IshRa Ts : Hui Mai Teri Joganiya (Dedicated to Raksha Di)

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Hey Raksha Di...

You know na... I already wished you... hai na... par mera gift thoda late ho gaya na...so sorry... Forgive me na...

This is only dedicted to You... Love You a lot Di. ...

There's no wish better than the one coming from the heart;
Wish I could personally bring you flowers full of cart!
A very Belated Happy Birthday to you!


Aap hajar saal jiyo... humesha khush raho... Yunhi stories likhte raho... & hume khush karte raho... bas yeh hi dua hai...

Ek dua mangte hai hum apne Bhagwan se,
chahte hai aapki Khushi pure Imaan se,
Sub hasraten puri ho aapki
aur aap Muskurayen Dilo Jaan se.

Aasman ki bulndiyo par naam ho aapka,
Chand ki darti par mukam ho aapka,
Hum to rahte hai choti si duniya me,
Par kuda kare sara jhan ho aapka.



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Hui Mai Teri Joganiya





There was huge hall. Decoreted with white lillies & lavender roses. There were numerous candles lit up in that hall.

At the entrance a girl was standing in simple white salwar suite with red chunri. She was looking angelic.

As the girl stepped in side the hall. A spot light focus on her & rosepetals fell on her.

There was a handsome guy kneeling in front of her & asking for her hand. She gave her hand in his , make him stand on his toes. & he lead in side the hall.

There was a huge 2 tire cake on the middle table. & a huge Greeting card Which reads Happy Birthday Ishita.

Ishita smiled fully seeing the beauty around her. & said hugging that handsome guy - Oh Raman! You did all this for me...I love you. & kissed on her cheek.

Raman blushed by her gesture and said - Yes Jaan! This is all for my beautiful lady love. Now cut the cake.

Raman lit the candle on the cake & gave her knife. She blew the candles & cut the cake & feed Raman. He also feed her.

Then he lead her to dining table. Ishita was awestruck to see all South Indian dishes. All her favourite dishes. From Idli - Dhosa to Uttapam. All South Indian.

Ishita smiled seeing all this but then it heat her.

Ishita - Raman yeh sab kya hai!

Raman - Ek saal badh gaya umra ka to ankhe kamjor ho gai kya.. Dikhta nahi sab tumhari favourite dises hai..mai kuch bhul gaya kya... Don't you like it...Oh God! You girls. Shoud I order Pizza or Pasta? Or whatever you like..

He was go on blabbering without listening to Ishita.

At last Ishita pinched him & he stop talking and shout - ouch! Jungli billi! Khana pasand nahi aaya to muje maregi kya!!! He asked with cute angry pout.

Ishita - No Raman! I love it. But yeh sab South Indian hai tum kya khaoge. You know na... South Indian food does not suite you.

Raman - Oh Jaan! Itni si baat. I can handle it for one day. You don't worry. You just enjoy your food.

Ishita - Are you sure. She asked being consered of him.

Raman - Yes 100% sure. Now eat. Warna khana thanda ho gaya to bhi muj par hi chillayegi. Le kha saying so he took a piece of Dhosa & fed her.

Then both started feeding each other & engrossed in their food & chit chatting while doing some little romance.

After dinner Ishita went to wash her hands.

When she came back Raman staterd music player. Along with that he also started singing & ask Ishita's hand for dance.
(This song is dedicated to my Beautiful Raksha Di)

Chand sitare phul aur khushbu yeh toh sare purane hain
Taja taja kalee khilee hai ham usake deewane hain
Arre kalee ghataye barkha sawan -2, yeh toh sab afsane hain
Taja taja kalee khilee hai, ham usake deewane hain


He was singing song & twirling her around the tunes.

Andaj hai uske naye naye, hai naya naya divanapan - (2)
Pehnane taj jawanee kaa hanske laut gaya bachpan
Git ghajal sab kal kee baate -2, usake naye tarane hain
Taja taja kalee khilee hai ham usake deewane hain


He sang this & Make her wear a beautiful diamond crown. & stared deep in her eyes as if saying you are my princess.


Hai rup me itna sadapan, toh kitna sundar hoga mann - (2)


By singing this he traced all her facial features & flaunt his head & put his index finger on his dimple as if thinking.

Bin gahne aur singar bina woh toh lagatee hai dulhan
Kajal bindiya kangan jhumke -2, yeh toh gujare jamane hain
Taja taja kalee khilee hai ham uske deewane hain




And he put a red chunri on her head as if making her his bride and murmured in her ear My Beautiful Bride. She blushed at his words & lower her eyelashes.

And as the song came to end he picked her in his arms & take her out to parking lot.

Ishita - Ramannn !! Kya kar rahe ho. Muje niche utaro.

Raman - Kyun! Dinner ke baad Ice cream nahi khani wo to tumhari sab se favourite hai. If you don't want. I have other plans too. & he made her stand on her feet.

Ishita - (as like a desperate child) No no... I wannna Ice cream.

Raman laughed at her expression & took out his car keys.

Ishita saw keys & said - Raman today I wanna drive car. Please please pretty please.

Raman did not want to upset her so he gave her keys open the car door for her & went to sit in passenger seat.

She drove very smoothly. & said - Achcha Raman. You did not gift me any thing. Bhul gaye kya.

Raman - Are madrasan tere liye maine hall book kiya , pura decoration kiya , Chennai se special chef bulwaya , yanha tak ki tere liye maine gana bhi gaya aur tuje abhi bhi gift chahiye.

Ishita - Abhi bhi matlab kya! Mera Biryhday hai to muje gift chahiye matlab chahiye. Wrana mai tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi.

As if her words pricked his heart he became restless as if something bad was going to happen.

Raman - No Jaan ! I got you a gift. Now don't you ever dare to say You wo''t talk to me...

Ishita ignored his serious words & asked excitedly - Really You got me a gift. Show me na. Where is it? Tumhare pocket me hai. Dikhao muje. Dikhao.

She was so engrossed in her gift that she forgot that she was driving without her eyes on road.

Raman saw a truck coming from opposite side. He shouted - Ishitaaa...

Ishita turned car left side. So that that truck would heat on her side of car & Raman would not have more injury.

& then Banggg...


TBC...

So I complete 1st part of this TS here only. Hope you will like my Gift Raksha Di...

Excuse me for errors.
Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks u so much piyu
I loved this gift alot
Loved the title and the banner
Beautiful creation
So its her birthday
They r already very much in love
He arranged everything for her
They were enjoying each other's company and then the accident
God ,please keep them safe
Update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was wonderful update except what happened in the last
Raman loves Ishita and he arranged such a wonderful birthday surprise for his princess.

I hope both are fine.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful start..
Both love each other..
At last..bang .ohh god..hope they r fine
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...
Lovely but scary tooo...
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG yeh Kya Ho Gaya
Everything was going good and suddenly this..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was really nice
Mujhe pehle se lag raha tha ki last mein jakar inka accident ho jayega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Hope Ishra r fine
update soon

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