Ishra ss-khinche mujhe koi dor teri ore,pt 6 on pg 113 updt on Sept 5 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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get well soon
interesting
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Raman toh cutie lagta hai
Ishu memory loss or faking...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
RKB abnormal hai kya is story me?
i doubt abt it..

ishu lost her memory😲
why she was running?
so much confusion nd questions..
update soon..
want to knw more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting bur confusing prologue di

raman is of small age
or is he abnormal

why is he caling driver as uncle

and there is threat to ishita's life
did she forget her past
or is she acting
???????????

thanks for pm di
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS for new story di

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Posted: 9 years ago
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you have written this story for me naa

THANK YOU SO MUCH di

I LOVE YOU


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Posted: 9 years ago
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All though I didn't get 150+ likes but still I am updating this one so soon coz many asked for its updt.and moreover noone understood the story,so here I am with its part 1,hope u all enjoy it and leave long comments along with lots of likes.here it goes.

PART 1

Raman- my name is Raman bhalla and urs.

Girl- ishita,ishita??she stress on her mind to get her full name but all she remember was just ishita.

Raman- wow,lovely name.tell me ur address ,I will tell driver uncle to drop u home. Ur parents must be worried for u.

Ishita- yes my address,my address,my address. What is my address.I don't remember anything.what is my address and where is my house.I don't rember anything.she said panicking and before anyone can ask her anything else she fainted.

Raman was about to go closer to her when mrs bhalla said- Raman,I will look after it .u go to ur room.

Raman- but chachi.she got hurt due to me.I was troubling driver uncle.so I should look after her naa.he said innocently.

Mrs bhalla- Raman puttar,go to ur room.she said gritting her teeth making him shiver in fear.he nodded and went to his room silently.

Mrs bhalla look at his son param and said- param put her in our car and come withe.

Nidhi- but mom ji what u want to do.iss ladki ka kya karna hai.

Mrs bhalla- she is the solution of our every problem.agar iss ladki ki yaaddasht sach mein chali gayi hai toh yeh hamare bahut kaam aa sakti hai.

Param- how mom.

Mrs bhalla- I will tell u in the way.first put her in the car and come with me.saying so she went.param took Ishita in his arms and went to the car.Raman was watching all this from his room and said to himself- where they r taking her.bechari ko chot lagi hai aur yeh log usse pata nahi kahan le jaare rahe hai.bhagwaan ji please take care of her.

After two hours,

Mrs bhalla, param and nidhi was waiting anxiously for the doctor to come and confirm that she had actually lost her memory.they saw him coming.they ran to him.

Mrs bhalla- what happened,is she really lost her memory.

Doc- yes I checked her thoroughly. She had some major injuries in her brain and because of which she had lost her memory.

Param- but she told her name ,then how can she loose her memory.

Doc- I think someone was calling her name at the time of accident.that's why she had last memory of her name.she had forgotten everything else other then her name.

Mrs bhalla- everything matlab.

Doc- matlab who she is,where is her house.who r her relatives.who r u people.she dont remember anything.even how much qualified she is.she don't remember anything.

Mrs bhalla-and what r the chances to get her memory back.

Doc- it depends,I mean ,if u people will keep her in a known atmosphere. Matlab kahan uske pehchan ke log ho toh usse jaldi yaad aayega sab kuch.

Mrs bhalla- and if she live with unknown people then.

Doc- then chances r very less to get her memory back.

Mrs bhalla- and after how much time she will gain her conscious back.

Doc- I have given her injection.she will be fine in three hours .

Mrs bhalla- thank u doc.and u know naa,u don't have to tell anything about her to anyone.she said giving him a bundle of note.

Doc smirked and said- of course.I know my job.

Mrs bhalla- param,put her back in the car and take her to the mansion.

Param- OK mom.

Soon they were back to their mansion.

Mrs bhalla- nidhi,get her ready as a bride and click some pic of her.and param u search pic of Raman from ur wedding album and merge the pic as if it look like their marriage pic.

Nidhi- but momji she is sleeping ,her eyes will be closed naa.

Mrs bhalla- her eyes will be taken care off.just clean her face,apply some makeup and a dupatta will be.click her pics and merge her pic with Raman's pic.make a wedding pic collage so that I can make her believe that she is Raman's wife.

Param- what's going on in ur mind mom.

Mrs bhalla smirked and said- this girl is our treasure param.the huge property for which we r here.we will get it through her only.

Nidhi- I don't get anything mom ji.what u want to do by making her Raman's wife.isse hamara kya faida hoga.

Mrs bhalla- faida hi faida hoga.just wait and watch.yeh woh chaabhi banegi joh iss pachaas hazaar crore ke khajane ka darwaja kholegi.just do as I say.

Nidhi- but will she accept Raman as her husband. After all he is,

Mrs bhalla- that's my look out.u just go and do as I say .I don't want any mistake.till then I am going to Raman.I have to make him believe that this girl is his wife.

Param- OK mom.

Soon Mrs bhalla was in front of Raman's room.she composed herself and went inside.he was sleeping hugging his teddy tight.she went near him and sat beside him.

Mrs bhalla-(st)how I wish to kill u.but I have to do all this just because of ur worthless father and his bloody will.if he hasn't made just will then I won't have to do all this rubbish.but never mind,I will kill u both soon.just u both have to fulfill my wish.phir tum bhi azaad aur main bhi.she smirked and caressed Raman's hair.

He got up feeling her touch and said- chachi,aap yahan.

Mrs bhalla- yes ,puttar.I came here to tell u something .

Raman hugged his teddy tight and move beside scared of her and asked meekly- what chachi.

Mrs bhalla-that girl,what's her name.

Raman said meekly- ish,Ishita.

Mrs bhalla- yes,ishita.woh tumhari biwi hai .

Raman- biwi??biwi kya hota hai chachi.

Mrs bhalla- biwi matlab tumhari friend.agar woh tumse puchegi ki tumhari uske saath shaadi hui hai jaise param aur nidhi ki hui thi.toh tum kahoge haan hui hai.kya kahoge.

Raman- par meri toh nahi hui shaadi usse.

Mrs bhalla- joh kehne ko kaha hai sahi kehna warna tum anjaam jaante ho naa.she said scaring him to bits.

Raman- ji main haan kahunga.

Mrs bhalla- good and one more thing,don't ever try to tell her what we do with u.warna hum uske saath bhi wahin karenge.

Raman- no no don't do anything to her.I will not say anything to her.he said hugging his teddy tight.

Mrs bhalla caressed his cheek softly,Raman closed his eyes scared.

Mrs bhalla- good Raman.u have to tell ur wife that we love u and her so much.yahin kahoge naa.

Raman nodded in yes.

Mrs bhalla- good,bhookh lagi hai.

Raman nodded in yes.

Mrs bhalla- chocolate milkshake piyoge.

Raman nodded in yes.

Mrs bhalla- bhejwati hoon.but remember naa.what u have to tell her.

Raman again nodded scared of her.she smirked devilishly and went out of the room.

Raman fell on the bed crying- maa papa mujhe chod kar kyun chale gaye aap log.chachi bilkul achchi nahi hai.he was crying bitterly hugging his teddy tight.

Mrs bhalla went downstairs and saw big pictures of ishra in wedding attire.

Mrs bhalla- very good.now hand these pics all over the mansion and yes make an album too.nidhi u have to be with her and make her believe that she is Raman's wife.OK.

Nidhi- ji mom ji .she said flipping her pallu.

Mrs bhalla- don't try to act over smart.just stick to ur work.I don't need any mistake.samjhi tum.

Nidhi- ji mom ji.

Mrs bhalla- uss ladki ko hosh aaya.

Nidhi- not yet.

Mrs bhalla- OK then let's go to her and wait for her to wake up.

Param and nidhi nodded and all went to ishita.she was laying unconscious wearing a yellow saree with a bandage on her head.

All start waiting for her to get up.after some time ishita open her eyes with a heavy head.she hold her head feeling immense pain.seeing her woke up Mrs bhalla hugged her tight and start flowing fake tears.

Mrs bhalla- how r u ishita puttar.hum toh darr hi gaye the.

Ishita- who r u.and why u r hugging me like this.

Mrs bhalla- what r u saying ishita puttar.I am ur mother in law.matlab not proper one.I am ur husband's aunt toh saas hi hui naa puttar.

Ishita- saas,pati.yeh sab kya hai.mujhe toh kuch bhi yaad nahi.she said holding her head.

Mrs bhalla- what u don't remember us.yeh matarani yeh kya lar diya tune.abhi dus din hi hue the inn dono ki shaadi ko aur tumne yeh kya kar diya meri bachchi ke saath. She said faking tears.nidhi and param too started crying.

Nidhi- bhabhi u don't remember me.I am nidhi,aapki pyari nidhi.she said making innocent face.

Ishita- I don't remember anything.aap log jhooth bol rahe hai.let me go .koi nahi hai aap mere.saying so she was running out of the room when she stopped in mid seeing her pictures with Raman.they were very close to each other holding varmala in their hands.their hand was entwined in each others and they were smiling (all pics were tempered).

Ishita- what is this.

Mrs bhalla- this is the reality puttar.u and Raman got married ten days ago.u guys where going for ur honeymoon when this accident happened.u lost ur memory and Raman lost,

Ishita turn to Mrs bhalla and asked- what Raman lost.she asked fearing the worst.she started to believe her story seeing the pics.

Mrs bhalla- no he didn't loose his life.he is all fine but ,

Ishita- but what.

Mrs bhalla hold her hand and took her to Raman's room.he was busy in playing with his big teddy.

Raman- tumhe secret bataun.aaj meri biwi aane wali hai.joh meri best friend bhi hogi.woh bilkul maa kaisi hogi.mujhe bahut saara pyaar karegi.jaise tum karte ho.he said in his teddy's ear and start smiling.

Ishita look at him shockingly and turn to Mrs bhalla.

Ishita- yeh toh pagal hai.

Mrs bhalla- aisa mat bol puttar.he is ur husband and just lost his mental balance in the accident.

Ishita was shocked beyond words and look at Raman ,while he was busy in playing with his toys.

Ek heer thi aur tha ek raanjhan,
Kehte hai mere gaon mein,
Sacha ho dil to,
Sau mushkilen ho,
Jhukta naseeba pao mein,

Ho ho
Aanchal tera rabba,
Falak ban gaya hai,
Ab iska nahi, koi ore, koi chore..
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..


That's all for now.so here is the first part,hope many questions r answered, so enjoy and do tell me that whether I should continue with it or just leave this one.will wait for ur responses. Give lots of comment and likes to get an early update.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
ress...

me first
yippee😃

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unresss...
excellent update

poor ishra

ishita lost her memory
and raman is mentally imbalanced

and an evil step mom
who is behind his property

they created the proofs like that
as if ishra are married
ishita too came into their words

poor raman
he is scared of his step mom

i am waiting for ishita making him normal back
and standing for raman

thanks for pm di
please update soon
Edited by divyaruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Oh god yeh kya tha??? Ishita lost her memory and Raman is mentally imbalanced?? And Mrs Bhalla using this as an opportunity to claim raman's property and to kill them after dat Bechara Raman ko kitna Dara Rahi thi and Nidhi she was damn funny ji mom Ji 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh mmyyy gggooddd...!!!! 😲
totallly different main toh koi dusri duniya mein thi is story ko lekar diii
but much more beautiful story as compare to my imagination
raman is not okkk my baby feeling bad for him
arghhh this mrs bhalla nidhi n param #@#@@@
but wait i luv mrs bhalla for one thing n dat is ishra married
her chotu mind thought in dis way she can do watever she wants
but we all know d results of dis
n in last fayda toh ishra ka hi hoga

how mrs bhalla was scaring raman my goddd
one min she was saying dont tell her wat we do wid him otherwise she will do dat wid her also
aisa kya krti h ye ???????

i didnt like ishu saying ye toh pagal h

raman cring he is hell scared of his so called chachi
raman dont woory now ur ishu aagyi na ab wo tumhari bst friend n bhot sara pyar kregi okkk

raman is happy ki uski wife aarhi inshort friend

really xcited for nxt update diii plzzz update spooonnnm

luving dis ss so much
n plz dont discontinued it plzzz
Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago

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