POTW: I’m in love but not with you - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Roses are red violets are blue.
I'm in love but not with you.
Why didn't you tell me from the start.
Instead of going around breaking my heart.
You told your friends how you made me cry.
Why I told your girlfriend how you full of lies.
Yeah you can go around saying how you played me.
But what goes around comes around boy you'll see.
Yes I got a new boyfriend and he's nothing like you.
And yes I'm in love but not with you.

What do you think about the poem and what message do you think is coming across?

i think the one who wrote is madly in love with the guy

whom she is claming she don"t love .she so much care bout the one .guy must have left her in pain must have made fun of her n she is so much hurt she hates the most that everything she done is just forgotten .she hates that how can he become so selfish.One whom she trust one whom she always turn betrayed her n gave her life time pain.thats what she is thinkin

What do you think was roaming around in the poet's mind when she wrote the poem?

Pain,hurt,tears,brokenpromises

The author it seems have been hurted and cheated and has moved on.. But do you think she has really moved on?

no she has not.she still cares bout the guy and she still hope

he will come back n give her smile back to her

Have you ever been hurted or cheated and if yes then how did you feel?

No comments let that secreat remain in my heart

Any other comments?

well love is all bout givin n don"t let jelousy come between

u n your partner n do display your love

n keep that special reletionship close to your heart