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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi frnds m new here..

I wanted to write something on kasam so here it is hope u like

There is some emotional dialogue like ekta mam



Dosra JanamHi frnds m new here..

I wanted to write something on kasam so here it is hope u like

There is some emotional dialogue like ekta mam



Dosra Janam

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Rano told everyone that today in Mandir is poja...
Rishi also there...
Pundit check Rishi kundli nd said
"Tera dosh phir se shuru ho gya tjy jald e shadi karni ho gi"


Rano: phly to tanu ne bchaya tha r mere bete ki zindagi barbad kr gai ab kon bachay ga???


R: maa just stop it... ma ab in baton ko nai manta... wsy b Jan to ja chuki ha ab b to Mar e Chuka hun..

Rishi gets angry nd told everyone to leave..

Rano:ab kya ho ga mere puter ka??
Everyone started to leave


Pandit shout
"Wo he bachay gi jis ne pehly bchaya"
...



All stop shocked nd turn

Rishi goes to pandit nd shouts
"Mar chuki ha wo
Tor di us ne apni kasam... Tor di

Pundit said:
"Wo ay gi jo tere dil may hai"
Rano"ap kya keh ray Han kch ni smjh a raha hmy kon ay gi??
Pandit:
"Usi se tere shadi ho gi"

Rishi shout:
"Ma ab in baton ko nai manta... ni manta ma suna ap ne... ab ma kisi ki baton may ni ao ga "

"Jis se janam Janam ki kasam khai wo to ab rahi ni... Tor gai sari kasam apni" ... us ki kasam adhuri us ka pyar b adhura sab kuch jhot tha"



Pundit said
"Karny pori apni adhuri kasam...

... lea ha us ne phir se janam"
Jo chot tere ley ha wo usy lene pary gi..

All shocked

Rishi " Mr gai wo"

Pundit said
"Tm dno ka jora Kali Mata ne bnaya h.

Is Janam
Us Janam
Har Janam

Tm dno eik dsry k ley ho... tmhari shadi b usi se ho gi jis se pehly hoi... tmhary bhag may 2 shadiyan ha pr eik e larki se...
Ye rishta Janam janam ka h jo b chahy kr ly koi tm dno ko juda ni kr skta...

...
..
Tm dno ka wjod eik ha... dil b eik ha...
Jo kahani pehly Is Janam se us Janam ki th.
Ab us janam se is janam ki ha...
Apni adhuri kasam k ley wo apni mout se lar ai...
A gai ha wo wapis..

Rishi shocked to hear this
He thought
Kya waqai tm a gai ho tm tanu???? Par kaha ho Pllzzz lout ao na tm?

.

???? Par kaha ho Pllzzz mere pas a jao...

He shouting
"Mere tanu zinda h wo a he gai us ne apni ksam pori ki... "

Everyone shocked
Rano:ye namumkin ka ads kesy ho skta h?

Pandit:
pyar ki taqat nai dekhi tm ne shayad?


..
.. the end
.. sory for mistakes

Hope u like nd leave your comments plzz
I u want I also can continue otherwise this is end be happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A warm welcome to the forum
Very interesting prelude to the OS. I liked it - please continue.

Look forward to reading more of your short stories, comments, and posts.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for os..continue it if possible...

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