Badle Ki Aag - A RaMini TS (Collab With Priyam)

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Hey folks! 🤗
Missing Ramini off late? (Although Priyam never allows us to miss them, through her fab OSs)😆
Then you won't anymore coz Priyam and I present to you a brand new Ramini TS 😉

*Drumrolls*
With bated breath, get ready to read this adventure!🥳


Author's Note :
It's always an extreme pleasure to Collab with you, my Jaan! You're so talented that I learn so much from your writings. Your humour is really very good! Hoping to do many such works in the future too. Cheers!🤗




B A D L E
K I A A G - R A M I N I B H A R A T





Naa Makke di roti, naa sarson da saag

Yeh hain mere dil mein dhadhakti, Badle ki aag


"Samajhti kya hain bhaisahab apne aap ko? Mere sone se bhole puttar ko kahan phasa diya! Par ab main bhi chup nahi rahoongi. Kamini noon main, Kamini!!!", she thundered while pacing her room.


"Ohho! Kya hua ab!", she got irritated as Vandy collided with her.


"Mummyji, aap kuch soch rahin hain kya?"

"Beta, ab kisiko toh sochna padega naa!"

"Aap Shravan aur Suman ke baare mein baat kar rahi hain?"

"Haan ji puttarji"

"Toh phir kuch jaldi kijiye mummyji, kyunki woh Adi Suman ko propose karne waala hain!!"

"Kya, yeh kya bol rahi hain? Aur kisine bola aisa?"


...And Vandy narrated what she'd heard from Aditya.



"Batao bhala ae bhi koi gal hui? Hamara munda kabse line me khada hai aur koi aur ek jhatke me ake kudi uda ke le jaye. Kuch bhi ainvayi. Agar Suman ki shadi Aditya se ho gayi to Bhaisaaab Shravan ke liye wo Singhania's ki beti le ayenge. Ye main kabhi nhi hone dungi." Said Kamini.😈



...



" Wah ji wah ye to badi changi bat batayi tune Vandy puttar. Suman ka rishta Aditya se." Kamini made sure her voice was loud enough to be noticed by Shravan.😉


Shravan smirked and coughed on hearing that. The last night's hug had made him so confident now that he could foresee a defeated Adi in front of an angry Sumo if he dated to propose. He knew his Sumo would outright refuse him.😆


Status toh dekho aur iske sapne mote mote

Yeh kya shaadi karega jiske, Naam bade aur darshan chote 🤣


As for now, he was only waiting for Adi toh fall off his feet. But he knew overconfidence was dangerous, so he grabbed his car keys and set off to Tiwari Killa.


"Sumo, its time for some enlightenment", he thought.😛


"Adi se door rahoon? Kyun? Woh to Pushkar ka dost hai😕", said an innocent Sumo. But Shravan got his reply.


Shravan marked the words, 'Pushkar Ka Dost'. He felt satisfied now. With a soft goodbye, he left the Tiwari Killa, now assured that Suman was his property and Adi was clearly Trespassing it. So he deserved a rejection from her. The smirk didn't leave his face all the while he thought it...😉


Meanwhile, Kamini was trying her level best to extract plans from Ramnath. And what better a way to do this, than offering his iconic Coffee?





10:00 pm Malhotra Mansion

Kamini entered Ramnath's room and found him engrossed in a case file.
"Ahem ahem" she cleared her throat but he didnt turn.
"Bhaisaab ye lijiye apki COFFEE" she said handing him the coffee mug.
Again no response
"Ab inko kya ho gya", she thought.😕

BGM*mora piya mose bolat naahi, dwar jiya ke kholat naahi*

"Kya hua Bhaisaaab , us Suman Tiwari ne fir se kuch kiya kya?" She asked🥱


"Dukh to isi baat ka hai kamini is bar parayon ne nhi apno ne hi dhokha diya hai", he sighed to himself.

BGM*Patthar ke sanam tujhe humne mohabbat ka khuda jana*



Flashback


Ramnath headed towards kitchen but stopped when he heard Kamini talking to vandy. She was planning to unite shravan and suman. His heart broke. He didnt expect this from her. How much he had put in her and she betrayed him. Now it was time to make her pay for her betrayal.

"Kuch Nahi Kamini bas ek case me ulajha hun. Tum rakh do coffee main bad me pee lunga." He gave her a fake smile.
He didnt want to raise her suspicion so he acted normal. She left from there wondering why was Bhaisaaab behaving little weird.



Kya Hua, Tera Vadaa

Woh Kasam Woh Iraada
Bhulega Dil Jis Din Tumhe
Woh Din Zindagi Ka Aakhri Din Hoga...
Nasha ShraMan Ka Aisa Bhi Kya
Ki Tujhe Kuch Bhi Yaad Nahi...
Kya Hua... Tera Vadaa?



Ramnath tightened his fists and got up in full force. He closed his file and said
"Theek hai Kamini. Agar tum yahi chahti ho, toh Let the war begin!!"


Hai Katha Sangram Ki
ShraMan Ke Kalyaan Ki
Dharma Adharma Adi Anant
Satya Asatya Klesha Kalank
Saath Ki Katha Parmaarth Ki ...

RaMiniBharat!! RaMiniBharat!!



He gulped down the coffee and went straight to Adi.


"Beta, tumse kuch baat karni thi"
"Aree Uncle aap?! Mujhe bula liya hota, aapne bekar mein itni takleef Kyun ki? Waise bhi Dhaundna Bhaagna toh hum Bacchon ka kaam..."🤢
Ramnath rolled his eyes in frustration. Shravan wasn't wrong when he'd said this man had verbal diarrhoea. To stop he rant, Ramnath came straight to the point.


"Tum Suman se pyaar karte ho?"
*Silence*


Now that's like music to my sore ears.😆


"Par uncle aap ye..." Ramnath cut him off in midsentence.
" Haan ya na?" He asked
"Haan, par mujhe nahi pata ki Suman me bare me kya sochti hai." Adi replied😕
"Shadi karoge usse ??" He asked. Adi stared at him with mouth agape.
"SHAADI??"🤪
Ramnath scratched back of his neck. This guy was hell annoying.🤬 His mental age is 5yrs. Couldnt answer a question without throwing another.
"Haan shadi " he replied trying hard to control his anger.
"Par kaise??" Another question
"Wo sab tum mujhpe chhod do. Tum bas taiyari kro baraat leke jane ki." Ramnath replied
Adi's happiness knew no bounds.
"Ek last question. Why are you helping me?" He asked getting suspicious. No one in this world helps someone without a motive. What could it be??❓
"I have my reasons" Ramnath replied and turned to leave without giving him a second glance.





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Hope you'll like this.


Love,

Priyam and Mahi❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ah..amazing meri jaan 👏
I really love doing a collab with you 😛
Mahabharat parody was bang on!!
Thanks for the appreciation but you are the best 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Priyam and Mahi🤗

This is hilariously beautiful.Loved every bit of it❤️

Badle ki aag...do no taraf hai😆

Finally kamo is back👏

Humara munda kaab se line mein khada hai...Pichle daas saal se na koi agey aake khada hua na koi peechi jake khada hua..line bhi wahi ka wahi and munda bhi wahi ka wahin.😆

Who to Pushkar ka dost hai...iss hisab se chota devar hi hua😆

Oh..no.. Coffee date nehi hua?😆Mora piya mose bolat nahi..🤣

Arey waa, yahan bhi flashback..Pathar ke sanam tujhe hum ne🤣

Parody was awesome!

So Raamnath is going to use Aditya in fulfilling his selfish motives. As they say binasha kale viparith budhi😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mind blowing
I really enjoy the story and very song is 🤣t 🤣
great👍🏼
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Superb...i think something on this lines only we will get from cvs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You both are awesome ...talented girls 🤗
Ramu kaka he is selfish can't he see his sons happiness is with Suman
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🤣 🤣 🤣 Hayo rabba!!! You guys are damn hilarious. This is epic. The BGMs 🤣 Mahi Priyam 🤗 Amazing sense of humour you guys have got ha. And Priyam your patients will heal by your humour only. Pls PLS update soon. Love you guys.
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Originally posted by: Ana_mika

Priyam and Mahi🤗

This is hilariously beautiful.Loved every bit of it❤️


Badle ki aag...do no taraf hai😆


Finally kamo is back👏

Humara munda kaab se line mein khada hai...Pichle daas saal se na koi agey aake khada hua na koi peechi jake khada hua..line bhi wahi ka wahi and munda bhi wahi ka wahin.😆


Who to Pushkar ka dost hai...iss hisab se chota devar hi hua😆


Oh..no.. Coffee date nehi hua?😆Mora piya mose bolat nahi..🤣


Arey waa, yahan bhi flashback..Pathar ke sanam tujhe hum ne🤣

Parody was awesome!


So Raamnath is going to use Aditya in fulfilling his selfish motives. As they say binasha kale viparith budhi😆






Thank you so much ana 🤗
@bold I hope jaldi chalna shuru kar de der ki to adi bhaga le jayega 🤣
Tumhe bahut pyar hai unki coffee date se 🤣
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Originally posted by: Hhkfw

Mind blowing

I really enjoy the story and very song is 🤣t🤣
great👍🏼


Thanks a lot sweety 😛
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Originally posted by: jyotic74

Superb...i think something on this lines only we will get from cvs


Thank u !!!
Dont say that plzz ramu and adi together will be 🤢

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