Ishra ss-meri mannat tu#2,pt 12 on pg 129 updt on Nov 23 - Page 3

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Many many congratulations on the new thread!!!🥳👏
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Author's note- I wasn't about to updt this one but had to coz someone told me to updt whom I can't deny and she is none other then my di,Pooja di.she rarely ask for any updt,so I am here to oblige it .

PART 6

Appa take a leave and went to his car only to see ishita sleeping in the car.he can see some dried tears in the corner of her eyes.he wiped it and she snuggle closer to appa.he smiled and caressed her face lovingly and pecked her forehead.after that he started the ignition and went towards their mansion.all the way he was thinking why she cried.

On the other hand,toshiji went to Raman's room only to find him sleeping.she can see tears in the corner of his eyes.she wiped his tears and kissed his forehead lovingly.

Toshiji- I don't know why u r not ready to let the past go.but now I think u will change.I can see the spark in ur eyes seeing that little princess.choti si gudiya,mere Raman ki gudiya.she is the one naa,who brought that smile on ur face in the afternoon.how I wish that she would bring u out of this darkness.mere bachche ke chehre ki muskaan ban jaaye woh.she said caressing his hair lovingly.

After that she went to her room and slept waiting for a new dawn.

On the other hand,appa took ishita inside scooping her in his arms.she was hugging his sketch book close to her heart.appa lay her down on her bed and was going when she hold his hand.

Appa turned to see her all smiling.

Ishita- appa,good night kissi.

Appa kissed her hair softly and said- so jao kanna.its pretty late.saying so he was going when he stop in mid and asked-why u were crying.

Ishita signalled appa to sit.he sat down and she offered the sketch book to appa.

Ishita- this made me cry appa.

Appa was confused as how a sketch book could make her cry.he open the book and start seeing at the sketches.

Ishita- appa,what does it mean.its so scary naa.my eyes filled seeing them.koi itni darawani drawing kaise bana sakta hai.she said snuggling into her appa.

Appa was stunned to see those sketches .

Appa- whose sketch book is this kanna.

Ishita- Raman's, appa.woh aisi drawing kyun banate hain.kya unhe koi problem hai appa.she asked innocently.

Seeing the sketches he can easily guess that the little boy was going through some kind of trauma but he don't want to tell that to little ishita.as he know she is too delicate to handle all this pain.even if it of someone else.

Appa caressed her hair and said- nothing kanna, may be Raman is feeling sad coz he don't have any friend.may be he want someone to be his close friend.see he has written that he is waiting for his sunshine.

Ishita- his sunshine matlab appa.unke ghar mein toh suraj ki roshani aati hogi naa.

Appa smiled and said- its not that sunshine.his sunshine means,a reason to live.a hope that can make his life better.jaise tum ho hamari sunshine.jaise tumhare aane ke baad main aur amma itne khush rehte hai.

Ishita- aap aur amma mere paida hone se pehle khush nahi the.

Appa- the but ab jyada khush hai.u have completed our family.just like that Raman too want someone to complete him.to make him feel happy and contented.

Ishita thought for some time and said- appa,main aapki aur amma ki sunshine hoon.toh mera sunshine banne ka chance khatam ho gaya hai kya.she asked innocently.

Appa smiled at her innocent question and said- no kanna,u can still bring light to someone's life.like u bring in our life.

Ishita- toh appa,shall I be Raman's sunshine.woh kitne achche hai par hamesha sad rehte hai.mujhe achcha nahi lagta.aapko pata hai appa woh haste hai toh unke gaal pe dimples bhi padhte hai. Its so cute.aapne toh dekha hi nahi hoga coz he rarely smiles.

Appa was listening to her talks.he was thinking how much concerned she is for Raman.in just few meetings he has left huge impact on her.yes its true that seeing those pics he was also disturbed and don't want ishita to be with Raman .but being a parent he can easily understood what his mother must be going through seeing her only son in so much pain and secondly its not his fault that he is going through such pain and most important, he can't ignore the pics where he is trying to end his life die to the trauma..he can't overlook and just let it be like that only.coz if in real ,raman commit suicide then how he will forgive himself.thinking all this finally appa said to ishita ,who is still waiting for his reply.

Appa- of course kanna,its a very noble cause.kisi ke chehre ki muskaan banna,kisi ki berang zindagi mein rang laana,I don't think there can be anything better then this.I want u to bring a smile on his face and I know my kanna is expert in making anyone smile.my ishu kanna is the best.he said kissing her forehead lovingly.

Ishita snuggled into him and appa pat her to sleep.he make her sleep comfortably and went to his room covering her properly with the quilt.in the way he was thinking- murugan I have given ishu liberty to be a part of Raman's life so that she can reduce some of his pain.I am doing this for good of a kid but don't let my ishu suffer in between all this .meri bachchi bahut achchi aur masoom hai.u have to protect her against all odds.

Next morning,Raman got up seeing the same nightmare ,he was sweating badly.He got and start drawing again in his sketch book ,yes he has many sketch books.after feeling lite he closed his book and went to washroom without seeing what he drawn. Toshiji who was seeing this,come inside and go to his Study table to see what he has drawn.she opened the book with shivering hands fearing what he has drawn but was relieved as well as shocked to see his drawing.he has drawn two eyes with some tears.seeing the eyes she could guess its not his but of some girl.but whose ,she was thinking and that's when she remember that ishita was having moist eyes when she was going to her car.

Toshiji- oh I think something went wrong between them and Raman made her cry and now he is feeling guilty to make her cry.its good that now he is thinking about something else then his father.thinking so she close his sketch book and went to make breakfast.

On the other hand,ishita got up late as usual and was busy in getting ready for school .she got ready and rush for her school after having her breakfast.she was going to school in her car when she saw Raman standing in a stationery shop and buying some pens .

Ishita- oh toh yeh khadoos bhi issi raste se jaatein hai.woh bhi cycle se.mujhe bhi jaana hai .she thought and stopped the car.

Driver- kya hua ishu baby.

Ishita- my friend is coming .I will go with her.u go.

Driver- but sir has instructed me to drop u at the school.sir will scold me.

Ishita- ohho I have to discuss my sums with her .u go,I will talk to appa.jaldi jao aap.she said getting out of the car.driver nodded and went from there.

Ishita made a cute puppy face and sat on the rock near the road making sure he can see her.

In the shop

Raman- give me a Reynolds pen.

Shop keeper give him.he paid the money.shopkeeper was about to return the money when Raman said- give me dairy milk with the extra money.shopkeeper look at him with shocked expression and Gabe him a dairy milk.

Raman-(st) I have talked to her so rudely yesterday. I must apologize to her.bechari meri wajah se apne birthday ke din royi.I will give her this chocolate and she will surely forgive me.meri gudiya.he thought and a smile crept on his face thinking about her.

Thinking about her he turned and was going to school lost in his thoughts ,when his eyes fell on ishita ,sitting on a rock near the road.her eyes were moist ,almost on the verge of crying. He got worried and went to her .

Raman- what happened ishita.why u r sitting here and moreover why u r crying.

Ishita- my car broke down and driver uncle went to garage but still not returned.I am getting late for school.aaj mera test hai.she said innocently.

Raman- oh,OK I am calling a cab for u.u can go by cab.he said making ishita face fell.here she was thinking to go with him on his cycle and he is sending her by cab.before she can say anything,he called a cab.ishita got up dejectedly and was about to sit in the cab,when Raman hold her hand and asked-u will be OK naa.

Ishita nodded in no.and a tear fell off her eyes.this time a real one,as she has never travel in a cab.

Ishita- mujhe darr lag raha hai.

Raman thought for a second and said- can u sit on cycle.I will take u with me.

Ishita smiled hearing this.she nodded in yes .

Raman- aap jao bhaiya.he said to the cab driver and took her to his cycle.he made her sit on the cycle in front of him.he was about to start it when she held him tight and said- main gir jaaungi.darr lag raha hai.

Raman smiled seeing her nervousness and said- I won't let u fall.trust me.

She smiled hearing his assuring words.he hold her with his one hand and start riding the bicycle with his free hand.at first she was afraid but then she started enjoying it.she was enjoying his proximity while he was also having a constant smile on his face having her near him.

On the way,

Raman- r u angry with me.

Ishita-yes, I am angry with u.u scolded me yesterday and told me that I am not allowed to touch ur belongings.aisa koi karta hai apne friend ke saath.she said making a cute face making her remember about his sketch book.

Ishita- (st) shit ishu,u forgot to bring his sketch book.agar Raman ko pata chala that I have taken his sketch book. He will never talk to me.murugan save me from this raavan Kumar .she was thinking when he said- I know I did very bad with u and I am sorry for that.see I even brought ur favourite chocolate for u to apologize.

Ishita- really ,chocolate for me .wow,OK I forgive u.where is my chocolate.

Raman- in my pant pocket.he said and she fished his pocket to get her chocolate only to make Raman shiver with her touch near his private part .his cycle got imbalanced and both were about to fall off the cycle when Raman saved her in neck of time .both got saved but his cycle was fallen breaking some of its spikes.

Raman- can't u sit properly. Dekho hum dono gir jaate toh.

Ishita - Maine kya kiya.she asked innocently eating the chocolate.

Raman look at her and thought,what to say.she don't even realise her effect on me.its my fault then her.I should stay away from her.

Raman- nothing,let's go to school.or we may get late .

Ishita nodded and start walking with him.she was having difficulty in having chocolate with bag in her hand.so she gave her bag to Raman and start walking with him.she was lost in eating chocolate and not realising that a bike was about to hit her.Raman saw it and pulled her to himself saving her from the bike.

Ishita- kya hua.she asked not knowing what's happening around.

Raman said ,kuch nahi,smiling and wounding his arms protectively around her waist while she just smile a little and was again lost in eating her chocolate.

That's all for now.enjoy and do like and comment. Will wait for it.

Ps- I am getting pathetic response in all my stories.do u all want me to discontinue all my work.


Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited...
I love pooh for asking you to update this one...
This was succha cute update...
Both Mr bhalla n toshiji want ishita to heal Raman...n get him out if his shell...
Appa n ishita's talk was just fabulous...
She's just so cute n innocent...she wants to be Raman's sunshine..
Appa says she could be...appa understands that Raman is hurting...n wants to help him...
Raman ne phir sketch kiya but this time it was ishita crying n toshiji is happy with this...
Ishita wants a bicycle ride😳...n Raman wants to apologize her so he gets her a chocolate...
They ride together Raman looses his balance coz of her but she toh is lost in her chocolate 😆
He again saved her...
Continue soon...
Pleaseee update this regularly 😳
Edited by -Nii- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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naye thread ka shubh udghatan ho gya iss pyari si update se diii 😊
thank u for updating early
both were crying for each other
i luved toshiji
how she said"""" little princess.choti
si gudiya,mere Raman ki
gudiya"""" 😳
appa ishu talk cute one
sunshine toh roj aati hogi naa
she is such a innocent soul
awww so ishu wants to become her raman's sunshine not bad babyyy
appa is worried for ishu if she get hurt in all dis but i didnt understand how ishu will be hurt in all this????? 😲
but thank god appa man gye
ek bar toh mujhe lga appa ishu ko dantenge!!

raman ko phir nightmare aaya ??
but one thing is good now he didnt think bout his papa now his world is ishu
ishuuu... naughty girl she wants to go wid raman driver ko bhaga diya n sum discuss krne h 😳 😆

raman ne ishu ko cab se chale jano ko kha but ishu iwas scared ek bar mujhe lga kuch galat hone wala h but nxt moment raman ask her to come wid him if she wants howww cute 😳
now ishra ki pehli CYCLE ride
chocolate k karan kya kya ho gya????😳

raman save ishu from bike n she doesnt even know wat was bout to happen kyunki raman jo h uske sath she is lost in her chocolate lol

so xcited bout dat scene wen raman will came to know ishu ke pas uski drawing h
gussa hoga woo...

update sooonnn di nxt part
Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ishita is soo cute and her talk with appa was really soo sweet she wants to become sunshine in raman's life huh and also Raman was feeling guilty to make her cry on her bday and wanted to give her a choclate ishita yaar itni nautanki kar Rahi hein 🤣 so finally she sat on his cycle and both were gng to Scul on his bicycle and without knowing ishita is making things diff for Raman Bechara yaar and their walk it was soo cute lovely update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm update
Appa knew ishita cried..ishita shared that sketch book appa ws shocked bt agrred for ishita to b part of raman's life
Raman ws thinking abt ishita toshiji ws relieved
Chalu ishita ..she played well to go with him on cycle...
She affected him n didnt even know..such innocent she is..raman is always there to protect her
Waiting for next
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Awesome update di
Appa is very sensible and concerned also at the same time
Ishra were adorable...loved their talks
Ishita wants to be his sunshine...how sweet
Loved it
Continue soon

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