My FF......On A and R love part 1...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys this is my first Fanfic i hope u like it......

Here is goes.....

Ridds is kidnapped while on her way to sanjeevani from anjali's car.Everyone ( all the inturns doc keerti and doc shashank)are having a meeting...when anjali comes running in with a totally wet face and fear in her eyes.

Anji : pa.........papa riddzi ka kidnaappe hogaya hai....she said crying

Shashank: KYA!!!!!

Armaan: Kya!!!! kaise.......KAb.......tumne dheka unlogo ko....said armaan in a shaky voice.

Sapna was already at the verge of crying and atul wasconsolling anji.

Anji: meine un logo ko nahi dheka...they were wearing masks papa.

Shashank:Mein abhi commissionor ko phone karta hoon.

Juat then armaan's phone rings .....he goes out to the corridor and awnser's the call.It was a familier voice.....

Armaan; he.........hello..

Voice; Kaise ho Dr armaan??

Armaan; Kyon??

Voice; Dr ridd ka chahne wala....

Armaan gets a shock of his life........he understood who it was but still could not figure out whose voice it was....

Voice;Tum.......Tumne Ridd ka..................Kyon ho tum......Ridd Kaha ahi......Agar tumne use......( he was at the verge of shouting)

Voice;If you want ridd t be save and sound...toh........quietly go out of sanjeevani and sit in the blue and silver van in the parking lot........then the phone got cut!!!

without thiking armaan ran .........he saw the blue van in the parking lot and seat in it.......the minute the van door closed......smonecover armaan's head from the back with a black cloth.

"jiada shaan pati ki toh beejha uradhuga" said a voice...........Armaan had no idea what was going on...Who are these people????.........Where is ridd???.....Is she fine????..............Have they done anything to her???............at that thought armaan shut his eyes real tight.......even a thought like this made his heartbeat stor for a sec....NO ntg has happened to my riddhima!!!!......somehow he still cld not recall whose voice it was on the phone.

The van stopped armaan was taken out of it ( still blindfolded).....he cld hear people opening a rusty door.......then he was brought in a place very quiet.The door closed and finally his blindfold was opened.

He saw that he was in a very dark room.......and when he turned ther was....RIDDHIMA......tied to a fanve in standing position.She was unconsious.The people that brought armaan there were still holding him.

Armaan; RIDHHIMA......he shouted

Ans then the familier voice came again.

Voice; vo theek hai bas behoosh hai.....

armaan the saw the person coming out of the shadow.......it was.....it was............VIVEK!!!!the guy that armaan saved ridds from on that dark stormy night....

Armaan; TUM!!!!!!!!

Vivek; hain mein ridd ka puran aashique....kuch yaad aaya dr armaan..

Armaan; mujhe yahaan bulake tumne apni moot ko bulaya hai.

Vivek:woh toh waqt hi batayega....kiski moot aayi hai.......vivek was about to toch ridd lips .....

Armaan; Haath mat lagana meri riddhima ko!!!!! shouted armaan.

Vivek: Tumari Riddhima!!!!!! OH toh isne tumhe bhi pagal bana diya hai....mein tumhe blame nahi karta........iski baat hi kuch aisi hai...hai na???

Armaan; ek baar mujhe choor vivek.....phir main tumhe batauga ke mujme kya hai.......

just then ridds was gaining consiousness........she opened her eyes slowly.....she then opened her eyes fully and the first person she saw was armaan....

Ridd; armaan ........armaan she stammered......and then she started to cry.....

Vivek; nahi......no ridd.......tum rote hua bilkul aachi nahi lagti ( he wipe riddhima's tears)

Armaan cld feel the anger rising in him crossing all the limits!!!😡😡How dare that vivek touch his riddhima!!!he cld not see ridd suffering like that.......every tear of hers was piercin in his heart like a thousand knives....

Ridd; Yeh sab kyu kar rahe ho tum ???? she shouted

Vivek; maine pyaar se baat ki par tum nahi mani....ub agar tum meri baat nahi manogi toh zabardasti toh karni hi paregi naa........he gave a wicked smile and wink to ridd.

Ridd; (stammering)..ky....kya..cha.....chahte....ho tum??

Vivek:TUM!!!!!!!! He said looking at armaan.

Armaan; loosing his tember...said.....Agar tumne riddhima ko kuch bhi kiya toh main tumhe......

Vivek; tum kuch nahikar sakte doctor armaan...us din toh tum hamare mein aaya tha na!!........Ab mein sab kuch tumare samne karonga tab he mujhe sukoon aayega.

Ridd:Pls leave us....pls....pls vivek....choordo hamein....pls....she was already crying very badly and trying ti open herself up but she cld not....the vivek started to kiss riddhima on her neck..

Armaan; VIVEK CHOORD USE............VIVEK....armaan had to do smtg fast...he saw a hammer which was almost going to drop from a table near him.........he kicked that hammer upwards and that hammer hit the head of the man holding his right hand.....armaan's right hand got freed he that bash up the other 3 men and walked furiously towards vivek..............he pulled vivek away from riddhima and gave him one solid punch on his forhead......vivek fainted and armaan begin to untie ridd. Ridd is fully untied now....she is crying constanly...

Armaan ; everything is fine now.....he waipes ridd tears and looks at her in the eye........Mere hote hue tumhe koi kuch nahi kar sakta......ridd looked at him with eyes filled with tear and hugged him really tight!!!!

Ridd; she was just saying armaans name in wispers again and again......so was armaan........after a long hug ridd opened her eyes......armaan was still hugging her ...............THEN SHE GOT A SHOCK ...........vivek had awaken and had just trown a knive at the direction of armaan's back..........The knive was reaching armaans back when ridd turned towards the knive and the knive hit her back.......

Ridd: ARMAAN screamed riddhima

armaan was at the verge of tears so much blood her got blank .......seeing all this vivek paniced and left the scene

Armaan; riddhima .....riddhima he shouted......crying already

Ridd; Aur mere hote hua tumhe bhi kuc....kuch.....na..nahi ho sak.....sakta.........armaan armaan mere aakhoin ke aage andhe ra cha raha hai.....

Armaan; nahi ridd nahi dun give up pls ..........he was still crying

He picked riddhima up and ran ran out of the room ..........out of the gate.............to the nearest road,.........he tries to stop a car but cld not then he sees a nother car....that too did to stop he drop to his knees.......mere ridd ko kuch nahi ho sakta he kept saying to himself...thankfully the second car stopped a distance away a men came out and help armaan put riddhima in the car.......they were on their way to sanjeevani.......

Ridd: armaan......agar mein na bachu toh......before she cld finish armaan said....Chup ridd tumhe kuch nahi ho sakta........mera pyaar tumhe marne nahi dehga.......tumhe mere liye jeena hai.........

ridd: mein tumse kuch kehna chati hoon.....armaan ......I......I..lov.....and just then riddhima became unconsious and armaan hold her tight to his chess ..........closing his eyes tight and repeating riddhima's name again agian .......

to be continued..........

so pls give me ur commens.......sld i continue????

lots of love

meetu😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyy.....datss realllyyy cooolll 😊 😊
luved itt.....
differentt....... 😊
plzz continueee karrooo...... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg...dat was fabulous!!!!plz cont sooonn!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG 1st prt n this good 👏 .....plz continu....cant w8 4 da snd prt 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1st prt was jst rockin! mindblowin! contd soon plz!!!!!!! i hope ridz is ok! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwww meetu, that was very good...Filmi Ishtyle...BINDAAS!!
Ab jaldi se...doosra likh pado.Finally dono ne bol diya..I hope theek tareekay se boldein...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey tht was awesome..
thanks
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Edited by panjwani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys thks for appreciating my wk i promise the second part as soon as possible the latest wld be tuesday ntg later then that ........sorry i live in singapore and my national exam results are coming out soon so i promise the lastest by tuesday...or maybe earlier.......i promise u it will be better then the first part....so pls bear with me okie 😳 ........sorry for the wait 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsome job yaar!!!! Continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyy

u promised da latest u'd post was on tueday....well its tueday where da post i relly want to read wat apnd next pl zplz plz continu rely soon

[cn u pm me wen u update thnx]

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