Ek Duje Ke Vaaste - An OS

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Heya folks!!!! Sorry to bother u all but today i'm very happy
EDKV is on topmost position . I became a dazzler 😃 ..Mahi and zoya made a lovely post for me...Thank u my darlings. Mittu , Anamika , Eshaal requested an os ..
Fero I owe you a ramini os .
WARNING : This OS is utter crap so read at your own risk.
Its just for fun , no offence meant. Dont kill me if you dont like this story
So here is an os for you guys...

EK DUJE KE VAASTE

Kamini was going to her room when she heard some noises coming from Shravan's room. She placed her ear close to the door to listen more clearly.

" Main bhi dusri shadi kar sakta tha. I was young, rich and succesful. Lekin main aisa koi kaam ni karna chahta tha jisse tumhari khushiyon pe koi aanch aye. Mere liye tumhari khushiyon se badhkar koi cheez nhi hai" Ramnath said

Accha to Bhaisaab Shravan ko sumo se alag karne ki koshish me lage hain. Koi fayda nhi kyunki main aisa hone nhi dungi." she smirked

"Oye soniyo!! Zara apne hath se ek cup coffee to pila dena. Bade din ho gye." came lalaji's voice

"Offo!! Ab inhe bhi abhi bulana tha aur coffee to main sirf BHAISAAB ke liye banati hu. Ab kya karoon , itne hot topic ko beech me hi chhod ke jana pdega.' she thought

She went downstairs to prepare some coffee, ofcourse she made one for her Bhaisaab.

"Kuch bhi kaho soniyo. Aap coffee lajawab banati ho. " Lalaji praised her
She gave him a sickly sweet smile.

Ramnath saw them together. Lalaji was cracking some jokes and Kamini was laughing hard.
The green eyed monster possessed him. He walked to the dining hall.

"Kamini zara mere sath upar aao, mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni hai." He said *stern face*
Kamini was so relieved to be excused but tried not to show it. She gave lalaji a fake apologetic smile. Ofcourse he didnt mind as long as he got food.
"Bhagwaan kisse shadi kar li maine" she cursed her fate

"Bataiye na bhaisaab aisi kya baat hai?" She asked in a curious tone

"BHAISAAB!!!" he winced. When he told shravan about his second marriage he only thought about her. Alas!! she was married to his brother. All his hope vanished in thin air
But after Shravan left for London he got to know her more closely. She was his carbon copy with same manipulative skills. Her sugar coated talks were cherry on the top. He liked her company . Well birds of a feather flock together!!

God forbid if any one knew his intentions for her. He shall be doomed.

She snapped her fingers and he came out of his fantansies.
" Aa..a..a... haan maine Pushkar ki shadi ke bare me baat karne ke liye tumhe bulaya hai." He said
"Pushkar ki shadi??...Bhaisaab uske bare me to humne tiwariji se baat kar li hai na. Its a destination wedding." She asked and gave him a confused look

"Haan usi ke liye maine suman ko kal ek blank cheque diya hai." He explained her
Her eyes popped out of sockets
"BLANK CHEQUE!!! " She exclaimed

This woman is crazy about money, but atleast she loves her family.

"Bhaisaab main na sach bta rhi hun . Mujhe in middle class tiwaris ke ghar me pushkar ka rishta nhi karna...maine to sirf AAP KI wajah se haan ki thi." She said in a slight raised tone.

This is why he adored her. She never questions his actions. Abides by his rules. This is what a woman should do unlike that Nirmala. Her name left a bitter taste in his mouth

"Janta hu. Mujhe yakeen hai suman wo cheque nhi legi. She values her self respect more than anything. Pushkar's wedding will be called off. It will set an example before shravan that independent woman are for no good. For them their family always comes the last. Marrying suman will lead to an unhappy future . Bas ek teer se do nishane." He gave her a victorious smile

"Waah bhaisaab aap to bade sayane ho" she said in a happy tone.
Next day he was working on a case. His secretary informed him that suman wants to meet him. He told her to send her in.

"Good morning Sumo!! Kaho kaise ana hua??"he asked
She greeted him and told him she wants to return the cheque. He already saw that coming.

"Uncle I'm independent, I can manage the money myself. I dont need that cheque. Plzz dont call off this wedding. I am ready to leave your son coz you left me no choice. You proved that you are a very good lawyer but not a good father..
Remember a day will come when shravan will realise his love and come running to me. That day I will be free of my promises, that day u wont be able to separate us. That day you will realise that we are made for each other. " With this she left.

He felt as if something was on his conscience. Was he doing wrong? Did he fail as a father??
Her words resonated "Aap ne to kabhi pyar kiya hi nhi!!!" Did she really love his son?
Will his son leave everything for her?? Her confidence gave him the answer.

If it is written in their fates to meet then let it be!!!!

I wont ask how is it?? Coz i honestly dont know what have i written.
Plzz feel free to criticize. Drop your comments n hit the like button
Tomatoes , chappals always welcomed

P.s.- Swathi ( pearl 100)your ramini breakup os is due.. i'll write it soon sweety

Take care
Priyam

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orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
________
Prii!
Kya baat hai!
🤣
Ramu mai green eyed monster for his kammo 😆
Doosri shaadi and Kamini ke khaya!
He fell.in love with her cause she is the same tangent of kamini as he is kamina 😆
Match made in heaven!
The last part
How I wish ramu ka conscious jaag jaye!
Loved it 🤗
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Priyam!
It was a lovely li'l story. I loved it!😳

"Coffee toh main sirf Bhaisahab ke liye banati hoon."
LMAO 🤣
It killed me! 🤣

Ramnaath-Kamini chemistry is something I've been thinking about too recently!
Birds of a feather flock together. So rightly said.😆

This OS was a pleasantly different one! Keep writing more!

Payal
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one
Ramu kaka Kamini ke khayalon me 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys ek duje ke vaaste on rank #1
Just saw right now
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Posted: 9 years ago
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rolfing this is really awesome ramini ke kya kehene u depicted them too well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahaha...Ramini OS! Hilarious. They indeed r birds of same feather flock together. Loved it. Congrats on becoming a Dazzler. Dazzle away..🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ramini surely have the hots for each other!! 😆. I absolutely loved it. I feel bad for Lalaji. He is a pure soul stuck with Kamini.
This was a fun read, Priyam!!

Cheers
Kennashreign
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Res
[DIV]________[/DIV][DIV]Prii![/DIV][DIV]Kya baat hai![/DIV][DIV][=))][BR][/DIV][DIV]Ramu mai green eyed monster for his kammo[LOL][/DIV][DIV]Doosri shaadi and Kamini ke khaya![/DIV][DIV]He fell.in love with her cause she is the same tangent of kamini as he is kamina[LOL][/DIV][DIV]Match made in heaven![/DIV][DIV]The last part[8->][/DIV][DIV]How I wish ramu ka conscious jaag jaye![/DIV][DIV]Loved it[>:D<][/DIV]


Zoya i honestly feel this OS isnt worthy of a single comment.
Pta nhi kya likha hai maine [=))]
But you guys are so sweet [L]
Thank u sooo much love [>:D<]
Kameeni and kamina are a perfect match [LOL]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Priyam🤗
Itna Sweet RaMini OS🤣
How did U manage this🤣
Hi5 To U
When Ramu was Talking about Remarriage Same Thought Crossed My Mind😆
Well Sumo slap him Hard by Her Word only👏
And Her confidence For Her Love
"BHAISAAB"🤣🤣The entire Meaning of this word is change bcoz of RaMini😆😆

RaMini Break Up OS
Okay I m looking Forward to it.

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