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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Fabulous teaser

Very intriguing !!
Update soon pls..

Thnxx for pm😊

Sure dear and thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: madhu1210

Seems interesting.


Continue soon

Thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Seems interesting
Do continue
Update soon
Do pm me whenever you update next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: bs1224

Seems interesting

Do continue
Update soon
Do pm me whenever you update next

Sure dear and thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Hey friends, thank you for your comments. I am so glad to see you liking the story.

Here the story starts from the end of the teaser.

Chapter 1

"Maa do you think our decision is right. Will your grandson accept it..? You know how he is.. Simply arrogant.." Mrs Raizada asked.

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"I want that plot anyhow, by hook or crook. Do whatever you want. Offer them money or whatever they want.. But ask them to shift somewhere else within three days." He said arrogantly and looked back into his laptop.

"But sir..!! They aren't agreeing. They said, this plot belongs to their parents and it's their last memory..." The man stopped in mid way seeing his boss's deadly glare.

"Yes.. Maybe he is arrogant but not bad from heart. It's just then, he always pretend." Nani praised him proudly.

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"I'll try one more time sir..!!" The man said looking down.

"Tell them.. We will build orphanage home on their plot and we will keep the name of the house of their parents name." He said politely that the man got biggest shock of his life as their boss never be so polite on this matter. "They are typical villagers, emotional fools. I damn sure, they will accept it." He added when the man sighed.

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"Badi maa, nani you both are forgetting, he is kind of rude also." Akash added who was passing from there and heard them talking.

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He threw the file on one of his employee's face. "I.. I am sorr.." But he didn't let him complete, "FIRED..?"

"Sir..!!"

"I said you are fired.. Get lost..!!" He shouted taking other employee's attention but in next moment he gave them deadly glare so they again engrossed in their works.

"Arnav Singh Raizada never tolerate any mistake. So, get lost." Arnav showed the way to door to the man who silently walked out.

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"I wonder whether Gupta ji accept my son for their daughter of not." Mrs Raizada said worried.

"You are saying this..? Your son is one of millions. Every girls are eager to get married with ASR.. The girl who be lucky one who will marry my chotey." Nani proudly said.

"Maybe..!! But if you see from my point of view then I will say, my son will be lucky to get such girl who will agree to marry him. It's not a cup of tea for everyone to handle him, his anger is his biggest enemy." Mrs Raizada said thoughtful.

"Badi ma, nani, Here you both are planning his future who knows your son already choose someone for himself." Anjali said which send both older ladies into a thought.

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Arnav was sitting in his cabin when he got a call, "Hello..!!"

"Hey baby..!!"

Hearing the voice, Arnav checked the caller ID which showed Lavanya. "How many times should I tell you don't call me Baby..!!" He said frustrated.

"Oh.. C'mon baby.. We love each other, I have every right to call you anything." Lavanya said.

"Whatever..!! Tell me why did you call..?" He directly asked without wasting time on useless talks.

"Come on Arnav..!! Why are you behaving so rude..! I am missing you that's why I thought to call you. But it seems I disturbed you. Anyways you carry on. Bye." Lavanya said hurt and was going to cut the call when Arnav said, "Lavanya listen.."

"No Arnav.. It's okay. Once you finish all your work, call me then. I'll wait." Saying this, she hang up the call, Arnav didn't bother to call her back and soon he engrossed in his work.

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"No. No..!! I know my chotey. If he love someone then he would definitely inform me." Nani said.

"I just hope maa, the decision we took for him is right." Mrs Raizada said.

"Don't think much bahu." Nani assured her and then looked at the clock asking, "It's 3pm.. Why didn't reach yet? Akash..!! Just call him and ask him where is he..?"

"Nani.. I got a call from office. Bro is at office." Akash informed.

"Uff..!! See bahu.. He only loves his work." Nani chuckled.

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The Gupta house was decorated nicely, Bauji was running here and there when suddenly she hit with someone, the girl was holding a tray of sweets which fall on floor making a sound. "Arey Nandkishore..!! Can't you see..? You can't get peace till you mess everything isn't?" Buaji taunt her.

"I am sorry Buaji. I will clean it." She politely said and bend down to clean it.

"Better you do it fast. Guests will arrive anytime." Buaji said when she shook her head, Buaji made faces and left from there taunting, "God knows, why Shashi took her from road, God knows who's blood she is."

"Ouch..!!" The glass piece pierced in her finger, she moaned in pain which was audible to Buaji. "Arey what will I do with this girl..!! Now please don't sit back. We've enough works to do."

"Jee..!!" She shook her head and wiped the blood with her dupatta and clean the floor.

As soon as she finished her work Bauji asked, "Now go and check Neha.. Whether she get ready or not." She shook her head and left.

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"Di.. Are you ready..?" She asked while walking in the room and stopped at the door finding Neha was dressed beautifully in a red salwar. "Wow..!! Jiji.. You look so beautiful."

"Thank you Khushi." Neha admired herself in the mirror. "Khushi can you give me the sandal from there..?" Neha pointed her to the corner, Khushi nodded and took them from there and placed them near to Neha's feet.

"What..?" Neha sarcastically asked at her, "What are you looking for..? Make me wear them."

"Oh..!! Sorry." Khushi happily did what Neha asked. Meanwhile Neha smirked at her.

"Thanks Khushi.." Khushi smiled at her just then Bauji walked in, "Neha.. You ready..?"

"How am I looking..?" Neha asked while twirled in a circle. Buaji made her stand properly and put black kohl behind her ear saying, "I hope no evil eye fall on you." Khushi looked away as Bauji indicate her.

"Umm... Buaji.. I am going temple." Khushi quickly excused from there, she walked out from her room crying when she was stopped by Payal. "Jiji.." She quickly wiped her tears.

"Khushi.. Don't get hurt."


"I am okay Jiji.. But I felt bad when Buaji call me outsider. Why Jiji..? Why didn't she accept me yet..? It wasn't my fault if ma bauji took here and gave me there names." Tears escaped from her eyes. Payal gently wiped them saying, "I don't care what Buaji thinks. I know you are my younger sister and that's all matter to me." Payal hugged her.

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Payal and Khushi walked out from their house when they found a lavish car stopped at their gate. Khushi and Payal exchanged a confuse look. "Madhumati Gupta..??" A man walked to them asking.

"Yes. She is inside. But who are you..?" Khushi asked.

"She called us.. About the plot.."

"Plot..? We told you we aren't selling it at any cost. Then why did you come again..?" Khushi furiously asked.

"I called them here." Khushi and Payal looked their behind and found their bua was standing there. "But buaji..?" Khushi tried to say something but Buaji didn't give any attention to her. "Please come..!!" They all walked inside followed by Khushi and Payal.

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"If you agree with my condition then I too ready." Buaji said to the men.

"Buaji what.." But before Khushi could say anything Buaji cut her saying, "Khushi, you stay away of it." Khushi looked away hurt and soon Buaji signed on the legal papers. "You can leave the house once you get your money."

"Thank you jee."

As soon they left Payal asked, "What are you doing Buaji..?"

"I know what I am doing. Whatever I am doing is for you and Neha, trust me." Buaji explained.

"Whom you sell it..?"

"Umm.. His name..!!" Buaji scratched her head thinking and replied, "Ar.. Arnav Singh Raizada." Khushi overheard it but she had nothing to do.

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Around 6pm, Gupta's heard the door bell, Buaji ran to open the door and found the guy and his family arrived. She welcome them happily. "Payal.. Bring Neha..!!" Buaji signaled Payal who was just going to leave when Khushi stopped her and went inside. After few minutes later, they came and Neha took sit in front of them.

"She is my daughter Neha." Buaji said but the guy and his family was looking at Khushi when the guy's mother said, "Madhurima jee we select our daughter in law." Buaji gets happy.

"KHUSHI..!! come..!!" Everyone looked at them confuse. "I choose Khushi for my son."

"WHAT..??" Buaji exclaimed.

"I am sorry Madhurima jee but my son likes Khushi." His mother said.

"Then we are sorry but you may leave because I didn't think about Khushi's marriage. You may leave." Buaji said joining both her hands, the family looked at them for a couple of minutes and then silently walked out.

"Third time..!! It is the third time, the same thing happened. You do one thing ma..!! Let this girl married first. After that I will marry because who ever comes to see me, ends up liking Khushi." Neha furiously said and walked to her room.

"Get relief..?? Who told you to bring her..? Such a bad omen." Buaji cursed Khushi and follow Neha inside the room. Khushi stood there crying and Payal stood by her side consoling her.

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I hope you have no confusion about Neha's character.

Waiting for your comments and hit the like button please.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
poor kushi 😭
i hate buaji😡 she is bad omen
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
amazing update
poor Khushi. hate buaji such mean n rude to Khushi
gosh this nani is too much arrogance..dont like her
is arnav n lavnya are in relationship.
hope arnav's family like khuahi instend of neha.
seously what does she think she is ? queen? please lol
love the update
continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: amadea

poor kushi😭

i hate buaji😡she is bad omen

Khushi should say her that she is bad omen.. 😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: shah10

amazing update

poor Khushi. hate buajisuch mean n rude to Khushi
gosh this naniis too much arrogance..dont like her
is arnavn lavnyaare in relationship.
hope arnav's family like khuahi instend of neha.
seously what does she think she is ? queen? please lol
love the update
continue

Arnav and Lavanya.. You can say they are dating.. 😉 Aaahh.. nani.. ? You found her arrogance.. Never mind.. I wish you may find her sweet and caring in my future updates.. Neha..? ? I have nothing to say about her.. Drama queen type. . 😆

Thank you for such long Comment..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Loved the first chapter 👏
Poor Khushi 😭
Eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 😃

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