to the ocean. "Wow.. RK.. It's so beautiful." RK was staring at her joyful face when Madhu turned at him and saw him lost, she snapped her fingers, "Where you lost?" "You are admiring this view and I am admiring you. Your smile is so beautiful." He said looking at her lips, she blushed. To avoid the topic, she said, "Listen no..! I have an idea..! Why not we spend our weekend here, in this farmhouse?" She excitedly asked, RK smirked at her, "Ahaan.. Biwi getting naughty.. But not a bad idea.. You me and this beautiful place.." He said pulling her close to him. "You such a shameless.. I am talking about the family." "Even I am talking about the same. See after wedding, I will be your family." Madhu placed both her hands on his shoulder, "Yes. That's true but include ma and papa also, I am talking about everyone." "Biwi don't you think it will look weird to see them romancing. I mean they enjoyed their days when they were young but now let them give some space to his son." He said smirking, Madhu playfully hit him saying, "Shut up RK." "What shut up? Every weekend only we both will come here. See..! The entire week will going to be hectic for both of us right? We will not get much time for each other, so at the end of the day, I want you to be in my side.. In my arms. And that's final." He said showing authority on her. "Okay.. We will see.." She shook her head. "No. Promise me.." "Okay baba.. Promise." RK smiled and they shared an intense eye lock, RK placed a soft kiss on her forehead and looked down at the luscious lips, he tightened his grip on her bare waist and pulled her towards him slightly, Madhu looked into his eyes, she could feel the desire in his eyes, RK slowly decreased the distance between their lips when Madhu got nervous, she could feel the goosebumps inside her stomach, "RK.. R..K.. We.. We are.. Getting.. Late..!" She whispered but he didn't bother to reply her, he was inches apart from her lips when Madhu closed her eyes and tightened her grip on his shoulder, he looked at her face and about to kiss her when suddenly the lights turned off, Madhu immediately opened her eyes and RK too free her, she looked at Rk's frustrated face, she laughed and was going to leave from there when she felt a pull on her dupatta, she turned at RK when he showed his wrist to her where the edge of her dupatta stuck in his watch, Madhu sighed, RK smirked and play the music in his phone. Madhu walked to him and untied her dupatta and was going to leave when RK held her hand,

Pyar manga hai tumhi se..
Mujhe pyar karo..
Aaj abhi zidd maano meri..
Na intezaar karo..

Madhu didn't turned at him, she could feel his intense gaze on her when RK twirled her and she landed on his chest, RK removed her hair strand from her face and kissed on her cheek, he could feel her heavy breath.

Main bhi dil ki sun raha hoon..
Tum bhi dil ki suno..
Pyar manga hai tumhi se..
Mujhe pyar karo..

Madhu turned around shyly when RK pulled her placing his hand on her stomach, they moved their bodies with the music. Madhu turned at him and hold him around his neck, RK placed his hands on her bare waist.

Tujhe paane ka junoon iss qadar hai..

Madhu tip toed on her feet and kissed on his forehead and on his eyes.

Tere khwaabon se bhari ye nazar hai..

RK opened his eyes and they shared an eye lock. He slightly pulled her close.

Zara dheere se mere paas aao..
Tumhe kitna pyaar hai ye batao..

He turned her around and pinned her to the wall and blocked either side. He trailed his finger from her arm to wrist and entangled their fingers. Madhu looked sideways, he kissed on her earlobe.

Pucho naa bas dil de do..
Mujhe pyaar karo..

She shyly pushed him and and going to leave but RK held her hand, but she shyly free herself and walked to other side of the room.


Pyaar manga hai tumhi se..
Naa inkaar karo..
Aaj abhi zidd maano meri..
Naa intezar karo..

This time RK didn't bother to stop her, he looked outside through the glass window when Madhu turned at him and saw him standing there, she walked to him and back hugged him, RK smiled but free her hand and going to leave when she stopped him and made him turn at her, she rested her head on his chest and placed a kiss there. He wrapped his arms smiling.

Tu hai neele aasmaan ka musafir..
Chala aaya taaro se meri khatir..
Teri baahon mein ajab sa ik sukoon hai..
Mujhe jaana ab kahi aur kyun hai..

RK parted from her and cupped her face lovingly, he kissed on her forehead, she shyly smiled giving him the authority on her. RK scooped her in his arms and walked to the bed, he gently placed her on the bed and slept beside her.

Tum meri bas meri ho..
Mujhe pyaar karo..

Madhu wrapped her arms around his neck and closed her eyes, RK looked at her beautiful face and called her, "Madhu..!" "I trust you Rishab." She said with closing eyes, RK slowly cupped her face and sealed his lips with hers.

Pyaar manga hai tumhi se..
Mujhe pyaar karo..
Aaj abhi zidd maano meri..
Naa intezar karo..

Soon the soft kiss turned into passionate one, they explore each other and the room filled with moans and groans.

Mujhe pyar karo naa intezar karo..
Mujhe pyar karo naa inkar karo..
Mujhe pyar karo naa intezar karo..

Next morning, the sun rays peeped through the curtain and fall on RK and he stirred and buried his face in her crook of the neck. Feeling the movement, Madhu slowly opened her eyes and saw his side, he was sleeping so peacefully, he was sleeping on his stomach, his one arm was protectively wrapping around her stomach, Madhu smiled seeing him and set his ruffle hair, with it, RK opened his eyes, "Good morning.." he whispered. She smiled. "You okay?" He asked worried when Madhu shyly nodded her head. RK pecked on her lips, "I love you biwi." "I love you too RK." "Let's take a ride of second one. What say?" He winked at her smirking. "Shut up RK.. We are getting late. What will everyone think? Get up." She tried to get up when RK said pulling her back, "No one will think anything." and he again slammed his lips.

Madhu walked in Malik house, avoiding everyone's gaze, she was going up to the room when Padmini stopped her saying, "Madhu.. Why you took so long? Look its almost 11 am. Today is your mehendi.. We need to go to Kundra house." "Yes maa.. I remember.. Let me freshen up first." She said looking down and ran to her room. Madhu closed the door behind her and walked to the mirror, she looked herself on the mirror and saw her swallow lips and remembered the beautiful night with a smile.

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That's it. Okay.. Though they did it, but I will try to show more romantic scene on their first night. I hope you like it, o an not good writing such stuffs but I tried, I just tried to show the scenes according to the song lyrics. The song is amazing, so I couldn't stop myself from adding this one here.

Waiting for your likes and comments. Thank you.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!! Amazing Rishbala filled the void they are going to feel in the celebration by spending time in the farmhouse. It was so cute and romantic! Haha RK indeed made good use of the time.
Madhu is so shy...hehe...finally she gave in. 2 Rounds?!!😳 Their farmhouse overlooking the Sea is spectacular!
Thank God Padmini is not aware of their adventure...atleast pretends to be. Madhu lowered her face to not show her love bites 😆

Good decision...complete this story and continue Bol Do Na Zara and Humnava. Still try to post Bol Do Na Zara soon...
Thanks for PM 😃
Edited by vishuv - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
romantic update...
proposal part is so cute..
amazing part..
waiting for next update..
thanks for pm
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nyc update waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Super update.Rk propose madhu.That part is very nice.
U have written the romance of Rk & Madhu very neatly.I like ur way of writing.Madhu's shyness is cute.
I am waiting for ur update.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update, loved every bit of it.
RK is very naughty and he loves Madhu a lot, loved the way he proposed her, loved their romantic moments, beautifully penned down.
waiting for the next update, continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update,
loved the way he proposed madhu and loved rishbala romantic moments,
thanks for the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
recent release song... I love it.. And the way u put it on rishbala.. Perfect.. Total romantic update with rk's lushy dialogues..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

romantic update...
proposal part is so cute..
amazing part..
waiting for next update..
thanks for pm

Thank u dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Loving it

Proposal was lovely

Thank u dear

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