~SvetKaraOS~ Nafrat Pass Aane Naa De Mohobbat Durr Jane Na De ~

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just a small try...well guess what i should not write any new thing but cant help myself... story is about one person's POV, once you start to read it you will come to know whose POV is this 😆😆anyways have fun let me know the views



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"you know all the ways to come inside the O-Mansion right??? now i will show you the way out".

i was looking at him... he has changed... he has changed alott...his eyes used to show his nature Soft... tender... caring... but now nothing but Hatred and emptiness... i did not realize when he started dragging me from the living room.

slight smile adorned on my face as he still handled me with firm and caring grip... i saw the way to go out was not this... he was right i know every corner of this house where is he taking me...???

within a moment i was pushed in a room... i looked around and guessed it was his... i wanted to touch the photo but the certain Oberoi wont allow me... he pulled me on him...in such a force that i couldn't maintain a distance between us... i can feel his taut body under my soft one... i looked into his eyes... and i saw PAIN... i need to do this... i need to finish this once for all... i cant see my Om like this... i smirked and i started touching him while i said "Miss me,KARA"

he pushed me away from him like i am a dirt... yess i know i deserved it... but i cant help but to feel hurt.. i lost the balance and felt down... my ankle got hurt... he pulled me up and pushed me against the wall... i am hurt, i am in pain but i cant tell him... i cant let him know...

until he blurted out "i cant hate you... why... " his lips were so close to mine... just a slight movement and we would have been kissing... i maintained the distance and allowed him to vent up all the anger..."why... you found my dad only among all the people...i loved you Lana..." i closed my eyes hearing my name from his mouth... so blissful... but opened my eyes next moment when he said "you had fun with so many man then why just my dad you chose at the end..."

i pushed him hard he stumbled back with two steps i moved forward and raise my hand to slap him for thinking so cheap... but he held my hand tight he moved me around and held me in his arms in a back hug... he whispered in my ears "i wont get slapped by a WH*** like you" i started squirming in his arms but his hold tightened and became painful "STAY STILL" he was not my KARA.. my KARA was never like this but how come he change so much... he is true like an OBEROI... he is turning out to be like his father... the thought of his father made her shiver in his arms... "I SAID STAY STILL" and with that i became numb...

he moved my hairs and put them on one side... he started moving down onto my neck... i could feel the hesitance and control within him... i cant let him do this... i cant... gathering all my courage i freed myself... but he was fast he grabbed my chin in tight grip... my thoughts were running like a horse... tears gathered around my eyes but i refused to show him... THIS IS MY FIGHT against the BAD IN MY LIFE...

"OMKARA"

i shivered with this sound... i know damage is done... "looks like my dad cant stay away from you..." and then he pulled me into the bathroom...as soon as he realized his dad went away he started hand shower. with that he started pouring water on me... i did not understand the meaning of his this step... water started hurting my ankle more... the bruises which he made on my skin started burning too... i allowed my tears to flow hoping he wont notice with this much amount of water...

he stopped the water... and pulled me out... "you know Lana, to forget your betrayal i started taking drugs..." WHAT! how come i dont know... "Drugs were my life until my brothers helped me... you destroyed me Lana..." if i say i was shocked will be an understatement "OM" cupped his face "i did not know it will become like this..." i wanted to say the truth...i wanted to tell him all the things "OUT" but he did not allowed me... "i washed away my presence from you... i prepared you for my father" tears started coming out in front of him i know there wont be any effect on him... "OM please... hear me out..."

"i thought you supposed to throw her out OMKARA"

i lost the battle... i dont know if i will be able to face him again with so much confidence...

"i was just showing her, her place dad..."

i looked at him for the last time probably... Tej grabbed my hand and started pulling me out... i heard the glass braking noise from his room... i started removing myself from the grip of the man whom i hate most... but the threat he gave me next "ONE CALL AND YOU ARE FINISHED SVETLANA" i started going behind him like a puppet...

Tez threw me on the ground...i couldn't hold myself and moaned with pain... "YOU BI%^& how dare you...i asked you to stay away from him... how dare you..." i stood up with great difficulty and said "you told me you will handle him how come he is taking drugs..." sudden slap made my hand go onto my cheek... "You broke the deal Svetlana... and about the drugs... i gave him... i thought to make him strong but that fool became addicted... but it was better than having a low class girlfriend... "

anger bubbled up in my body "i am going to tell him everything...i will never forgive you TEZ... first you drove a car that day... drunk and my parents were in the hospital... you took advantage of me being Om's girlfriend... you started blackmailing me and when i left him you kept me by your side to flaunt me in front him...rubbing it on his face...and."

he started laughing... "and you think he will believe you... he thinks you sleep with me... you are a wh@#$... but i made sure to make your life miserable enough not to look around... as for the punishment... i already asked the hospital authority to ask money from you... i think your work is done here... GO AWAY NEVER SHOW YOUR FACE TO US..." as i looked him going into the mansion my phone started ringing "hello..." i started crying as i felt down on my knees... he did it... he did move my parents from VIP to general ward... they were asking money...how can i manage this much again...

i felt the hands go around my shoulder... i looked at the person and whispered "KARA"

Omkara's Monologue

As soon as dad took Lana, I realized "I HATE HER" and I threw my sculpture on the mirror but I looked down found something as I went near that found out to be blood... then I recalled what happened and I closed my eyes in realization though I am angry I have no rights to hurt her... I went behind them to check and I heard moan... I though they are romancing without even a look I started going from there but my steps faltered as I heard dad's voice "HOW DARE YOU BI@#$" and rest what I hear... wanted myself to kill again... I couldn't believe MY LANA was innocent till now... how will I face her... I saw her breaking down...I ran to her and I hear her calling me lovingly "Kara" I made her stand and looked at her hurt ankle... took her in my arms and went away in my car... I need to take her to the safe place... MY LANA...




THE END


let me know the views... appreciation is welcome... criticism is also welcome only if they are limited about my writing... did not proof read so there are chances of spelling and gramatical mistakes you may find... also the loopholes... so jo hai utna hi padho 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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seems like u r da biggest svetlana fan😉😉dif it was😆😆
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Originally posted by: SRKian

seems like u r da biggest svetlana fan😉😉dif it was😆😆

lol yeah... i am a girl but cant help to say SHE IS HAWT 😆
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Girl you are such an amazing writer👏
I could feel Svetlana's emotions.
You have just penned it down in a beautiful way❤️
Do write another story soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby

lol yeah... i am a girl but cant help to say SHE IS HAWT 😆

same here😉😉she is da hawtest of all😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is great i am going to read this again😎
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🤣

it was on the first page of the forum

couldn't resist
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Woah!! I think my brain just exploded with that sizzling chemistry!
Iss saal ki favourite jodi toh lagta hai SvetKara ko hi milne wala hai!
This was brilliantly written! Do continue if possible! 😳
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Girl!! you need to continue this
it was awesome

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