Arhi FF:Thread 3: UNSPOKEN LOVE Chp 26 Pg 133 (3/6/16))

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Param

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Posted: 9 years ago

#651

Felt nice to see a warm relation of friendship being formed between ARSHI.. Arnav felt bad when Khushi denied him to drop her.. however hope he understood Khushi's pain after being denied something.. loved the fabulous update

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Jessie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#652

How will they end their cat and mouse game? Welcome back. Just caught up the last three chapters.

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Divya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#653

Awesome story... update soon.. loved it..

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katj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#654

Superb update..
Khushi is right.. She should give hard time to Arnav to patch things up.. Thanks for PM

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ckocolat

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Posted: 9 years ago

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waiting for you. update please.

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amita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#656

Wonderful update

Loved it too much

Now it time for Arnav to earn Khushi's friendship and trust

Waiting for next update eagerly

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nuts4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#657

let him earn it rather khushi giving it easily...

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madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

#658

Nice chap 26...

Arnav atkeast realised how much he hurt her..n khushi didnt say a single word about it..

Hope soon he knows khushi is innocent..

Update it soon

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shalbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#659

Khushi doesn't seem to bend down easily in front of him..

It will be wonderful to see how he makes her agree if r friendship...

Continue soon

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clairvoyance

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Posted: 9 years ago

#660

Unspoken love is a fabulous piece of writing. very nice. you are extremely talented.

best love stories have always two climaxes written by the directors and later they choose one. . Especially if u note sanjay leela bhansali always chooses a painful climax. I would love u to write two different endings for this story for different readers.

One ending can be the happy ending...with arnav realisation and all

the other ending can be Khushi dying due to her breathing issues or any other reason. Because arnav from the starting has given her the most difficult pain, not the pain in shoulders or other physical pain but taunting about using his money. Why is khushi begging for friendship. I know she loves him but she knows he just doesnt want any relation with her cause of her low status and other personal reasons. Infact khushi shud just wait for the 8 months to be over. That scene was very written well when arnav is taunting her in restaurant and she is looking at her plate with guilt.

I dont want khushi to take revenge . She should take sweet revenge. She should start writing novels herself .And it should be so hit in market that the profit earned , she happily gives it to asr for all the expenses he has made to her since marriage. She should now no longer wear new dreeses or buy anything with his money unless very urgent. She should even keep an account of the food and its cost she is eating in raizada house. She should say him jao and lead your life happily.

Only when arnav realises khushi is going to die and she has less time left then only this character in you story will get the proper punishment. No punishment can be bigger than Khushi's death. Her photo with a garland will keep reminding him evrything. So two endings can be cool and innovative for FF india forums . a new style would come up. you should make the start.

and did arnav all these days sllep with lavanya too. U can put it .Look stories have to be realistic. some readers may say oh no why is arnav doing like this after getting married. But fact is the story here has arnav like that who has married unwillingly. So its possible that arnav sleeps with lavanya even after mariage for his needs . I have no problem with this angle but would you clarify..it?

and lastly keep entertaining us. fabulous job. god bless