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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello guys..thank you all for ur encouragement

without you i wouldnot complete it

here is the last part of my story


part:3


In mm all are waiting for them think various things,while sahil burns in anger thinking they both are alone,meanwhile they come inside everyone see swara in sanskaar arms looking shocked feeling all gazes she hides her face inside ,he smiles seeing her antics whispers slowly shona kyu sharma rahi hoh yeh phehli baar toh nahi na tum mere bahoh mei hona and makes her remember their momemts making her blush and she beat him with her fist while he smiles

Seeinv them all were happy except one who is buring in jealousy, sanskaar then looking at them says bade papa hum sabko sab kuch batayenge lekin todi intezar kijiye kyunki swara ko meri jarurat hain and moves towards their room

While going he asks ragini firstaid lekar ana aur jaise hih doctor aye kamre mei lekar ana and sees sahil coming towards them his anger rises for thinking of his swara but composes himself for his princess goes to their room closes the door in front of his face making him mad

Inside their room he gently lays on the bed while seeing the decoration she remembers her harsh words & insult closes her eyes saying meine tumhe bahut dard diya haina tears coming out of her eyes,seeing her guilt he says swara pls aise mat kaho tumhari baar baar sorry kehne se mujhe taqleef hota hain aur kabardar meri shona ko kuch kaha toh aur tumhe pata haina dosti aur pyaar mei no sorry no Thank you and kisses her tears wiping them

She becomes elated for being his love who loves her till death and beyond and looks into his eyes which reflects pure love,meanwhile ragini comes inside making them to come out of their world and chuckles seeing there face

Handing firstaid she says lagta hain hamari behan ko sab kuch yaad aya issliye woh tumse dur jaana hih nahi chahta kyu sanskaar while she hides her face behind him making them laugh,he gently dresses her wound after that lakshya comes along with doctor

Seeing them she grabs his arms he says swara relax kuch nahi hoga while doctor checks her and says sanskaar swara bilkul theek hain lekin uska khyal rakna woh bahut kamzor hain kyunki yeh uski dusri accident hain aur body se kafi kuch khoon nikal gaya ab ke liye uski weakness ke liye mei isse injection dunga

Listening to him she says doctor mei bilkul theek huh mujhe kuch nahi huwa sanskaar tum batao na mujhe injection nahi chahiye and looks at him as he know that doctor and injection are her fear from childhood and he cant deny the fact that it is required

So he gently catches her from behind saying shona kuch nahi hoga tumhari sehed ke liye theek hoga pls mere liye injection lagao aur waise bhi mei tumhare pas hih to huh saying soothing words he hints the doctor,as doctor injects she catches sanskaar from waist digging her fingers into him due to pain

Doctor goes saying to take proper care of her,after his exit he wipes tears from her face gently and cupping her face he asks is it still paining while she nods her head and leans on to him...Raglak leave them to give privacy as they need eachother and closes the door

They both come into hall seeing questioning gaze of everyone lakshya says aap sab chinta mat kijiye woh dono bilkul theek hain aur aram karrahe hain hmm...ek aur baath swara ko apni yadash wapas aa chuki hain making all happy but kisiko lagega jhor ka jatka

In swasan room they swasan reminces every memory of them and sleeps in eachother arms,in evening sanskar opens his eyes and gets worried not seeing swara beside him and feels bad thinking it as a dream but he sees his angel coming from washroom wearing blue saree looking marvelous

He goes and hugs her saying ek shan ke liye aisa laga ki yeh sab kuch sapna tha plz mujhe chod kar mat jana,sensing his worry she soothes him ans says mei kahi bhi nahi jaunga aur mr.sanskaar maheshwari iss janam kya aage kitne bhi janam hoh mei tumhara peecha chodne wala nahi huh samje and wraps her arms around his neck he grabing her by waist says ok mrs.swara sanskaar maheswari and look into eachother eyes

They comeout due to knock who informs everyone were waiting for them,within few minutes they come downwards with sanskaar giving support to her while walking,they move towards elders and take their blessings who were happy seeong them together

Sahil though with jealousy and anger mask it with fake smile comes forward to greet them,seeing him swasan gets angry,when he moves forward swara losing her control slaps him hard making all of them shock

Sahil not understanding asks swara maantha huh tumhe sab kuch yaad agayi lekin yeh kya getting angry

She slaps again saying yeh tappad ek patni se hain jiske pati ko tumne marna chaha joh uski sansar hain

She again slaps him saying ye do pyaar karnewale ko alag karna chaha uskeliye,she again slaps him with so much force that he stumble back yeh tappad meri taraf se hain mrs,swara sanskaar maheswari se kyinki tumne swara ko apni sanskaar se dur karna chaha joh uskeliye sabse badkar hain and slaps him again making everyone shock with her behaviour as they have never seen her angry avtar except sanskaar

Seeing her taking stress sanskaar stops says swara shaanth hojao stress legi toh phirse bemar padogi plz relax to calm her,she composes her self and warns sahil saying himat kaisi huh yeh sab karne keliye,tumhne mujhe bachya lekin meri halat ka fayda utakar mujhe sanskar se dur karne chaha sharam ati heh tumhe apna dosth kehne keliye

Sahil gets hurt seeing her likethat and realises his mistake he asks forgiveness, but swara doesn't budge and says agar tum mere saath kuch kiya toh sahyad uskeliye mei tumhe maaf karta lekin tumne uss insaan ko marna chaha joh mereliye sab kuch,mei tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga aur nikal jaa meri ghaar se

He asks forgiveness from everyone and moves with his mother,now everything has settled inside mm even she forgives parineeta

At night lakshya blocks sanskaar who asks lucky hat jao mujhe swara ke pass jana while he smirks saying bhai phehle mere saath chalo with teasing smile he pushes him towards terrace and locks the door from out saying enjoy karna

Shaking his head he turns only to freeze on his spot seeing terrace fully decorated ,he sees bed woth flowers, table bonfire etc,he moves forward but sees his princess with white saree with pearls looking like angel of heaven

Both move forward looking sensually into eachother,while he asks swara yeh sab kuch getting surprised, she bends down saying mei hamare ateeth ko bhul jana chahta huh aur isme mujhe tumhare saath chahiye,so mr.maheswari kya tum muje apne zindagi mei lekar nayi safar mei mere saath dogi

Seeing her act he falls for her innocence all over bending to her level he says mei humesha tumhara saath huh and kisses her lips while she also responds

She then takes him to table which is covered with cloth,she removes it showing the contents making him suprised which contain mangalsutra,sindoor,his gift of bangles,their ss pendent beautifully decorated on plate with flowers

He looks at her,reading his expression she says yaad hain issi chaand ke neeche humdono ekhuye aur mei chahta huh ki tum uss chaand ko sakshi mankar phirse mujhe apna lo kya tum yeh karogi mere liye with cute expression

This gesture of her has increased immense love in him nodding hia head he says tum meri princess hoh aur princess kuch mange aur prince usse pora na kare aisa nahi hota but seeing her worried expression he asks kya huwa ab kya pareshani hain mujhe batao

Woh meine hamari sagai ki anguti kho diya mandir main joh tumne mere liya pyaar se banwaya and looks down he lifts her chin saying kisne kaha tumne woh kho diya woh mere paas hain aur ab apni sahi jagah par hoga taking the ring from his pocket he slides it on her finger making her happy and then explains how he got it

Seeing his love she again hugs him,he gently lifts her in his arms taking seven rounds around the fire saying ab se hamari zindagi ki nayi shuruwat hain while eachother promise to be together forever

After that he makes her sit and ties mangalsutra around her neck along with pendant in their right ful place,he then fills her maang with sindoor while a tear escapes for her eye feeling blesses,he licks it indicating no making her smile,taking the bangles he wears them on her wrist

Seeing her fully as his wife who is not less than godess he hugs whlie she wraps her hands around him and both of them goes into world of love and bliss where the moon has become witness to their everlasting love and blissful future ahead...

hope you all like it

give me ur encouragement so that i look forward to write something again

hope you have a nice weekend😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Wow amazing story loved it all...but the best part was the way she beat sahil and the remarriage was a nice touch to a emotional story...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
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Superb ending 👏
That slap to sahil was awesome 👏
Lakshya teasing 😆
Finally everyone is happy 😳
do write more
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Anjali dear...
Fantabulous update...lived it..u wrote beautifully...do write more..

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Hey anjali... read the all parts in one go... I loved it. Just simply superb... I loved the slap.. frm Swara to sahil...

That terrace scene was awesome... one request I can't understand Hindi... please write in English... with your new work...


With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hey anjali.
Read all parts twice..loved them soo much specially swara. And the thappad👏👏👏 was awesome.

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