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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Beyond superb part...


thank you so muc
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: raaz19

Loved it...poor sanskaar even when his lady is home the family cannot see him in peace...

Loved the family element and the longing to be with each other...

Update soon...


i am glad you loved the family element!šŸ˜‰

thank you so much!

will update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...princess...

Awsome
Liked it when he lifts her,the family suprise
Aww sanskaar longing to be with swara while Raglak doent allow
Update soon



i am glad that you liked it!

thank you so much!

will update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey nidhi... this is superb Im loving this... disturbance ha... ha... ha... I was laughing man... just another awesome update from you... what I can I say no more words from me... just fabulous.. finally the pain is over... or will sahil plan something... the temporary separation scaring me...


With love...

Kam...



i am glad you are loving this!

thank you so much!

sahil planning! dont knowšŸ˜‰

will update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago

thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: whity.007

šŸ˜† I liked it Especially
Last 3 lines.

I hate u guys
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i am glad that you liked it!😳

thank you so much!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
__Chapter:6__

She groaned when she heard her phone ringing taking off her sleep. She quickly reached her hand towards the side-table and took up the phone without seeing the caller-id. And she didn't have the strength to look upon the caller-id. For god's sake she was wakening up from her beautiful sleep!

"Hello!" she said into the phone rubbing her eyes

"Hello Swara!"

"Who?" she asked sitting on the bed

"Sahil" he replied gritting his teeth

"Sahil why are you calling at this point of time?" Swara asked now really confused

"I want to talk to you! Can we meet up please?" Sahil asked with desperation in his voice

"Now?" Swara asked turning her face towards the washroom door where she felt some sound

"Yes! Please Swara mana mat karna!" Sahil said, while Ragini came out of the washroom and looking at her confused

"Thike hain! Music Academy?" Swara asked while Ragini waited for an explanation

"Yup! In an hour!" Sahil said and hung up

"Kiska phone tha Swara?" Ragini asked sitting on the dressing table

"Sahil ka! Kuch kehna hain usseh! Music Academy jana padega!" Swara said taking out her clothes from the wardrobe to freshen-up

"Par tum aaj kese ja sakti ho? Shopping jana hain hume!" Ragini said getting up

"Shopping kyun?" Swara asked

"Surprise hain" Ragini said winking while Swara smiled at her antics

"Tum bhi chalo humare saath!" Swara said and headed towards the washroom to freshen-up

*

"Ma hum ja rahe hain!" Ragini said getting hold of Swara's hand

"Arre Kahan ja rahe ho?" Sanskaar asked, he really wanted to spend some time with his love but poor boy.

"Tu mere saath aa raha hain!" Laksh said getting hold of his hand

"Arre par kahaan?" Swara and Sanskaar both said in unison, now Swara had lost her temper

"Surprise hain!" Both said and they both face-plamed

"Tumlog surprise nahi shock dete ho!" Sanskaar said while the family members laughed at his statement

"Chalo Swara!" Ragini said

"Arre par hum saath jane wale the na?" Laksh asked

"Haan! Par hume thoda zaruri kaam hain!" Swara said, she didn't wanted every-body to know that she is going to meet Sahil

"Acha thike hain!" Laksh said casually

"Kyat hike hain lucky? Inhe humare saath ana chaiye na!" Sanskaar asked

"Tu chup chap baithe! Tu mere saath aa raha hain bas!" Laksh said making Sanskaar frown

"Chale Swara?" Ragini said and she nodded

"Ek min Ragini!" Swara said stopping her

"Mom mera mangalsutra?" Swara asked, she really wanted to feel that sacred necklace around her neck

"Woh chori tujhe kuch din baad hi milenge!" Sujata said and walked in-to the kitchen laughing inside

"Par kyun?" Swara asked confused

"Kitne sawal puch thi ho tum Swara! Chalo abhi late ho rahe hain!" Ragini said pulling her out of the mansion

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"Tum chalo na mere saath!" Swara said pulling Ragini

"Nahi tum jao! Hum yahi rukenge!" Ragini said

"Please chalo!" Swara replied

"Please Swara hume sachi yahaan se uthe ne ka man nahi kar raha!" Ragini said pouting

"Lazy bun!" Swara muttered under her breath while Ragini giggled. Swara walked towards Sahil. As soon as he saw her he smiled and stood up. She returned his smile and he forwarded her the chocolate which he had bought for her. She happily took the chocolates.

"Kya hua Sahil?" Swara asked

"Baitho na Swara!" Sahil said sitting on the bench

"Meine baith nahi sakti! Ragini mera wait kar rahi hain!" Swara said Sahil gritted his teeth seeing her impatience and more-over she bought Ragini with her.

"Tumhe pata hain Swara! Sanskaar ne kya kiya hain tumhare saath?" Sahil said coming to the point

"Matlab? Tum bol kya rahe ho?" Swara asked confused

"Usne goons bheje the tumhe marne ke liye!!" Sahil said

"What? Shail tumhe pata hain tum kya bol rahe ho?" Swara asked astonished with the fact the guy standing in-front of her is accusing her own husband

"Meine sach keh raha hun!" Sahil said holding her shoulders but she moved back-ward not wanting him to touch her

"I am sure woh koi misunderstanding hain!" Swara said knowing her Sanskaar can't do anything like this

"Acha thike hain par tumhe pata hain uske criminal records bhi hain!" Sahil said attempting his last shoot

"Haan woh mujhe pata hain!" Swara said casually knowing the happenings which led him to the jail. Sahil couldn't handle the more blood boiling in his body he just left from there toward his car! Thinking how can be so sure about him!

"Sanskaar tumhe toh meine Swara se chin ke hi rahunga!" Sahil said driving off the car. While Swara stood their confused about the happenings. She walked towards the car and sat beside Ragini

"Kya hua Swara?" Ragini asked seeing her sister's confused face

"Pata nahi Sahil bohout ajeeb behave kar raha tha!" Swara said

"Arre chodo na! Concentrate on your surprise!" Ragini said and Swara smiled.

Edited by __nidhi__ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res before pm 🤣
Unres before pm 😲 🤣

Superb update šŸ‘

Oh god raglak rocks šŸ˜Ž swasan shocked šŸ˜†

Poor sanskar šŸ˜†

And that sahil 😔

Swara supporting sanskar was awesome šŸ‘

But sahil plan 😔

Update soon
Thanks for pm which i will receive soon🤣
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
thanks for pm
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey nidhi.. awesome... lived Raglak here.. loved Sanskaar state too... sahil I knew it... he'll plan something to disturb my swasan...

With love...

Kam...

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