Those rainy nights : Omkara love SS , chapter 1 page 1 up !!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys ... Im new to this forum ... Huge fan of omkara . . Got this idea so thought of penning it down... hope you like it ... Please hit the like button if you liked it and leave a comment for motivation thank you so much guys

Those rainy nights : Omkara love SS

Chapter 1 : The acquaintance

He was wearing his cream coloured kurta and dark brown pants... It wasnt an ordinary day ... It was a really special day ... It was their wedding annivesaey ... He was in his studio ... Making sure he was isolated , nobody to bother him ... Sculpting a figure ... His wifes sculpture ... It was raining heavily ... He could hear the sound of the rain ... His hands startedgetting numb... When her memories cane in front ofhiseyes ... His hand stopped on the half done sculptures neck ... The day when they first met ...
Tere siva kisko sochun main
Meri soch pe tum baithe ho
Saansein jahan banti hai meri
Uss mod pe tum rehte ho

Flashback starts
It was raining and he was walking quickly on the street next to the huge mall and trees ... There ... A long hair brunutte was in the samehurry ... They didnt have umbrellas as it a " bin mausam ki baarish " ... He wantedto reach hiscar as quickly aspossible ... They were drenched from head to toe . . ...

The next thing he remembered was to feel sonmeone collide against his hard chest .. ... his hands landed on her lowerback and he tighened his grip when he felt that she was falling down and after her hands were on his wet chest ...


Tu mere alfaazon ki tarah
Tu mere lihaazon ki tarah
Gunguna lun aaja main tujhe
Tu meri aawaazon ki tarah

She slowly looked at the man who had just saved her life ... His chocolate eyes met her eyes . The time seemed to have stopped for both of them . ... They were standing euestruck in the middle of the street under the rain ... He could give anything to look at the gurl forhours in this rain ... But her eyes fell ...on the girlsclothes ... He looked at the girl her cream and pink churidaar kurta was comoketelywet . . ...she could catch a horrible cold ... He removed thehands from her lower back and took off his jacket offering it to her ...

Mere hathon se jo adaa ho
Uss duaa ki chaahat hai tu
Guzre jo Rabb ke yahan se wo
Jannati si raah tu


She took a moment to look at the guy standing im front ofher removing his jacket ... His wet long hair ... His eyes... . His upper body whch started to get visible as his white shirt was getting wet ... She felt as if she was driven towards him ... As if she was under his auras spell ... Her trance ended when The greek god figure handed his jacket to her ...


Sajda tumhe sau dafa karun
Uss Rabb ki tarah dikhte ho
Saansein jahan banti hai meri
Uss mod pe tum rehte ho


She politely refused it . ... But omkara wasnt gonna leave her there in that state ...
O. Pehenlo ... Thand lag jayegi ...
saying this he started to expded his jacket on her shoulders but she stopped him placing her hands on his hands . .. . She looked at him . .. And he got lost in her deep dark brown eyes .. ..
they were no more than few inches away ... The feeling of having each other so close and thedesire to end this distance was ocerpowering them , clearly visible in their eyes ...
Tu mere alfaazon ki tarah
Tu mere lihaazon ki tarah
Gunguna lun aaja main tujhe
Tu meri aawaazon ki tarah

Shd didnt want to ... But she managed to remove his jacket and hands off her shoulders ... .. And without uttering a word she just started leaving the place ... The silence between them spoke more than words ... Soon ... Her sight faded and it was him standing there alone ... What just gappenned right there ...trying to understand Those feelings, sensatiins ...
Flashback ends

A lone tear escaped his eyes ... And the blend knife fell from his hand ... Another tear fell on his cheek ... He picked up the blend knife . ..
Om. Tumhaare jaane ke baad mein kya se kya ban gaya ... Aansoon hein ki ruk ne ka naam hi nahi lete ... Jab bhi baarish padtihai mujhe tumhaari yaad aati hain ( he started walking towards the window ) bas kuch samey baad tum mujhe chod kar chali gayi ...

In adarkroom... A girl is tied lying on the floor sideways ... She can hear the Raindrops ... Tears flowing from hr eyes ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww...
omie jaan is missing his wife...
their meet in the flashback was lovely.
haaye..
hope they meet soon...
omie jaan's sadness.. unbearable...
continue sooonish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

aww...
omie jaan is missing his wife...
their meet in the flashback was lovely.
haaye..
hope they meet soon...
omie jaan's sadness.. unbearable...
continue sooonish.


tank you sooo much dear 😃

glad u liked it ⭐️


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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww
he's so cute yaar
u penned it really well sweetheart

shaddhi hogayi already ????

mmm who must have kidnapped her ?

lots of questions running

update soon

btw i am teju here

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...

awww

he's so cute yaar
u penned it really well sweetheart

shaddhi hogayi already ????

mmm who must have kidnapped her ?

lots of questions running

update soon

btw i am teju here


thanks a lot ⭐️

yap shaadi ho gayi ... lots of flashback romance coming ...


suspense is there for the kidnapper

hi teju nice to meet u , im viny 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
MATLAB they're married par for the moment separated with each other.
There's some reason behind it
Waiting for the next part :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRITII

Wow

MATLAB they're married par for the moment separated with each other.
There's some reason behind it
Waiting for the next part :)



Yap they are married

Youll get to know more about their situation in the upcoming chapter

Thanks a lot 😃
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just loved it dear.please continue soon.can't wait to more on my om.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start! Great job..👏

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