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Posted: 9 years ago

4th Shot: This is my I mean our room, Asad.

Asad comes to Zoya's farmhouse wid his luggage. Zoya welcomed him.

"Welcome Asad, I was waiting for u only. Shyam, take Sir's luggage in d room I told u. Mrs. Stewart, plz arrange tea n snacks for Sir," said Zoya.

Shyam was a young Indian servant in his late 20s while Mrs. Stewart was an American servant in her late 40s.

After they had their snacks, Zoya tuk Asad to a room where there were separate 2 big beds but common washroom.

"This is my I mean our room, Asad, "Since we both will be uncomfortable in d starting to share d bed I decided dat we will live in dis room. Take whichever bed u want," said Zoya.

"Thanks Zoya," said Asad.

"No need to says thanks to ur live-in partner. U get changed," said Zoya.

She left d room.

"Lets see how much u have really changed," said Zoya to herself.

After some time, Asad n Zoya were in d hall having tea n snacks.

"Wat sud I say to my family wen they call me as I was supposed to have 2day's flight back home?" asked Asad.

"U can say dat u have some work here in New York. And since u have office in New York also I am sure u won't have any problems in doing ur work," replied Zoya.

"Dats great idea," said Asad.

Zoya went to her room n started reading a novel sitting on bed. Asad came after some time in d room n saw her reading. She did not lukd at him. He sat on his bed n started doing some office work on his laptop. Zoya did not lukd at him even once till they remained there for 4 hours before they left d room to have dinner.

During dinner also, Zoya ate silently. Asad was not understanding why she was avoiding him.

"Zoya, why r u not talking wid me?" asked Asad.

"Cuz u love silence only na. Now, I also love silence cuz I had a bad past. Do u even have any idea wat u made ur mother n sister n then me go thru wid ur silent behaviour most of d times? U even did not liked us talking while eating," replied Zoya.

Asad felt guilty as he was reminded of how he was earlier.

"Its not wrong to feel bad abt our past or not cry over it. But it does not mean dat we sud always stuck in our past n trouble ourselves as well as others around us. U r not able to take just 4 hours of silence of me 2day then do u even have any idea how ur silence affected ur mother n sister for so many years. Wat wud have happened if someday u married someone n had kids? Wud u be d same wid them?" asked Zoya.

Asad was speechless.

"Well, stop thinking much abt wat I said n have dinner," said Zoya.

They started having dinner.

"U have changed so much," said Asad.

"I think u said more than 100 times earlier. According to u, I am changed. Do u want to say dat u want me like old Zoya who always tolerated ur shit?" asked Zoya.

"I did not meant dat," replied Asad.

"Its better if u did not meant dat," said Zoya.

Asad saw Zoya eating normally widout making any mess.

"U r not eating like before I mean eating messily," said Asad.

"Dat was one of my negative points which I decided to change unlike u who did not paid attention to ur negative points of hurting others," said Zoya.

Asad was shocked n did not knew wat to say. They were silent for d rest of d dinner.

After dinner, they went to their room to sleep. They changed into their nighties.

"I hope u remember dat we r supposed to even share d workload of house," said Zoya.

"I remember," said Asad.

"Good u remember it," said Zoya.

"2mrw, u will have a test. Lets see if u pass," thinks Zoya.

"Well, Good Night," said Zoya.

"Good Night," said Asad.

Both of them slept.

Next morning, Asad got up at 6. Zoya was still sleeping. He lukd at her sleeping n smiled. He was abt to touch her face but stopped thinking how she does not loves him like before. After 30 minutes wen he is don bathing n changing, he gets a call 4m Mrs. Stewart teln him dat she is sick so she will not come 2day. He then got a call 4m Shyam teln him dat he will not come 2day as he is in d hospital for his wife's delivery. Asad realized dat 2day d housework has to be done by him n Zoya only. He lukd at Zoya who was still sleeping.

"I sud not wake her up. I will tell her later abt d calls," said Asad.

He cleaned their room widout making any noise which will disturb her sleep. He then went into d kitchen n made coffee, orange juice, veggie pizza n paneer paratha. He then cleaned d mess in d kitchen. As he was setting d table, Zoya entered d kitchen. It was 7:30.

"U woke up," said Asad.

"Yes, I woke up at 7," said Zoya.

Asad then told her abt their servants not cumn 2day n how he cleaned their room, made their breakfast n then cleaned d kitchen. Zoya smiled inwardly. She did not expected Asad to do so much work widout her. He passed dis test. Yes, it was her plan to make d servants call Asad n tell him dat they won't come 2day. Mrs. Stewart is not sick n Shyam is done wid having kids 2 years ago after which they had their tubes tied.

"Not bad, Asad," thinks Zoya.

"U sud have woke me up to help u," said Zoya.

"I did not wanted to wake u up," said Asad.

"Okay, lets have breakfast," said Zoya.

"Yes," said Asad.

They sat at d dining table n started eating.

"U made tasty foods," said Zoya wid a smile.

"I am glad u liked it," said Asad wid a smile.

After some silence into eating, Asad asked, "U changed into wat I was like 2 years ago."

"But I am modern not wid backward n orthodox mentality like u," said Zoya, "And I don't keep on firing my employees for silly reasons. Also, I don't keep on going on anyone's parents to insult them. So, I may have bcum like u but not entirely."

"I am not like dat anymore," said Asad.

"I can see," said Zoya.

After breakfast, Zoya asked for Asad's clothes to iron them along wid hers.

"Zoya, u don't need to do dat," said Asad.

"I have to do dat, Asad. Since Mrs. Stewart is sick n Shyam has taken a leave for 2day for his wife's delivery, we only have to do all d house work. Since u already cooked d breakfast & cleaned our room n kitchen I am left wid ironing ur clothes, doing laundry n washing dishes. It's a matter of just a day," said Zoya in a blank tone.

Asad was amazed wid her statement. He gave her his clothes to iron.

"I am glad u have not done anything to disappoint me otherwise it will not take me a minute to call airport office to deport u like u did 2 years ago," said Zoya wid a sarcastic smile.

Asad was hurt at her statement. He recalled how he called Mr. Bhatawdekar to deport her while revealing d lie abt d engagement. He recalled how he told Zoya to leave d house several times or threatened to throw her out of d house weneva he got angry wid her.

"Ab tumhe pata chalega ki jab koi tumhe baar baar ghar se nikalne ko yaad dilaata hai to kaisa lagta hai. Now, u will know how u had hurt me," thinks Zoya.

After Zoya was done wid all d work, she got ready for office. Asad had already left an hour ago. Zoya thought abt all d things Asad did 2day.

"U have passed 2day's test but still u can't have me so easily," said Zoya.

A week passed, Asad n Zoya had started talking more wid each other. They have bcum friends but Zoya was still not ready to accept his love as she did not wanted to be hurt again by him. They talked like friends, watched movies 2gthr n like earlier had late night coffee on d park bench. Asad found dat Zoya no more spills chips n other things while eating n she no more keeps d foods on d bed to eat them n wiping her hands on d bed-sheets(These were some of d times I hated Zoya doing. Even 5 year old kids don't make so much mess). Asad wud talk to his family weneva he wanted but he wud never mention anything abt Zoya as she told him not to mention anything abt her. So, his family did not even had any idea dat Asad had met Zoya again in New York. Weneva Zoya's family wud come to meet her, Asad wud hide 4m them or leave d house before they come.

Asad saw a pack of Stayfree pads n got embarrassed. Just then, Zoya came out of d washroom n got amused seeing him lukn embarrassed at d sight of sanitary pads.

"Sorry, u got embarrassed," apologized Zoya.

"Its okay," said Asad, "I am not used to seeing sanitary pads on someone's bed."

"U were in d study room so I did not bothered to keep it in d cupboard so early," said Zoya.

"I came to take a file 4m d room. Well, I don't think I sud be embarrassed so much as u r my live-in partner not my mother, sister or any other girl," said Asad.

"I did not expected him to be so calm abt it. If he was old Asad he wud have got irritated n left d room. Dis was not some plan of mine but got to know Asad's reaction," thinks Zoya.

Zoya kept d pads in her cupboard.

"Mrs. Stewart, bring green tea for me," called out Zoya.

"Green tea is good for stomach pain during periods. U need sumthn?" asked Zoya.

"No," replied Asad.

She got on her bed to rest while Asad sat on his bed.

"Did u got into any relationships after I left?" asked Zoya.

"No," replied Asad, "After dat night, I realized wat a jerk I was. Wen u left, some relatives suggested me to marry n some even brought recommended proposals for me but I can't marry anyone. I always thought dat I don't deserve any girl."

"U always said to Dilshad aunty dat u wanted a woman like ammi & u will marry anyone only for ur ammi. Its not necessary dat all woman will be like ur ammi but can be different 4m her. U always easily said dat u will marry someone only for ur ammi but wat abt d girl u wud have got married. She wud have got miserable dat u only married her cuz of ur ammi not cuz u loved her. Its necessary for love to be there for each other before marrying someone. Widout love, a marriage is not a marriage but its sumthn like prostitution cuz people sleep wid prostitutes just for pleasure widout any love n in marriage cases just cuz they want to produce babies out of their wives," said Zoya.

Asad was shocked wid wat she said. In dis way, she called their suggested marriage plan by his mother a prostitution cuz he did not confessed his love to her n always hurt her.

"Wat abt u? Did u had any relationships in these 2 years?" asked Asad changing d topic.

"No," replied Zoya, "After my bad experience wid Akram & u, I did not wanted to get into any relationships. I did not wanted to have any heartbreaks for d 3rd time."

"Oh," said Asad n asked, "How did u thought of opening ur business?"

"It was my dream of doing it wen I was doing my MBA. I wanted to be a businesswoman after working for some other company for work experience. Even a woman can do business. U did not let Najma or aunty outside d house after 7pm just cuz they were women. Dis shows u did not wanted Najma to work but only stay at home even after marriage. I wanted to tell u abt my business plan but before dat aunty came wid dat 10 day challenge. If I wud have told u then u wud not allowed me to open a business," said Zoya.

"I am not like dat anymore now, Zoya. I realized how I wud think like a stupid wen it came to working of women or them staying out late at night. I realized how women needs to independent. Also, girls sud be taught to face d world instead of setting ridiculous deadlines for them as someday they will have to stay away 4m their family n be on their own. As for Najma, she has now joined my business along wid Ayaan," said Asad.

"Good to see u changed so much. I wish u were like dis earlier," said Zoya.

"I too wish dat," said Asad.

"Hope u don't back to ur old self again," said Zoya.

"I won't," said Asad.

Mrs. Stewart knocked on d door.

"Come in," said Zoya.

"Dinner is ready," said Mrs. Stewart on entering.

Asad n Zoya went to d kitchen wid her.

Next Shot: "You were just a toy to me?"(Who will say to whom-Guess)



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after so many days u updated
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nice update...precap is interesting...who uttered those hurtful words...thanks for the pm...
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zoya is going to say that... awww bad
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So glad to see an update of this story after so long
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Nice update
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5th Shot: You were just a toy to me

2days passed by, Asad n Zoya got more close to each other. They wud spend a lots of times wid each other. Some days ago, their companies signed one more deal due to which they wud work 2gthr sometimes in her office n sometimes in his office.

One day, they were working in her cabin. Matt came to meet Zoya. They chatted for some time. Asad too chatted wid them. Just then, Asad asked for a coffee..

"Will u come for a coffee?" asked Asad.

"Sure," replied Zoya.

"Its nice dat she agreed but don't leave her alone somewhere. Once u left her alone in a place which she did not knew as she was new in India wen got angry wid her for some stupid reason cuz of which she got into a bus accident," said Matt.

Asad felt guilty.

"Don't worry, I will not repeat d mistake," said Asad.

"U better don't," said Matt.

"Matt let it be na. Asad will not do dis. Asad, don't be upset. Matt is my childhood friend na dats why he cares for me like u cared for Tanveer who u hugged after dat incident even in public wen u always talked abt tehzeeb n tameez," said Zoya.

Asad again felt guilty. How cud he even hug some another girl in public wen he always talked abt etiquettes n manners. Dat same woman is 1 of d disgusting women he ever met.

"Asad, stop thinking abt dis. Lets go for a coffee," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Lets go," said Asad.

They went out of d cabin. Zoya got angry seeing d entire staff talking wid each other. They got back to their work on seeing Zoya but one man was still talking to his wife unaware of Zoya cumn near him. He saw her n got scared.(Lifted 4m a neighbouring show)

"Wats happening? Why u talking on phone during working hours?" asked Zoya sternly.

"My wife's birthday is 2day," replied d man.

"So wat? Sud I order a cake for her?" asked Zoya arrogantly.

She tuk his cell n threw it.

"No personal calls," said Zoya n left wid Asad.

"Why u threw his cell?" asked Asad.

"Don't worry, it won't break as it was of gorilla glass feature. U broke so many cells in anger so u sud not even ask me dis question," said Zoya.

"I don't do it now. I used to call u childish not realizing I myself behaved like a child throwing n breaking things on getn angry," said Asad.

Scene shifts to a cafe.

"Asad, I hope u r not upset. He really cares for me like u cared for Tanveer but she did not deserved it. Sorry, I sud not have said abt Tanveer," said Zoya.

"Its okay, Zoya. Its not ur fault," said Asad.

"Yaa of course its not my fault. Ur step-sister spent 2 months wid Imraan not knowing dat he was d father of Tanveer's baby until she herself told dat leading their marriage in divorce n Nikhat attempting suicide. Dat poor girl had already suffered domestic violence by Imraan n his family n Imraan even forced on her many times in their 2 month of marriage. She even suffered a miscarriage due to their continuous torture but she was blamed for d miscarriage. She kept quiet due to Imraan n his family's blackmail dat she will bring shame to her family if she tells anything to them. She wud have already thought 10 times before marrying him as d man who never stood for her wen she was insulted by his family can never stand for her but she was so blind in love," said Zoya.

Zoya smirked while Asad lukd away for a moment. She then turned normal.

"Sorry, main ye sab kya bol rahi hu. Lets talk sumthn else," said Zoya.

"Zoya, u don't know how happy I am feeling on spending time wid u. I never knew dat live-in relationship can be so interesting. I always thought dat whoever goes for live-in relationships r disgusting. But I was so wrong," said Asad wid a smile.

"But live-in relationships r only nice wid trusted partners," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Yes," said Asad wid a smile.

"We will work 2gthr for 2 weeks," said Asad.

"Its nice na we will spend more time wid each other," said Zoya.

"I never thought I cud even talk to u again let alone spending time u & living in d same house wid u. But u r really proving dat u have changed," said Zoya.

"I am so happy dat u gave me dis chance," said Asad.

"After seeing ur efforts wen we were working on our 1st deal 2gthr I had to give u dis chance," said Zoya.

"I assure dat I will utilize dis chance properly," said Asad.

"U r already utilizing it properly," said Zoya.

2 weeks passed by, Asad n Zoya started going out very often. They wud go for shopping, movies, beaches, restaurants, etc. Asad n Zoya's working 2ghtr for dat deal ended. They had a party to celebrate it in her farmhouse d same evening their work on dat deal ended.

It was d last night of their relationship. They had their dinner outside. They then left for home. They tuk pakoda 4m an Indian stall on d way on Zoya's insistence to eat at home.

At home, they were still in d clothes they wore for their dinner date. They went to their bedroom n sat on Zoya's bed. Zoya tuk out d pakodas 4m her bag. They started eating them after Zoya distributed it in 2 plates. Suddenly, they felt some weird sensations.

"I think dis pakoda has sumthn in it," said Asad.

"Oh God, why always pakodas betrays us?" asked Zoya astonishingly.

"Relax, we will be better till morning," replied Asad calmly.

Suddenly, they started laughing.

"U know wat, Zoya? I love u so much. I still regret for wat I said during dat bhang night. I know u hate me thinking dat if I can those things in intoxicated state wen people usually speaks d truth wat may I be thinking of u. But believe, I really regret for wat I said. U r such a nice girl who did not wanted me say sumthn against Mr. Rashid widout proof n in anger so u teamed up wid Ayaan n fooled me but I got so angry on u & even left u alone. I did not even thought dat u r new to India & I sud not leave alone. Cuz of me, u met wid an accident. U were right d night before u left Bhopal dat u always fall in problem cuz of me. But I always called u musibat magnet wen in reality most of d times, u fell in musibat cuz of me. Even if it was not my fault, its wrong to call someone musibat magnet cuz no one falls in trouble on their own or one sud not mock anyone for getn into trouble. I confessed my love to u but in d next moment, I talked like a jerk saying dat dream can't be a reality. I was wrong to say dat u can't be someone's wife n daughter-in-law wen in reality its me who can't be someone's husband n son-in-law. I told u dat u can't understand abt family as u don't have one. I called u misfit which was mean as u had said," said Asad.

"Asad, don't think abt dat night. I know u have changed so much. U made me fell in love wid u again. I also love u so much. Lets forget all dat," said Zoya.

She got up n started singing d initial lines of Katra Katra song while lukn at Asad

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Iss tarah se khudse aa mujhko jod tu
Thoda bhi mujhme na mujhko chhod tu
Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main

Asad got n said d following lines as he came before her.

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

He held her n pulled her 2wards him as he continued singing.

Dariya tu khaali kar de
Mujhme saara tu bhar de
Tujhko aa main pee jaaun, pyaas bujha do..

Zoya kept her hands on his chest n sang.

Laana kuch baadal laana
Unko mujh par barsaana
Boondein teri ho jinme, unse bhigaa do...

Zoya went outside d room n Asad followed her till d garden. He hugged her 4m back n sang.

Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main

He ran his hands on her arms 4m back as he kept singing. Zoya felt nice at his touch.

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

She turned around to face him. She puts her arms around his neck as she sang.

Khud se khaali ho jaaun
Aaja tujhse bhar jaaun
Tinka tinka jal jaaun
Aise jalaa do.. ho..

Asad picked her up in his arms n sang.

Tairun main tan pe tere
Thehrun angon pe tere
Gehari jo khawahish teri
Unme duba do..

He tuk her back in their room as she sang. He dropped her on his bed.

Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
tujhko odh loon main

He lied next to her n came on top of her as he sang. He kissed her forehead. She turned over cumn on top of him n kissed his forehead. She removed his coat n kept it on a nearby chair. They then lied next to each other n hugged each other passionately on d bed. As he was finished singing, he sat up n caressed her face lovingly.

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

Zoya too sat up.

"We sud not do anything in dis state cuz we might regret it later. We sud not even kissed each other on d lips let alone getn intimate," said Asad.

"Dat night too, we did nothing even in dat state," said Zoya.

"Now, one month passed of our live-in relationship," said Asad.

"2mrw, I will give you a big surprise," said Zoya.

"Wat surprise?" asked Asad.

"U will know 2mrw," replied Zoya.

"I will wait," said Asad n dozed off.

Zoya smirked seeing him passed out. She checked whether he passed out fully.

"U will get ur surprise but u will not like it," said Zoya wid a smirk.

She lied next to him n dozed off after some time.

"Next morning, Asad got up 1st. He smiled seeing Zoya still sleeping n caressed her face which made her open her eyes. She smiled back at him n got up.

"How r u feeling?" asked Asad.

"Better," replied Zoya n asked, "And u?"

"I am also feeling better," replied Asad.

"I am glad dat nothing happened between us in dat state like earlier wen we had bhang pakodas," said Zoya.

"I am so happy dat did not crossed our limits even in dat state," said Asad.

"Well, lets get ready for breakfast. I have a surprise for u," said Zoya.

"Wat surprise?" asked Asad.

"Will tell u later," replied Zoya.

After breakfast, Zoya brought Asad in d hall for his surprise.

"Wat surprise u want to give me?" asked Asad excitedly.

Just then, 3 men came entered d house. One was Indian while other 2 were American. Matt was wid them.

"Dis is ur surprise, Asad. U r getn deported now," replied Zoya wid a smirk.

Asad was shocked at wat she said.

"Zoya, wat r u saying? Wat did I do wrong?" asked Asad shockingly.

"U did wrong in cumn here in my country in my city. U sud not have come here, Asad. These immigration officers will deport u to ur country," replied Zoya smiling at him.

She then turned to d officers n said in hindi, "Humaare beech koi rishta nahi hai. Jinhe rishton ki kadar na ho unke saath kisi ka koi rishta nahi jud sakta. Mr. Kapoor, aap Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan ko yaha se le jaa sakte hai. Mr, Asad iss mulk ke liye hai hi nahi. Unka yaha se jaana hi behtar hoga."

Asad was stunned as he recalled d same words he said to Zoya 2 years ago to Mr. Bhatawdekar not paying attention to her tears due to him hurting n insulting her.

Humaare beech koi rishta nahi hai. Jinhe rishton ki kadar na ho unke saath kisi ka koi rishta nahi jud sakta. Mr.Bhatawdekar, aap Miss Farooqui ko yaha se le jaa sakte hai. Miss Farooqui iss mulk ke liye hai hi nahi. Unka yaha se jaana hi behtar hoga.

Mr. Kapoor translated it in Hindi to other officers.

"Mr. Khan, go n pack ur bags," said Mr. Kapoor.

Asad went inside. Zoya n Matt followed to d room.

"Zoya, why did u do dis?" asked Asad hurtfully as tears fell 4m his eyes, "Wen u hated me n did not forgave me why u played wid me for dis 1 month?"

"I played wid u for 1 month? And wat u did wid me? U played wid me for more than 4 months in d 6 months I lived in ur house," replied Zoya in an angry tone, "Weneva u behaved nicely I thought u changed but I was always wrong. After Akram's incident, I thought u will be nice to me n bcum friends wid me but u twisted my hand n held my neck threatening to kill for some stupid reason n then u threatened me on gunpoint to do things for u. After saving me n kissing my forehead in Mangalpur, I thought u will changed but u showed ur true colours saying not to tell d incident to ur family which they had every right to know. U did not let me help a rape victim who was also ur cousin by keeping her in our house. Wen ur mother got shot, u blamed me for it n slapped me so hard dat I even hurt my hand wid d metal water vessel. Wen I tried to meet ur mother at home, u manhandled me n threatened to kill me if I met ur mother. Wen I told u dat u r hurting me, u left me n said I don't deserve a mother. After dancing during dat bhang night, u said nasty things to me in intoxicated state. I thought dat u will bcum friends after dat night but next morning u left me alone in a deserted place even though I was new in India. Wat if I lost my way or someone had kidnapped me? After Tanveer came, to hide ur feelings n push me away using her. U enjoyed hurting me by making me jealous. U said dat I don't deserve to be in any family to Tanveer after dat gas incident even on knowing dat I was an orphan. U easily believed dat I cud have done sumthn wid d gas cylinder cuz only modern girl n western clothes wearing Zoya can do everything wrong. Wen we lied to DB(Dhurandar Bhatawdekar) abt our engagement I thought u will start bcumn more nice to me but u only cared for Tanveer n kept ignoring me. After dat incident, where my so-called step-sister was poisoned by ur dearest Tanu, u blamed me. U really thought dat I cud kill someone? U even thought once before dat I tried to kill u wid peanut wen I did not knew abt ur allergy. U called DB n told him to take me away teln him dat we lied abt d engagement. After doing dat airport engagement, u told me at home dat u did it for ur mother n sister n its fake. U kept on hurting me wid d word 'nakli sagaai'. Then u agreed to marry me just cuz ur mother said so not caring abt me wen I earlier said dat I don't want to get married for next 2-3 years due to my career. U just wanted to please ur mother. U wud have surely hurt me wid d word 'nakli nikaah' if I agreed wid dat. Tumhaare 'nakli sagaai'ki tarah ye 'nakli live-in relationship' tha. Now, u will realize wat all I felt dat wen u said those words which I said moments ago in d hall. So, pack ur bags n get lost 4m ur house n 4m my country. U don't belong here. Go back to ur country. Don't u expect me to come to d airport to stop u like u did."

Asad was more hurt on hearing dat.

She continued wid a smirk, "Yesterday, only u had bhang pakodas not me. I put bhang myself in ur plate of pakodas wen u were talking on ur cell. I gave u bhang to test u on wat u still think of me. You were just a toy to me, Asad. I treated u liked a toy like u treated me 2 years ago. I gave u dis chance so dat I play wid ur emotions n feelings in dis 1 month like u played wid my emotions n feelings for more than 4 months. Now, u will know how it feels wen someone hurts u."

"But how can u forget abt last night?" asked Asad.

"Raat gayi, baat gayi," replied Zoya wid a smile, "Last time, wen we spend a night 2gthr u ignored me n started sticking to Tanveer. U enjoyed making jealous not caring how much u were hurting me. God forbid if we crossed our limits in intoxicated state u wud have called me disgusting names next n threw me out of d house after insulting me badly. Glad dat, we did not crossed our limits otherwise u wud have put all d blames on me only. U don't deserve to be someone's husband n son-in-law cuz u are a misfit."

He may have done wat she had said as he really a big jerk at dat time. Asad did not said anything as he was too ashamed to say anything but just packed his bags.

"U will feel d same hurt which Zoe felt cuz of u," said Matt.

They came in d hall. One of d American officers tuk Asad's luggage n went out. D other 2 officers n Asad followed him. Asad lukd at Zoya in tears but Zoya's expression was like a hard stone. Asad lukd away n went outside wid d officers.

As Asad left wid d officers, Zoya dropped to her knees n started crying.

"Asad, tumne muje itna hurt kyu kiya?" asked Zoya wid tears in his eyes, "Kitna pyaar karti thi main tumse. Par tum mere pyaar ko samajhna to door mera respect kabhi nahi kiya."

Matt sat next to her n kept his hands on her shoulder.

"Zoe, stop crying. Now, he will suffer like he made u suffer," said Matt.

Zoya hugged him emotionally n he hugged her back to comfort her.

Next shot: "You are not taking me in the airport direction, Mr. Kapoor."

A/N: So, that toy line is said by Zoya only. What Zoya did was wrong. She acted like a bitch in playing with his feelings but what all she said to Asad was not wrong. He always acted nice after something happened but came to real self after some time like she mentioned in this part. Apart from the incidents she mentioned, there were more incidents like that. After each rituals of marriage, he hurt and insulted her in several ways even telling her to apologize to Tanveer. After Ajmer track, he dumped her 2nd time for the marriage and declared to marry Tanveer without any explanation. After Tanveer left and spending some good times, he did disgusting deed by trading her. After their union and Zoya's birthday celebration, he was about to leave for New York leaving her alone just because she did not agreed with him not stopping even with her tears and pleading. He only stopped because his mother told him. After marriage and their consummation, he manhandled her in front of everyone and would have slapped her publicly if Haider did not came in between. He threatened to divorce her because she went against him. He did not believed her doubt on Tanveer saying all hate her so she is thinking her as the culprit. He was adamant on proving Gaffur as the culprit and would have probably divorced Zoya if Haider did not brought the proofs. I think Asad never really changed as he always needed proofs to believe Zoya. So, in this story Zoya acted like a bitch to show Asad his real face that till what extent he hurt her. If in many shows, jerk and criminal like heroes are always excused so heroines can also be shown as a bitch sometimes. In recent Gul's show, people are excusing one of the lead's disgusting deeds of hurting the heroine in many ways saying he will regret and change after falling in love. But in the same show, people are ready to call one of the lead heroines bad names if she hurts the hero being a conwoman and some are not liking the heroine as a conwoman. I don't like these double standards. Well, this story has still not end. There is lot to happen now😊.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its true..
What zoya said to asad ..
But what I want to say is he never accepted there is something...
He always said -ve only..
But here its different..
They both know about their feelings...
N indirectly doesn't both confessed...
Its wrong on her part to play..
But I seriously can't fall for it..
I feel there is more to it...
What I wanna say is men are mostly insensitive jerks but women are sensitive... N easily hurt...so its hard for them to hurt...so its just lil bit indigestible...
Now what is difference BTW asad n zoya...
To show someone who is wrong we ourselves shouldn't follow them...
It makes no difference
I am not justifying but just stating fact...
But y I feel it is the last test for asad...
N zoya doing it purposely...
Will be waiting eagerly

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