Aditya Sir's Birthday Contest Non-Investigative Story Result (Page 3)

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Decorate a story how Dayanand Shetty made Aditya Srivastava's Birthday Special. ( Not Daya doing for Abhijeet). This is somewhat the writer should be in place of Dayanand Shetty and how he would made Aditya Srivastava's Birthday Really special. The story can take the form of OS or it can be short. It depends on writer but it should speak the friendship between Aditya Srivastava And Dayanand Shetty. And yes whole concept is of writer himself/herself.

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ENTRY- 1


"A Surprise"


SCENE#1:
20 JULY , 2016
8:00 PM

Shooting of CID serial was going on, Dayananad Shetthy , Aditya Srivastava, Shivaji Satam and Ansha Syed Played an act on the set. But Dayanand Shetthy made mistakes again and again,
"Kia hua Daya Tabiyat to theek he Tumhari?B.P. singh came toward him and asked" Hmm, I feel little Headache sir, but you don't worry Daya replied
"Kia??, Sir dard kar raha he!, Pehley kiun nahi bataya yaar, foran ghar jao aur rest karo Aditya Srivastav Scolded him
"Arey boss maamooli sa sir dard he, theek ho jayega, chinta mat karoDayanand shetthy Said with smile,( he liked the caring behavior of Aditya Srivastava)
"Mamooli, wamooli kuch nahi, packup karo aur ghar jao foran jaldiAditya again scolded as like elder brother.
"Daya , Aditya sahi keh raha he, ghar ja ke rest karoShivaji sir said
"But shooting...Daya asked
"Hum doosrey scene shoot karwa leingey, hey na, jao aaraam karo Shivaji replied kindly "Ok, Me chalta hoon phir Daya said finally
"Apna khayal rakhna Aditya said to him, Daya smiled and shaked hand with him and went to the parking side
"Yes, Plan no#1 is Succeed Daya smiled
Now he opened the lock of his car and said "Chal meri raam piyari
During the driving he enjoyed with music and called to his wife Sumitha
"Hello Sumi,me aaj deir se ghar aaoongaDaya said
"Oh!late night shootSumitha asked
"Nahi, kuch or kaam he, or haan kisi ki bhi call aye or mera poochey to keh dena ghar pe hoon or theek hoonHetold her
"Hein aisa kiun??Sumitha did not understand this order
"Darling bas jesa keh raha hoon waisa karna aa ke batata hoon sab, or haan kal ki party ka arrangement ho gaya na
"Haan baaba kesey bhool sakti hoon, kal aap ke dost Aditya Srivastav ki birthday he, jis ke liye janaab ne ek haftey se ghar sir pe utha rakha he, Party me ye hona chahiye, wo hona chahiye, Aditya ko ye khana pasand he, ye nahi pasand, aisa music pasand he, aisa nahi, yahaan tak ke decoration bhi afternoon me servants ke saath mil ke kar keg aye hein Sri Dayanand Shetthy sahib She replied
"Ha ha ha, Dost bahi bhai he wo mera, Tum jealous ho rahi ho hamarey prem seHe asked naughtily
"Me kiun jealous hongi meri to parathna he ke aap dono ki dosti hamesha salamat raheyShe replied with smile
"Ok take care bye byeDaya said and disconnect the call.
Then he reached a flower stall and bought many flowers and its pieces
Then he went toward a gift shop and bought Ribbons and so many other things, he also liked a beautiful big wish card and beautiful gifts
"In sab ko pack kardo, or is card ko frame kardoHe ordered
"Yes sirShopkeeper said, after the shopping of these things he went toward a bakery, "Aditya ko cake or pastry bohot pasand hein, is liye pehley wo hi le letey heinHe said to himself
"Arey daya sir aap hamarey to bhaag jaag gaye aajBaker said
And Daya smiled, "Sir ek selfie plzHe asked
"Theek he bhai le lo magar zara jaldi, mujhey urgency he,He laughed
The baker took a selfie and then asked the order
He bought a beautiful chocolate cake "is pe Happy Birthday Aditya Srivastava likh doDaya ordered
"Arey Aditya Sir ka janam din he , bohot bohot badhai ho, unhein hamari taraf se bohot bohot shubh kamnaein kehna sirHe said excitedly
"Ok , pehley likho to, aur haan ye pastries bhi pack kar dena or mithai bhi , aur haan Gajar ka halwa bhi pack kar doHe ordered
After there, he was going toward a restaurant and purchased Pulawo, Paalak paneer and zinger burgerBoss ko khney ka bohot shoq he aaj sari kasar nikaal doonga
He winked during look into backview mirror
Then he reached to a seven star Hotel, and booked a room.
...
2ND SCENE:
20 JULY , 2016
TIME: 10:30 PM
Aditya Srivastava was driving the car,
"Pata nahi kesi tabiyat hogi Daya ki, apni bilkul chinta nahi karta, har waqt kaam ko sir pe sawaar rakhta he, phone karta hoon useyhe was thinkingsuddenly his cell was ringing.
"Kiss ki call aa gai he said to himself and saw the screen
"Arey Daya ki call he shocked and attended the call
"Khariat daya sab theek to he na, tabiat kesi heHe asked worriedly
"Arey dheeraj yaar, tum abhi kahan ho?Daya replied
"Me ghar jar aha tha rastey me hoonAditya said
"Yaar Tum abhi merey paas aa saktey ho, , actually ek problem ko le ke andar se bohot pareshaan hoon, aur sab ke samney discuss nahi kar sakta,Daya said to him
"Ok, aata hoon ghar pe...Aditya turned his car to the road of Daya's residency
"Nahi nahi ghar pe nahiDaya interruptedasal me me ne Sumitha ko bhi wo baat nahi batai me yahan Paradise Hotel me hoon, room no#102Daya told them
"Ok abhi aata hoonAditya replied,Aisi kia baat he jo Daya ko itna pareshaan kar rahi he ke us ne bhabhi ko bhi nahi batayaAditya was thinking
...
3RD SCENE
20 JULY , 2016
TIMING: 11:30 PM

"Hotel bhi sheher ke doosrey kinarey pe book karwaya he, aatey aatey bhi ghanta lag gayaAditya said and parked his car in parking
Then he entered in the Hotel.Hall is full of many peoples, Mostly people excited to see him,
"Abhijeet, "Arey ye to Abhijeet hein, "CID waley
"CID uncle, aap cid Uncle hein na, some kids came toward him and asked innocently
He smiled and accepted "Haan beta me CID Uncle hoonHe Picked up a small baby, and kissed her
"Kia aap yahan mujrim ko pakadney aye heinA little boy asked worriedly
"Arey nahi nahiHe laughed "Acha bacho mujhey zara kaam he, Aap log to jantey hein na ke cid ka kaam kitna zaroori hota he
"Ok uncle jaein aap, cid ka kaam ziyada zaroori he A girl answered
He go toward the stairs which are back in counter.
"Arey sir aap to Abhijeet hei na CID waley Counter girl asked excitedly and no wait to his reply , she took her cell phone
"Sir plz ek selfieShe requested,
"Ok he replied,and she took a selfie, "sir ye achi nahi aai ek or plz
"Uff...Aditya thought Kahan phansa dia Daya
She took selfie again,
"Sir mujhey aap se milney ka bohot shoq tha, aap ko pata nahi he me aap ki kitni bari fan hoon, I'm very very very happy today She told him happily
"Sir plz ek selfie hamarey saath bhifew waiters came toward there
"Abhi merey paas samey nahi he ek urgent kaam he, abhi aa ked eta hoon selfie
Aditya replied
"Sir bas ek minute lagega sirthey asked
"kaha na yaar urgency he, abhi wapis jaoonga to ek nahi 2, 3 selfies le lena, khoosh
He replied And go toward lift
Counter girl dialed a number
" Daya Sir, hum ne Aditya sir ko bohot roka magar wo nahi rukey wo ooper aa rahey heinShe told him
"Oh, OkDaya replied and looked the clock, 11:45PM
"Chalo khair he, me to 11:59 chah raha tha
...
Last scene
20 july 2016
Timing: 11:50 PM

"Pata nahi kia baat he jo yahan bulaya he Daya ne din me to bilkul bhi nahi laga ke wo kisi tension me heAditya was thinking continuously
Now he reached to the front of Room#102, the door is closed He knocked the door
"Daya he called loudly
"Haan aa jao Aditya darwaza khula he, Daya ke hotey koi darwaza band kesey reh sakta heDaya's smily voice came out
Aditya smiled on his words and open the door
"Oh when he entered the room,
So many flower petals and glitters showered on him,
"Arey Arey ye kiaAditya shocked
"Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birth day to you
Happy Birth day to dear darling
Happy Birth day to you
A sweet back ground music is start and daya also sang this and hugged to him
"Janam din ki bohot bohot shubh kamnaein, merey yaarDaya whispered into his ears
The room is fully decorated with colourful ribbons, flowers and balloons and Write on a wall "Happy BirthDay. Aditya Sir Surprised


At the same moment wall clock announced 12:PM
"Sab se pehley me ne hi wish kia naDaya winked
"Arey Daya ye sab kia he?Aditya still surprised
"Surprize, "He smiled
"Magar tumhari wo tension, wo sir dardAditya asked him
"Sir me dard is liye tha ke shooting khatam honey ka naam nahi le rahi thi or mujhey ye saara arrangement karna tha, Or tension ye thi ke koi tumhein mujh se pehley wish na kar deyDaya again smiled and gave him framed wish card
"Bohot shararti ho Tum Daya, Aur bohot sweet bhiAditya smiled and hugged with him again
"Mujhey garv he Hamari dosti pe,Aditya said with wet eyes and shiny smile "Aur Tumharey jesey bhai pe
Suddenly Aditya's cell rang
He looked it , many Wishing Sms is appeared and miss called of his wife
"Bhabhi se keh do aaj deir se aao gey, abhi ye sab khatam karna he bossDaya said and pointed toward sweets and dishes


"OkAditya said and informed her
"Aaj thori deir ho jaegi mujhey, Daya ke sath hoon, chintaa mat karna
Suddenly The door is opened and CID full team with crew members came there
"Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birth day to you
Happy Birthday to Adi sir
All is sang
"Matlab sab ko pata thaAditya again surprised
"Haan pata tha warna Daya ko itni jaldi janey kiun detey B.P singh smiled
All people wished him and giving the gifts
"Kal merey ghar pe Party he, arey 12 to baj gaye matlab aaj raat 9:00 bajey
Aditya ki birthday party, aur aap sab log us me invited heinDaya announced
"Yaaall are shouted happily
"Chalo Aditya cake kaatoShivaji sir said
"haan ab jaldi se cake kaato, bohot bhook lagi heChiristie mam said
All people shared a laugh
So Aditya go toward the central table with Daya
The table was decorated with flowers and favourite snacks of Aditya, A beautiful chocolate cake put in the centre.Happy BirthDay Dear Aditya Srivastav wrote on it

All
All peoples stood around both of them and Aditya is starting cut the cake with many claps and whistles and he give first bite to Daya and then Shivaji and B.P.Singh
The team members captured these sweet moments in his cells and cameras
Then they start pranks and enjoyments
Abhay Shukla, Dinesh and Ajay start funny dance,All are laughed and enjoyed
Aditya Sir was very happy
He enjoyed this party a lot
I wish "May God Showered his blessing on him and make him happy and healthy always
the party still going on, all are enjoyed Daya's Surprise
I hope u all enjoyed this party too...
... The End ...

ENTRY- 2

JINA ISIKA NAAM HAIN

During CID days, generally ek bhi aisa saal nehi beeta jab mera birthday set pe celebrate na hui ho, (content smile) agar main kisi movie ke kaam se bahar na raha toh.

(Bend a little forward) Mujhe yeh party wagayra jada pasand nehi hain kabhi, phir bhi on mass demand I had to do it each and every year then. (small laugh)

Lekin uss saal bahat khas, bahat ahem hain mere liye.(inhales deep)

Aaj main joh bhi hoon uska major credit humare CID show ko hi jata hain. Logo ne mujhe, hume itna samman itna pyar diya (small pause) khatam ho jane ke itne saalon baad bhi jab kahi jata hoon aur awaz gunjta hain Abhijeet Abhijeet (signature smile), lagta hain, haan kuch toh kiya tha. Kuch sach me achha hi kiya hoga matlab humne itne saalon se. Warna log aise beshumar mahabbat aaj bhi kayse karte!

Yeh ek woh sapna hain joh sayad har ek kalakar ke dil me hota hain, woh apna naam se bhi jada apne kirdaar se jana jayen. Mujhe achha lagta hain mere sath waysa hua. Sirf mere sath hi kiun walki hum sab ke sath waysa hua.

Daya darwaza tod do, aaj bhi kaano me gunjta hain(laughing a bit). Aur ACP sir ka woh ungli ghumana,(casually) kuch toh gadbad hain (again laugh).Freddie ki biwi, phir Doctor saab se mera kabhi na khatam hone wala nok-jhok, Daya aur mera (looking at side proudly) bonding bahat alag (quite dreamily) bahat khas tha woh sab.

Jaise ki main pahele hi kaha mujhe kabhi celebration me koi interest nehi tha (adjusting in seat). Tab ke dino me mera bahat badnami tha. Wayse aaj bhi hain(laughs looking at front). Off-screen photos me humare CID fans sayad hi mujhe kabhi dekh pate masti karte hue, kisi ka birthday celebrate karte hue. Mera off-screen bonding jadatar fans ko co-actors ke baaton se pata chalta yah phir jab kabhi koi fan humare set pe aate the, phir apna experience share karte honge sab ke sath. Even interview bhi mera bahat hi gine-chune hain. (turns serious)

Sab ka complain tab ke dino me laga rehta hi tha. Lekin main khud ko iss sab me adjust nehi kar pata kabhi. Public hone se mujhe allergy hain sab kehte hain. (carefree laughter) Aisa ek itihaas rachnewala TV show karte the hum, fans ka expectations bahat jada hota tha, log bepanah pyar karte the humare show se, iska concept se.

(Taking a deep breath and after a minute or two long silence) Uss waqt humare set me bahat kuch idhar-udhar hone laga tha. Unnish saal se chalte aa raha ek cult show paheli baar bina kisi announcement ke bandh ho gaya tha telecast hona kuch dino ke liye. Hum shooting kar rahe the lagatar. Lekin yeh nehi pata tha kab woh sab TV pe dikhaya jayega. (stops suddenly)

Fans bahat jada dukhi the, padheshan the. Hum bhi nehi samajh pate the, kya karen kya nehi!

Log humesha sawal puchte the, phir kab ayega CID TV pe? Lekin humare pass koi jawab nehi hota tha.(quickly managing sad mood) Woh do mahina bahat ajib tha humare liye bhi, humare fans ke liye bhi.

Isi bich after a short break, jab humara show phir se aane laga TV pe, production house aur channel walon ne kuch naya karne ko socha. Lekin afsosh, darshakon ko pasand nehi aaya woh changes. (sad smile)

Kuch wajah se fans thora bahat naraz the humse. Unka complain aata tha humare pass. Kabhi costume toh kabhi show format aur kabhi story line ke sath woh adjust nehi kar pate the. Humara production house bhi isse bahat jada chintit tha.

Hum apna suggestion production team ke samne rakhte the. Lekin har baat maan ke chalna unke liye bhi possible nehi tha. Udhar social media pe fans din bar din gussa hote jaa rahe the.

Charoh orh ek ajib sa tension aur uneasiness chaya rehta tha.

Sath me mera ek big screen commitment pe bhi kaam chal raha tha tab. Bahat pressure hota tha mera.

Main din me film studio aur raat me CID ke set pe gujarta tha. Ghar jane ka bhi waqt nehi milta teen-teen, char-char din tak kabhi kabhi.

Aise mahaul me woh din aaya. Roj ke tarha main apna movie ka kaam niptake raat tak CID ke set me pahauch gaya. Lagbhag adhi raat tak maine kaam kiya. Phir ek short break ka time aaya. Sabhi ka schedule us waqt nehi tha toh raat me koi cake cutting yah phir party kuch nehi hua. Bas present cast aur crew mujhe birthday wish kiye verbally.

Mera next scene aane me waqt tha toh main ek chota sa nap lene ka socha aur thora aram karne ko chala gaya.

Agle subha matlab 21st July ke subha mujhe jitna pata tha ek chasing scene ka shooting tha humara aur usme bahat sara preparation bhi chahiye tha. Scene ek dam action packed hona tha.

Next day sab se pahele Daya pahaucha location pe chay baje ke kuch baad. Phir dhire dhire baki log aayen aur hum kaam me involve ho gaye.

Achanak karib subha ke sadhe saat baje Daya kahin se aaya aur ekdam se mujhe uske sath jane ke liye kaha. Main pahele samjha nehi aur bahar aaya. Phir dekha, aare usne toh gari nikal li!

Maine pucha toh koi jawab hi nehi di usne. Ulta main time waste kar raha hoon aisa kehne laga. Main gari me baytha toh dekha kuch der baad usne airport ka rashta pakadh li.

Mujhe kuch kehna ka mauka hi nehi diya Daya aur sidha hum Allahabad ke flight pe chadh baythe thori der baad.

Pura rashta main usse puchta gaya ke kya baat ho gaya achanak se? Mera paternal house udhar hain toh maine pahele usi ke bare me socha. Kahin unhe kuch ho toh nehi gaya! Ghar se contact karne ka koi chance bhi nehi tha tab flight me baythke. Main padheshan ho raha tha bahat. Aur Daya bahat aram se mera padheshani enjoy kar raha tha (smiley chuckle).

Phir thori der baad yeh toh samajh gaya main, ke koi buri khabar atleast tha nehi. Baat kuch bada hain. Hum set pe kuch kehke nehi aaye, jitna mujhe pata tha. B.P. sir joh ki CID show ka producer the aur kafi strict kism ka insaan bhi, unse koi permission nehi li. Dopahar se mera upcoming film ka bhi kaam tha. Kahin pe kuch inform nehi ki humne. Main lagatar Daya se yeh sab kehte gaya aur hum Allahabad pahauch gaye itne me.

Udhar airport se nikalke main sab se pahele ghar me baat ki aur tasalli kar li sach me sabhi khayriyat the. Lekin kise pata tha jhatka abhi baki tha (laughing little) baki nehi asal me jhatka shuru hi nehi hua tha tab tak.

Sab se pahele humne I mean main aur Daya Allahabad station ki rest room me baythke nashta ki aur woh bhi mere ghar ka bana hua! Matlab airport se nikalke railway station gaye hum aur Daya ne dabba nikala mere ghar se diya hua!

Main toh hayraan rahe gaya. Aur Daya smile pe smile dete gaye. (disappointed gesture) Zahir si baat hain log hume badi asani se pahenchan liye udhar. Hum thori der sab se milke phir train me chadh baythe. Main hayraan rahe gaya dekhke ki hum Sultanpur jaa rahe the!

Sultanpur mera birthplace hain. Pura bachpan humne wohi bitaya. Mera schooling bhi udhar hi. Phir 1982 me hum finally Allahabad shift ho gaye. Uske baad phir kabhi Sultanpur jane ka waqt aur zaroorat dono hi nehi aaya. Kahan 1982 aur kahan 2016, main phir se usi jagah jane wala tha jahan kabhi bachpan ki mastibhara din bitaya.

Hum by train Sultanpur pahauche. Udhar jis bank pe mere papa kaam karte the, udhar gaya. Jahan hum bachpan me rehte the, Daya uss mahaulle ka khoj bhi nikala tha. Humne mera bachpan ki school me bhi gaye. Itne saal bich me beet gaya. Koi bhi jaan-pehchan wale mila nehi kahin jada. Phir bhi yaaden taza ho gaya.

Ghar ke pass jis playground me hum khelne jate the, aab bahat kuch badal gaya woh sab. Naya building ban gaya aab toh. Mera school bhi thora bahat change ho gaya tha. Thora bahat extension hua hoga laga. Humare mahaulle me bhi kaii sare naye ghar bane. Ek-do purane padhoshyion se mulakat hua bhi. Lekin utna bachpan ki sabhi baaten sahi se yaad nehi aaya mujhe hi.

Phir bhi, bahat achha laga sab se milke. School me gaye hum toh bachhe hume dekh kar khushi se pagal ho gaye the sare. Mahaulle me bhi waysa hi.

Daya pahele se sara arrangement kar ke rakha tha mere ghar me baat kar ke. Mere bachhe, wife, maa-papa, mera bhaiya-bhabi sab ko yeh surprise ke bare me pata tha aur sab ne badi safai se mujhse yeh baat chupake rakhe the (amazing smile).

Ek pura din, apne jigri dost ke sath phir se wohi bachpan ki khushi ko mehsoosh karna, wohi jagah phir se ek baar mudh ke dekhna mere liye bahat bahat khas hain. Aur yeh sirf aur sirf Daya ke liye hi ho paya tha. Aisa dost sayad hi koi hain aur mera.

Usne ek taraf B. P. sir se uss din chutti ke liye khas baat ki. Phir mere film ke procedure se bhi usine baat kar ke manaya. Udhar bahat tight schedule chal raha tha. Aise me ek pura din chutti, lekin Daya yeh kiya tha mere liye. Usne mere janamdin ko bahat bahat khas bana diya tha.

Aise bhi kabhi apna janamdin mana sakta hoon, maine kabhi socha hi nehi. Lekin Daya mujhe phir se ek baar bachpan ki dino me le kar gaya tha uss saal. Woh janamdin aaj tak ka mere liye sab se khas hain.

Phir hum raat tak Mumbai wapas aaye.

21 July, 2028

3:45 PM

Aditya! Yeh kya? Daya flipped a newspaper page literally with open mouth.

Kya? Aditya looked at him while doing something with his mobile.

Tum aise itna openly interview kab se dene lage! Daya's tone was full of amazement.

Kiun? Aditya laughed looking his friend's stunning face.

Daya: itni detail me!

Aditya picked his buddy's words. Kiun bhae tum apna tariff dekh ke chaunk gaye?

Adityaaa. Daya tried to be sounded tough but failed and laughed accompanied by his friend.

Kab ka hain yeh interview? He pointed his buddy's image at the corner of page.

Mahine pahele Daya. Aditya shrugged and sipped his tea. Aaj se desh ka senior citizen ban gaya joh main. Iss liye birthday special interview!

Senior citizen honge tum documents pe sirf. Daya made face causing a funny chuckle of his pal.

Wayse tumhe aaj bhi woh sab yaad hain! He raised his eyebrow.

Kiun nehi Daya? Aditya smiled big. Maine sach me kabhi socha nehi tha dubara phir kabhi main Sultanpur jaa sakta hoon. Bachpan ki emotional bonding bahat khas hota hain.

Daya noticed his friend's glittering eyes and gestured positive.

Tum jante ho Aditya, sach me tumhare ankhen bahat jada vocal raha humesha se? He smiled little and gave a friendly pat on Aditya's arm. Mujhe pata hain uss baat se tum kuch jada hi khush hue the aur aaj bhi woh memory cherish karna tumhe achha lagta hain. Aur aaj ke din me toh khas kar. Chahe bich me barah saal hi kiun na beet jayen aur humare show ko khatam hue bhi kiun nah aat saal ho gaya ho isme!

Sach me, pata hi nehi chala kab itne din beet gayen. Lagta hain bas kal ki baat hain! Aditya sighed.

Bhawnaon me koi beh raha hain idhar. Daya joked.

I am not a mere kid Daya. Aditya rolled his eyes.

I know my old friend. Opss sorry sorry veteran senior citizen pal. Daya dramatically bit his tongue to irritate his companion even more.

Aditya got his intention and decided not to pay any more attention.

Daya again flipped the interview page and noticed the time in his wrist watch. Dost iss saal special party manga tha main celebrating 60 years. Tumhara irada kuch thik nehi lag raha mujhe. He threw his dialogue in a calm way.

Aditya kept his empty tea cup on table and turned. Matlab? He asked confusingly.

Daya: ek toh aajkal humesha Mumbai ke bahar idhar-udhar shooting ke kaamon se rehte ho. He nodded his head while folding the newspaper. Mujhe tumhe pick karna tha aur tum toh idhar hi dera jama liye yaar! Tumhara birthday party...

Aditya cut him softly. Get together Daya. Aab humare bachho ka birthday celebration ka din hain. Humara nehi.

Daya sniffed making weird noise in irritation. Celebration ka koi umar nehi hota Adi. Tumhare honor me tumhare hi ghar me party. Lene aaya main. Aur nikalne ka naam hi nehi kar rahe ho tum! Ek kaam karo Aditya, studio ko hi apna ghar bana lo.

Aditya chuckled. Tum humesha itna harbari me kiun rehte ho Daya?

He stretched his body and ordered for bill. Tum chalo gari nikalo, main bill de ke aata hoon.

Daya objected. Aaj tumhara birthday hain Aditya. Har choti-badi treat tumhare liye aaj mere taraf se.

Aditya relaxed him by eyes. Treat tum already de chuke ho Daya. Itne dino baad tum Dubai se wapas aaye sirf iss occasion ke liye ki mera birthday hain. He smiled affectionately.

Mean time waiter reached there with bill and he paid that and stood up followed by his year old buddy Daya. They started to walk towards exit of the caf near the studio where Aditya's recent film's shooting was going on.

Daya left for parking and within a few minutes a lavish car stopped before the veteran birthday boy followed by a baritone order, you are going to get another blasting surprise my friend. So be quick.

Ufff... Tum bhi Daya! Enjoyment ke naam se excited hona tumhara kabhi kam nehi hoga nah? Aditya jerked his head and entered into car.

You are going to meet the whole CID gang tonight. Daya tilted his head in one side with a mischievous grin and speed off his car followed by a signature shocking Aain!

*****


ENTRY- 3

Happy Birthday Aditya

Voice: sach ye subah subah ki Shooting, ab thaka deti hay, Sir sy baat kanri paray gi.


He smilingly opened the driving seat of His car as He knew His All Thinking is just always Rest in His Brain, not coming out through His Tongue and after stepping and adjusting inside, found Something Broadening His Smile;




After tiding Seat Belt, He Picked that Parcel and Opening it, turned His Smile in Shock when finds the Parcel Box is Empty;


The whole Surprise Spoiled His mood as He got that His Friend played a Prank with Him in such Lovely day makes Him Quiets.


The Car rushed through everyday routes although the Grey shades Clouds, Windy Breeze, Drizzle Weather did not Effect on the Off Mood of Man still Driving Speedly and somehow Stubbornly too.


Car Parked at its Specific place either He did not find His Friend Car makes Him More Angry as His Plan of Scolding getting Weaker because of having Hectic Shooting Schedule and these are the few moments where He can easily takes Good Class of His Buddy.


After Locking His Car, He moved still Astonished finding no one around including Watchman or Security Guards even Employees of Different Departments of Production House.


Before He Opened the Main Door to take Step inside, found another Shocking Item, brings back His Smile on His Lips...




He Pasted out that Negative, seeing it changed the direction in front of Sunlight coming from outside, got the Both Faces, again gives Him Smile and after taking it, moved Upstairs.

He stepped Upward murmuring Daya bhi na, Prank krnay sy Baaz nahi aaye ga, Stopped found another One.



He again stick it out and now moving with little in Speed with another murmur, koi Lamba Plan lagta hy hy is ka.


The Next Step Corridor Wall gives Him another Negative easily Flashed Up seeing the Two Faces.



He Pasted it out and find another one just few miles away with a Shock as this Negative was still Mystery for Him as His Pal not even Showing Glimpse of that to Him, gives Him really a Pleasant Feel, Stick Out...


The Last Negative is His All Time Favorite, which always gives Him Sooth so Stick out it from the Rest Room Door and Entered inside totally Freeze at Entrance.




He really doesn't understand how to React as the Wall in front of His Expressive Eyes having Volumes of Speech, Vacant seeing the Beautiful Decor Wall

Welcoming Him;


He saw His Sweaty Palm having the Negatives of those Positives which He was Seeing now in His Eye Core with a Creative Hanging Idea and Lovingly Calligraphic Greeting Written in His Favorite color Combination or might be Extra Using of this color makes it His Fav One lits a Small but Wet Smile on His Lips.


Before taking a Step ahead, He looks around find No One so moving ahead for seeing any New Surprise before its Revealing, Hearing a Loud Clapping and the Most Sweetest Tone, He Normally Listening More or Less Regularly;


The Cute Humming of " Happy Birthday to Adi " gives Him a Pleasure which increasing when Many Voices of Patting Sounds of Two Palms even Tunes of Melodious Singing Tells Him that now His Friend Individual Surprise Plan Joins by His Other Colleagues as well...


He really takes Place as a Table Suddenly Appeared with a Cake which is Not Yellow in Color this time,Thank God He Murmured giving a Laughing Blaster of His Pal, makes Him Smiled knowing that His Buddy got His Murmur.


He Cuts the Cake in Shower of so Many Blessings of His Love Ones and at Last the Same Year Issue of asking Gifts and Lame Excuses of His Friends who obviously giving Him His Desired Presents with some Funny Punches while the Spell of Shoot again Resumed after this Small Lovable moments, having such amount Refreshes Him till the Next 21st July!



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ENTRY- 4



HIDDEN SURPRISES

Note: Names mentioned here are real but their characters, places and other things mentioned here are purely fictional and not meant to hurt anyone. The story may seem boring but please bear with it as this is my first attempt. Please forgive me if there's any OTT element in this story.

July 20, 2016

Aditya has started moving back to his home after a long day's shooting at the Film city. He drives his car slowly with unease as a result of tiredness which was due to the hectic schedule. His mind and body needed rest. So he decides to take break for two days. His family members are out of station for a week. So he have to spend his night alone. The moment he enters the house, he gets refreshed quickly and goes to bed.

July 21, 2016

Time: 1.30 am

Aditya is sleeping in his room with a dim night-lamp. Suddenly he opens his eyes but not fully awake. He could see something glowing on his wall with fluorescence.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY

ADITYA SRIVASTAVA


Since he is not fully awake, he thinks it is a dream and continues to sleep.

Time: 6.05 am

Aditya's phone snoozes and he slowly opens his eyes and wakes up. He switches off the night-lamp and switches the tube-light on. He didn't see anything in the wall as he saw at midnight. He comes down from the stairs and goes out to pick up the newspaper and the milk packets at his doorsteps. When he opens the door, he sees a beautiful flower bouquet placed upon the folded newspaper which is kept on the table outside. He sits on the chair near that table where he used to sit and read the newspaper. He picks the bouquet with a cute smile on his face. Suddenly a little bit of paper drops down. He bends down and takes the paper. He finds something written like this...

SURPISED...

THIS IS JUST A BEGINNING...

MORE SURPRISES ARE ON THE WAY...

WAIT AND SEE...

He didn't understand anything for sometime. He takes the newspaper and sees the date it is mentioned as July 21, 2016. He again smiles remembering his birthday and rubs his fingers at his forehand. Meanwhile he thinks who would have sent this gift to him. He peeps out and searches if there is anyone standing out but no one is there.

He takes the newspaper and bouquet carefully and goes inside the house. He goes to the kitchen to make a coffee for himself. When he is about to take the sugar he touches something strange. He finds something wrapped in a box. He removes the wrapper and opens the box. It is a beautifully designed teacup. On the teacup it is mentioned as

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ADITYA SRIVASTAVA

He finds another bit of paper inside the teacup. He reads it as

"THIS TEACUP WILL DEFINITELY WISH YOU HAPPY BIRTHDAY EVERY YEAR. HAPPY BIRTHDAY ADITYA

He gets puzzled who would have done it and becomes curious to know about the one who is surprising him. But he has no clue. So he continues to prepare coffee. He goes to the hall and drinks the coffee sitting in the sofa while giving a glance to the newspaper. He checks his mobile phone and finds inbox filled with birthday wishes.

After sometime, he takes a shower and goes into his room wearing a banyan and a trouser, wiping his hair forcer. The light in his room is still switched on. Then he recollects that he didn't turn off the light after leaving the room. He accuses himself for his forgetfulness. He opens his wardrobe and picks up a new white shirt which was presented by his wife for his birthday. Below that he finds a box wrapped with a blue gift wrapper. He picks the box and opens it with care, sitting on his bed. A coat in dark blue colour and a black shirt with a black pant is kept neatly packed. A card is found along with this packed dress. It shows

"THIS COSTUME IS FOR A HANDSOME MAN WITH A WONDERFUL PERSONALITY. HAPPY BIRTHDAY ADITYA'

Aditya thinks for a moment "When we shoot for CID we have to find something in order to arrest the culprit. Now I am there in same situation. It's like finding clues. Let's see what happens next and smiles to himself. The clock strikes seven and Aditya hears a different sound. He rushes to each room in his house leaving the light switched on his room. He finds an awesome wall clock hanging on the wall of one of the room. The wall clock has an oscillating pendulum and produces a good tune each hour. The words inscribed on it are...

"THIS PRECIOUS GIFT IS FOR THE PRECIOUS MAN

He stood stunned after reading these words. He goes back to his room speechless thinking of the person who is giving him shocking surprises. He wears the white shirt and a black pant and moves out of the room turning off the light. The room has become quite darker since the weather is cloudy. He turns back and finds the attractive fluorescent letters wishing him a happy birthday. He comes out of his room smiling and enters pooja room to pray God. Surprises are not ready to leave him... He finds a beautiful Ganesha idol and an idol of Laughing Buddha. He prays to God like, "All must be happy and with long lives. Please help me to know who is making me speechless. Though I am excited now, the curiosity to know about the person is not ready to spare me. Thank you God for everything you have given to me.

Time: 8.00 am

Aditya's phone is running out of battery. So he enters into the room which is next to his room to plug the phone with charger. There too he finds a small gift box. He unwraps and finds a small golden ring inside the box. The ring bears the initials AM (A for Aditya and M for Mansi, his wife). Again there's a bit of paper inside the box. He takes it patiently and reads it as

"This ring is for the man whose heart is pure as the gold

Suddenly he hears someone ringing the calling bell. He comes out and opens the door. A tall and handsome man, wearing light blue shirt and a jeans pant greets him.

Aditya: Daya! What a surprise!! See today is filled with full of surprises for me. Come in Daya.

Daya: Hi Aditya. I just now asked about you to the crew members. They told that you are on leave. And it was a long time back I visited your home. That's why I came today. And you look so handsome today. Anything special?

Aditya thinks "What Daya is asking like this? Usually he will be the first person to wish me. We are getting aged and are too busy in our work. So there's no offence in forgetting such things. Let it be.

Daya waves his hand in front of Aditya's face to bring him back to the present.

Daya: What happened Aditya? Are you alright? (Pointing to Aditya's ring finger which had a glittering golden ring The gift) This ring is too lovely. Who gave you this ring?

Aditya (smilingly): Nothing Daya. I'm alright. I'll explain everything later. What would you like to have? Tea or coffee?

Daya: No Bro, I had everything enough in the morning. I don't want anything now.

Aditya: What is this Daya? You are here after a long time. I won't spare you today. You must have something. Sit down in the sofa.

Daya (sits on the sofa): Okay Bro, get me a coffee then.

Aditya goes into the kitchen and comes to the hall with two cups of coffee after ten minutes. He gets shocked as Daya is not there in the hall. He keeps the coffee cups on the table and searches everywhere in the house. Then he rushes outside and searches for Daya but he is nowhere. He runs into the house calling "Daya! Daya!

He finds a big gift box on the table in the hall. He feels surprised once again. He sits patiently on the sofa and unwraps the gift. He takes out a big photo album with a beautifully designed cover. As he opens the photo album, he finds some lovely photos of himself with Daya and other CID members. He starts to look those pictures with a smiling face. At last he finds a paper kept inside the photo album. He starts reading the words written on the paper.

Dear Aditya,

When I met you for the first time, I never knew that we are going to be a part of a wonderful long journey. This journey made me understand the real essence of friendship. There were hard times where you have given a moral support and stood as a backbone for me. Time may not be constant, but memories will stay forever till our last breath. I thank the Almighty who has given me an amazing and true friend in my life. All the gifts you found were from the people who love you the most. These gifts will definitely give you wonderful memories throughout your life. Your smile always spreads happiness around us. So keep smiling. When you struggle, I will stay with you. I pray the Almighty to give you a happy, healthy and prosperous life. I wish you a very happy birthday from the bottom of my heart.

Yours lovingly,

Dayanand Shetty.

After reading this letter, Aditya smiles and raises his head with his eyes filled with tears. Suddenly the room becomes dark. The balloons burst and he gets a shower of coloured papers, glitters and spray. A group of children holding candles and red roses march towards Aditya and start singing birthday song to him. Two people, a man and a woman of middle age bring the cake and place it on a round table. Daya walks slowly towards Aditya behind the children. Aditya kneels down and stretches his hands to hug the children. He then rises up and gives a hug to Daya. They move towards the cake. Aditya cuts the cake, feeds a piece to Daya and Daya feeds him back. Then Aditya serves the cake pieces to everyone present there. He then sits and chats with the children for sometime. The children ask him various questions and he answers them calmly with a cute smile on his face.

After sometime Aditya calls Daya to his room, getting up from the sofa and says to the couple, "Will you please excuse me? We will be back in few minutes.

Aditya and Daya go up in the stairs and get into the room.

Aditya: Daya I really didn't expect this from you. I never had such surprises in my life before. Is it your idea to hide the gifts in the house? How did you do it?

Daya: I thought you are going to celebrate your birthday in sets. But two days back, your secretary told me that you are going on leave for these two days. So I planned this surprise with the help of your secretary.

Aditya: By the way, who are those couple and the lovely children who came to wish me?

Daya: What Bro? You are asking as if you know nothing?

Aditya (seriously): Don't joke Daya. I really don't know who they are.

Daya: These children are from Shivraj orphanage. The couple are running this orphanage for more than 15 years. See you have sponsored for this children the entire day today. They have come to thank you and wish you.

Aditya: But Daya, I don't remember anything like this. I haven't offered any donation for the past three months.

Daya: Do you remember? One month back, you gave me a blank cheque.

Aditya: Yes Daya, I remember it. You said that you needed some money very urgent.

Daya: I just filled seventy five thousand rupees in it and offered them the cheque with your name. Shivraj, who runs the orphanage is my friend. Though I gave the cheque, I feared that you will not accept this. I just wanted to make your birthday special by helping these children. Sorry for acting like this without your consultation.

Aditya (little embarrassed): Daya, is there a need to apologise to me? See, when you said you need money, I gave you a blank cheque. Why? Because I trust you Daya. There's nothing wrong in what you did. God has given us everything. But those children are really craving for love. In fact I must thank you for giving me an opportunity to help these children. You are not Daya just by name. You are Daya by your character and you have proved it once again like many times you did. I am really proud to have you as my friend.

Daya: Bro, I am not a saint. I am just a human. I did what I felt right for me. Who else can understand me better as you? I am too lucky to have a friend. The children are waiting for us. Let's go.

Aditya (smiling): Sure, Daya.

They come down from the room. The clock showed 12.30. Shivraj thanked Aditya for helping the children. Shivraj, his wife, the children and Daya are ready to leave. When Daya is about to step out, Aditya comes and asks about Satam sir and CID members. Daya says, "All are the part of this surprising day, all the gifts you saw are from the CID team except the ring you wear. This is your wife's gift.

Aditya asks Daya to have lunch but Daya says "Bro, You cannot cook the lunch I eat. Just a joke. Don't worry, I will come with my family one day. Take care Aditya. Have a nice day and bids a goodbye.

THE END



ENTRY- 5

A Special Day with Aditya Shrivastav

A Device starting Buzzing and then the Ringer Awakens the Voice in that Silent Scenario so the Owner Picked it after seeing the Flashing Screen with Smile as...

Aditya: Yaad aa gayii...

Daya: ja kr jo Manali Beth gaye ho... pata hy kitna Burden aa gaya hy (stressed tone) Mujh pr...

Aditya (smilingly): acha Jany kay waqt kis nay Barh Barh kr kaha tha kay Adi Chaly jao, (teasingly) Main hun na... (heard Daya grumbling so asked still with Smile) Zyada Thak gaye ho kya...?

Daya: Nahi, khair Kal aa rahy ho na..?

Aditya: kyun, abhi sy Cake ki Yaad Sata rahi hay...

Obviously He knew about His Birthday and Birthdate because of His Cute Kids who started making Plans to Celebrated it before a Week Secretly either when They are Planning, the Automatically Agreeing/Disagreeing Fights Telling their Secrets Openly to Anyone...

Daya: Cake wake Sub Bhool jao, Samjhy... Aaj Raat ko Shoot hy...?

Aditya: matlab...?

Daya (irritatingly): Pata Nahi, Sony sy koi Show aany wala hy, koi Reality Show hy Yaar, like Task Wask dein gy, Wo Log... Pehla Show CID Team kay Sath krna hy tou Us kay liye Aaj Raat Special Shoot hy...

Aditya: ye kya Baat hui...?

Daya: Singh Sir ka Order hay kay Aaj hee Shoot Complete krna hy kyunkay shayed Parsun Sir ko Kerala jana hy...

Aditya: kya Yaar, pr Mujh sy tou Baat ki Nahi aur Bataya bhi Nahi...

Daya: tou Main kya kr raha hun Janab...(seriously) Adi, Mujhy Zyada malum Nahi hay.. aaj PackUp Time pr Un kay Office sy Nikalty huay, Main ny Thora Buht Suna tha... wo Log koi Candid Camera ka Idea Use krnay waly hain...

Aditya: tou Tumhein kesy malum hua...?

Daya: kya Yaar, Tum tou ho Nahi tou Mujhy hee Information rakhni hogi na... acha Suno, Khana Kha lo, Main 15 minute mein Tumhein Lenay aa raha hun (little frustrate tone) abhi Briefing mein bhi najany kitna Time lagy...

Aditya: wesy ye Candid ka Chakker...?

Daya: ye Mujhy bhi Samjh nahi aaya... bas thora Alert rehna... shayed Wo Reality Show waly kahein Chup kr Humein Shoot karein ya Task Complete krny dein (naughty tone) kisi sy Bewajah Fight Mut krna (Aditya Mouth Opened, Daya added Imagining His Friend Shock with Smile) Director ko Zyada Pareshan Mut krna, Khana Theek sy Kha kr aana aur haan kisi (totally naughtily Smile) Bacchy ko Daatna tou Bilkul nahi... (smilingly) khas kr Us ki Driving Capability pr.

The Call Dropped tone gives Him a Laughing Blaster although He was Little Confused and Not Satisfying of such Experimental Shoot especially with Other Media Houses or Shows etc but He does not say anything to Production House having so many Complains in Past as Currently the Captain of Ship Only working of RE-VAMP and EXPERIMENTS...

Aditya after cutting Call really feeling Irritation and Frustation as now a days, He only feeling these Two Emotions so much regarding the Work He Enjoyed from quite Long time...

He called out His Wife and after Telling Him about His Program which obviously Displeased Her but after Finishing His Dinner Together now, He rushed out as His Pal coming 2 minutes Earlier than His Given time...

He hopped inside His Friend Raam Pyari as per His Pal the Name He was given to His Car, who Speeds Up with Bad Mood so after Covering few miles, Aditya asked...

Aditya (asking): Teenun ki Shoot tou Sath hogi na..?

Daya: Nahi, (softly either still Irritation was visible on His tone) Main Tumhein Studio Chor kr aagy chala jaon ga... (with sigh) Mujhy Mudh bulaya hy aur Sir ko shayed kahein aur bulaya hy, wo Apny Driver kay Sath pohanchy gy...

Aditya: matlab, kahein Reality Show (teasing tone) sach mein Real Na ho jaye...

A Small Smile comes over Daya Lips Hearing a Teasing Line and Rushed Up, His Cell continuously Ringing Telling Him about His Late Arrival so after Stopping His Car in front of FWS, Abhijeet stepped out although Daya Suggested;

Daya: Cell dy do, Mana kiya hy, Dashboard mein rakh leta hun.. Tumhein Aadhy Ghanty Baad ya jesy Shoot Khatam ho Main Yahein sy Pick kr lun ga.. Koi Masla hua ya Late tou ooper VN pr bhi ek Cell para hy...

Aditya gave Him His Cell as in Last Month, He Lost His Cell Set which was given to Him by His Wife and Suffering a Small Sad and Angry Emotion of His Wife as it was His Anniversary Gift so it's Better to Safe it and after Saving it inside Dashboard, Daya rushed after Wishing GOOD LUCK...

He entered inside at Fire-House Production House Studio, Looking Here and There and after getting No one including Guards and Watchmen, so Return to His Vanity Van, Stopped...

Yes, Surprisingly, He found a White Envelope Stuck with the Handle of His Vanity Van so First Looking here and there, having a Feel of Seeing by Someone makes Him coming in Action in that CANDID CAMERA SHOOTING BATTLEFIELD...

He Postponed the Idea about Calling anyone after coming in that Task Ring of a Reality Show, opened it, found a Printed matter which having an Order to Leave move ahead to His Left side having a Small Lane mostly containing Residential Building having Lovely Lawns, Porch, few Small Dhaba type Places etc...

He started Walking in that Lane seeing the Poll or Tower Lights after Invaded that Envelope inside His Trouser Pocket and during Enjoying this Walk Waiting for Anther Q which Hit Him by a Small Champ who giving Him another Envelope and Rushed gives Him a Small Smile...

"Prepare a Table getting Desired things from the Places found in this Lane by Handling the Anger of their Owners in just 2 minutes

Aditya Eyes giving a Shocking Expressions reading the Last comment even the Winking Emmocation Raise His Bar, of this Letter still Printed so during invaded it inside Envelope looking here and there, found the Small Dhaba, either Saving it in His Trouser Pocket, Stepped there with murmuring TABLE...

His Mind now Started working in Speed as He feels it's a Task Competing with Time, might be Singh Sir also Present during this Shoot ...

He Speeds Up, Look at the Owner of Dhaba and giving Him Offer of a Selfie with Him Amazed the Owner whose 32 Teeth are Out from His Denture without making any Issues and picking Set of Rectangular Table having 2 Benches aside and then Set it in Middle of Road in a way that the Table placed at Middle while Both Benches He Set in Horizontal way below the Table gives it a Nice Look and seeing the Watch Completing His Task in 1 minutes 49 seconds...

Before He takes a Sigh, got another Envelope which He got by another Man, rushing in His Bike makes Him Stunned as How the Person Quickly giving it and Vanish in Air...

Decorate it with Nicely having Silky Softens Items Texture, Accessing the Things around in just 3 minutes...

Aditya really in Tension as there is Nothing Specifically arranged by Production House for the Scene as it was a Task given to Him by another Media House Reality Show, When He Running out of that Lane, find almost the Busy Life of Area Dipped in Dark having No One He knew or having Glimpse from Member of His Production House or any other Workable Departments...

He was Roaming here and there, Scanning the Area having so Many Small Carts, Small Shops, Road having few Speedy Vehicles, He saw His Wrist Watch, He already Lost 1' Priceless Minute... He again Scanned and then without any Other Idea, Started Taking Out Some Cloths of Cotton and Chiffon using by Carts Owner and Small Shops Owners to Provide Security and Shade to their Customers by Using these Soft Cloths in Day time or Covering for their Items in Night...

He still Tensed that might be any minute, any Person came and Accused Him for Stealing those things gives Him another Small Span of Smile where after taking them to His Table side, He Murmured " CID ka Rakhwala bana Khud CID ka Dushman a more broad Smile came when He think more on that aspect " Singh Sir kay liye ek Naya Idea...

He Sighed and then Placed the Chiffon Sheet over the table, and then making Stripes of another Chiffon Sheet after placing Few Stones taking them from Roadside over that Chiffon Sheet He placed to make it Settled...

After making Elongated Stripes, He made Nice Ribbon Bows of them and placed them in Organized manner over Table and someone Dashed Him and Go Away as he found another Envelope Stick over His Shoulder so take it in His Hand seeing his Wrist watch where He did all more than 3 Minutes...

He already knew He Lost this Task because Tearing Cloths from His Teeth is Time taking Procedure... Ufff, wipes the Forehead and Head turned Wet in such Long Surgery of Cutting Cloths, He Smiled Thoughtfully...

His New task is to Hanging Balloons around the Table in 2 minutes makes Him totally Confused at First, but as not to Waste any minute as He does not want to Lose His winning chance now...

His Mind stroke and giving Him a Small Flashback Remembrance so now without Wastage of Seconds, proceeds to Same Dhaba which was now Shut only by a Small Cloth used as Curtain at Main Entrance...

He entered and went to Kitchen side, got a Box having Newspapers which mostly Dhaba Owner used for binding Foods, so make them in Ball shaped, placed it over Chiffon cloth piece and make it in a round Balloon shape and after tearing long Strips of Cotton cloth bind it around Four corners of that Table...

When He finishes His work, found another Envelope over Table, got it either seeing His wrist watch showing 11:52 PM...

He reads the Next Task which based on making Flower bunch in same 2 minutes, with a Mandatory Claw as Flower should be Real and having Nice Fragrance, forced Him to pressed His Teeth and Fist too, obviously in Heart...

He looked around, seeing Lawns and Gardens at outside of Houses and Bungalows but mostly Flowers He found there were Odorless, so first He Plucked Grasses from the Grassy beds, puts them over Chiffon cloth and now He was Thanking that He got a really Big cloth piece having Good length and width...

Then He was seeing from the Crevices of Gates of Houses inside and got Scold/Loud Voices of Watchman, Bark of Dogs but as He knew His Skills so selected those House having Good Flowery Garden and Big Dog...

He looked at His wrist watch, already Waste Half of minute in that choosing ride, so now just take position and jumped inside the wall, meeting a Big Dog waiting for Him, but the Charmer started His Magical Spell, patting over Dog head who turned to His Pet after feeling the Love in that Pat and now helping Him collecting Full Blossom Fragrant Flowers and after half more minute,

Aditya did His work Look at the Dog again, hugged Him through His Neck who really feels Happy to find a Celebrity Friend and Jumped out...

He placed All Flowers in Middle then used those Grass around them to Hides their uneven Stems and then tied them with chiffon cloths and placed it aside...

The next Envelope He found when He jumped out from the outside Lawn of same House and after reading it, Smiled and went inside the Dhaba...

He takes few Steel Glasses, fill half of them from the Ghee and then makes long strips of Cotton cloth dipped them inside Ghee and then arranged them in Circular manner over Table...

He picks another Envelope and then move inside again, taking Plates, Spoon and placed them accordingly with placing Chiffon pieces over them referred as Napkin and then Sparkled the STEEL GLASSES DIYA'S...

Just He Lightened the Last Diya, Surrounding echoed with Loud Clapping and Happy Birthday Song Sound where He first see the Wrist watch giving Two Arms One over Other in Upward direction Soundly Rested over 12 Digit and then His friend Daya grabbing a Cake and after placing it in Middle, Glittering through those Lovely Diya's, Hugged His friend with a Joyous Wish, and comment...

Daya: Mujhy laga, Sir (looking Dinesh meaningfully with) Start mein hee pakr Lein gy...?

Aditya: agar Tum Flower bunch wala idea Nahi rakhty tou Main abhi tak isy (teasingly) Reality show hee samjhta...

All Smiled although now Praising what their Colleague done in just few minute session totally Planned by His Best Buddy On-Screen as well Off-Screen...

Daya (again): Tum nay Us (surprisingly) Dog ko Kesy Apny Vash mein kiya...?

A Loud Laughing tones Embarrass the Birthday Boy who moved ahead to Start His Special day by Cutting the Cake with a Smirk comment as WO APNA TOU KUCH AISA HEE HY DAYA...

The Wink really Refreshes Daya because He got that the Only Participant of this Task of Reality Show liked the whole Surprise Birthday Party package of His Buddy makes Him and Rest Happy is the Lovely output came out...!

ENTRY- 6



I am not able to decide anything . Aaditya ka birthday aa raha hai . Karu bhi to kya karu ? Vaise bat to hui hai bhabhiji ke sath Adi ko surprise dene ki . Par kya du ?

Baithke me yahi soch raha tha . Par kuch man me aa nahi raha tha. Har sal hi ham iska birthday celebrate karte hai . Wahi wishes , wahi parties kuch to alag hona chahiye , kuch to !

Par Adi ko zhanse me rakhna itna aasan to nahi hai . Adi man ki bat turant jan hi leta hai . Jaise us din hua tha Interlaken ke waha shooting par . Adi ka waha cycling ka bahut man tha . Maine BP sir se request karke ek cycle chase wala scene rakhne ko bola. Jo use direct location par hi maloom padna chahiye tha . Lekin use , use pata nahi kaise pata chal gaya . Usne kah hi diya direct mujhse , " Daya , tum ye cycle wala jo scene dal rahe ho , uske bad ham dono sath cycle race laga dete hai . "

Vaise Adi ne kya koi kam surprises diye hai mujhe . Maine aise hi ek story likh di thi . Just for fun ! Hamare Aditya sab ne use sidha makers ke pas bhej diya . Aur uska Matheran wala episode ban gaya . Ab iska credit mujhe mila . Lekin Adi ne ise diya isliye to iska episode ban paya na . Nahi to sirf mere folder me pada rahta . Nahi yar . Is bar Aditya ke liye sach me kuch alag karna chahiye .


Maine hamesha ki tarah Indiatvforum ka CID page open kiya . Waha pe bhi sab ki bday ki taiyariya chalu thi . Aur ha , ye kya ? Iske liye ek bahut acha thread bana hai . 'The Incomparable Artist::Aditya Srivastava.' Maine use open kiya . Wah ! kya badhiya thread banaya hai . Aur ye dekho. Kya kya role kiye hai sab ne . TV me bhi aur filmon me bhi . TV me to kam hue kyunki CID me entry hui . Par filmon me to kafi ache role kiye . Wah !

Fir maine fans ke comments dekhna start kiya . Bahut ache comments the . Par kuch thoughtful comments bhi . Jo padhke mai soch me pad gaya . Kai fans ne likha tha ki , itna acha actor hoke bhi usko utna recognition nahi milta jitna dusre actors ko milta hai . Bat sahi hai . Hamare Aditya

ji bahut shy kism ke hai . Wo khud kisi ke pas nahi jate role mangne . Par ha madd bahut karte hai . Kai bar apne roles bhi chod dete hai dusre ke liye .

Aur tab ye idea mere dimag me aaya . Is bar bday surprise yahi hoga. Adi ko acha role offer hoga . Aur wo bhi yaha nahi , Hollywood se. Bas ! Birthday ka yahi surprise rahega. Birthday ke din Hollywood ke director ka aadmi use script sunane aayega. Fir use acha lage to wo film kar payega .

Ye decide karke mai turant kam pe lag gaya . Mere dimag me nam aaya Christophar Nolan ka . Ye ek acha director hai . Agar ye dono ki jodi mil jaye to film bahut khas hogi .


Fir maine time waste nahi kiya . Sabse pahle ye pata lagana tha ki nolan ko kaise approch kiya jaye . Bahut mehnat ki . Mere industry ke friends aur bade stars se mujhe help mili . Mujhe nolan sir ka personal ID mil gaya . Jaha par mai apni bat pahucha saku .

Fir maine Adi ke TV aur films dono me se jo behatarin scenes hai wo sabka ek video banaya . With subtitles & also some intro about the characters. Ye sabka video mail aur bio data ke sath nolan sir ko bhej diya . And of course ye bhi likh diya , ki if you want to cast him you have to send him a script . And if he likes it , then only he can accept the role .

Mujhe is bat ka yakeen tha ki agar nolan ne ye mail padha to positive reply jaroor aayega. Aur aisa hi hua . Positive reply aaya . Unhone ye bhi kaha ki wo khud script Adi ko sunayenge . Wo India aane hi wale hai . Par unka sirf ek hi problem tha . They wanted the auditions for the role . With their lines.

Ab iske liye Adi ko kaise manaya jaye ? Aur wo bhi without doubt in his mind . Mujhe usko thoda uksana padega. Par kya kare . Everything is fair in love & friendship .

Jab mai aur Adi ek din bat kar rahe the. Tab maine puch liya .

" Yar Adi , tum itne ache actor ho . Tumko nahi lagta ki tumhe Hollywood ke liye try karna chahiye ? Waha pe tumare liye bahut ache roles rahenge ?

" Sahi hai yar . Par khud kisi ke pas jana mujhe odd lagta hai . Unko mera kam acha lagega to puchnge hi . "


" Ya yu kaho ki tumhe english me dialogue delivery ya acting nahi aati ? " Maine jan bujhkar kaha .

" Daya , tumhe sachme aisa lagta hai ? " He asked with little pain .


" Ha .Mujhe yakeen hai . Par aisa kyu ? Tumhe aata hai na ? Chalo . Mujhe acting karke dikhao . Dialogues mai tumhe deta hu ."

Maine use wahi dialogues diye , jo audition ke liye bheje gaye the .

Needless to say he did his job perfectly . He acted very well . And I again sent that clip to Nolan . Nolan liked it immensely & sent his script to me. And promised me he will come for his b'day .

And then birthday arrived . All our members from CID came . His friends , relatives , our common friends all came . Cake cutting ceremony done . All gave him presents .

I gave him the same script's hard copy which nolan sent me . Adi took it with surprise & read carefully . He liked it very much . "This XYZ's character is very interesting & very thoughtful . One of the best character I have read "

" Then you are going to play this role ." Said Nolan as he entered in the hall .

Adi was surprisingly looking at him . Of course he was confused about how he came .

Then Nolan himself mentioned the whole story . And his offer to him . Adi accepted the offer happily .

Then he looked at me smiling . In that smile our meaning of friendship was hidden .


- Dayanand Shetty



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Sorry, but is this the investigative one or the non-investigative one? 😕
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Originally posted by: visrom

Sorry, but is this the investigative one or the non-investigative one? 😕

Title edited. Thanks
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BINOD baccha! mention the Dead line date for Voting in your RULES of VOTING session...

try to Post ENTRY 4 soon...
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My ratings and reviews are here. My reviews will be precise since I am not an expert in judging others.
Entry 1 - 7/10
A memorable birthday party. Daya's portrayal is good. Adorable story. Good job.
Entry 2 - 7.5/10
The writer is trying to show the existing reality through the story. Thinking level is quite different. Wonderful job.
Entry 3 - 7/10
Another different story with simple narration. Good collection of pictures. Photos are the best things which describe our memories in a beautiful way. Nice attempt.
Entry 5 - 7.5/10
A birthday day with funny surprises with little adventure. Aditya's portrayal is good. Enjoyed reading the story. I really want to know who wrote this. But I have to wait till results. Marvelous job.
Entry 6 - 7.5/10
Out of box thinking. I loved Daya here. Some of the Indian actors have done prominent roles in some English movies. Aditya really deserves it since he is underrated. Good job.

Last but not least, all the best for all the participants. Waiting for the results. Thank you for participating in the contest.

Sorry friends I forgot to type the review of entry 4. Just now I noticed it.

Entry 4 - 7.5/10
Surprise pack with unpredictable end. Good attempt.
Edited by swathi17 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: binod.abhijeet

  • All the writers must vote but the vote won't be counted .


Matlab ? Writer's own story rating won't be counted , right ? Or writers any rating ( To other writer's story also ) won't be counted at all ?
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Entry 1: Daya sir ki wife Smita mam hain. Sumita nehi jitna mujhe pata hain. Abhay Shukla had left CID. Woh kahan se aa gaye iss surprise party me!😕

Siggy is nice. 😊Decorated room pics are catchy.😊 Foods are yummy but only snacks!😲 Daya sir joh Palak Paneer aur Pulao pack kiye, woh kahan gaya! 😉Hmm... akele akele kha gaye!😛 Hume dekhne ka mauka tak nehi di. 😆😆Very bad.

Thora bahat spelling mistake aur sentence construction confusing laga. 🤔But overall it's a nice attempt writer.

Rating from my side: 5/10

Entry 2: is writer a Hindi literature student?😛 Ufff! Story based on POV lag raha hain. Starting achha ja raha tha. Lekin asal birthday celebration plan me lack of detailing.😒 Hain! This was an interview! 😲Interesting attempt.😊

Rating from my side: 6.5/10

Entry 3: ek smell aa raha yeh story GD ki hain.😉 Wild guess mar li writers. Agar dusre kisi ka ho, plz bura na man'na. Started enjoying this piece.😃 Sweet empty gift box. Fantastic negatives' idea. Yeh fourth negative I mean pic I didn't see earlier. Feeling nice.😃 Hayyy the last one is my fav also.❤️Superrr collage. A wow piece it is.🤗🤗

Rating from my side: 9/10

Entry 4: feeling like this story has come from any stalwart. 😃Very pleasant feeling has spread from the very beginning. A speechless piece.⭐️⭐️

Rating from my side: 9.75/10

Entry 5: cute starting. Spectacular piece. 👏⭐️

Rating from my side: 8/10

Entry 6: are wah! Ek story as Aditya's POV. And this one is Daya's POV. 😊Hollywood se role! For Aditya sir! 😲😲Hayyy... Kash kabhi sachhi me aisa ho. I will go for first day first show with full of my colleagues with my own expense in any multiplex for sure.😃😃 Nice attempt.👏👏

Rating from my side: 7.5/10

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Originally posted by: Kulasya.


Matlab ? Writer's own story rating won't be counted , right ? Or writers any rating ( To other writer's story also ) won't be counted at all ?

@@bold Absolutely

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