Shraman OS : The Lost Friend

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am starting a new os this os basically starts from where shravan tells sumo to get lost and that he was the one who won the case and the reason behind the shutting of PCT and not his dad

GET LOST

These words have been echoing in sumo mind from the time she had entered tiwari killa with preeta and the other PCT ladies now than everyone has left she was once again all alone in her room with no one to call her own she not even in her worst nightmare could imagine that shravan could stoop so low and take revenge from her in such a way by taking the only thing that actually matters to her the most but wasn't he the same shravan who in order to get back at her for the foolishness she had done 10 years ago had gone to such great extent she didn't know what to believe and what not to believe but now she was sure about one thing and that was that she had lost her friend and this time for good

Shravan's POV

Shravan was restless he knew that what he did today was wrong and something that sumo would never forgive him for not in this life time at least how is suppose to make her understand that it was all a big mistake and he would never do something so low and cheap he knew how much PCT meant to her so how could he even think of taking it away from her and how is he to correct this blunder because of which sumo now thinks the worst of him . Andethe major questions that arises in all this is that did papa know about this and if yes then why would he do such a cruel thing of taking PCT away from sumo which meant the world to her he had to do something and get to the base of this matter.
Shravan was broken today he couldn't believe that his father could stoop so low according to Mr. Berry his father knew about PCT before handing this case to shravan how could his father who could never do anything wrong destroy sumos whole business in his anger what if sumo was correct about his father that day as well what if what she was saying was the truth. With that shravan decides to go to Tiwari Killa to get his answers

Tiwari killa

Shravan reaches the tiwari killa but doesn't know how to enter the house without actually waking the whole house so he decides to enter the house through the back door.

Sh: sumo open the door (at sumos room)
Su: shravan! !! What are you doing here???? And why are you here????
Sh: sumo...
Su: no shravan just go away I don't have any more strength left in me for this pls just leave haven't you done enough already? ??
Sh: sumo pls just listen to me it'd really very important
Hearing the urgency in his voice she decides to give in
Sh: I want to know about the truth that day you were taking about that dad has hidden from me
Su: why do you want to know about that now
Sh: sumo pls yaar...
Su: chal okay but it'd actually nirmala aunty who can actually tell you what happened not me because this is her story to tell not mine
Sh: is it actually necessary to go to her can't you tell me ????
Su: if you really want to know what happened then only she is the correct person to tell you that

And with that sumo went to call nirmala. When nirmala came in sumos room she was shocked to see shravan there and was even more shocked when shravan asked her to know what was her side of the past and with tears I her eyes nirmala relayed the whole past to shravan from Ram's jealousy till their last meeting to say that shravan was shocked would be an understatement he felt as if he had been living a lie from so many years.
Nir: I am very sorry beta.
And with that she leaves sumos room to give shravan the time to absorb the new info that he came to know today.

Sh: dad lied to me sumo...my dad lied to me he made me hate my mother sumo how could he sumo how could he...

With that he falls on his knees and starts to cry sumo couldn't see shravan in this condition and goes to him

Sh: sumo how could he... (and with that he hugs her)

Sumo had no idea what plans life had for them whether she would talk to him tomorrow or no or would he remain her friend or no but for tonight she wanted to be that strength for him that shoulder that he wanted 10 years ago.

That's it guys hope you like it ...
Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh... it was amazing... well written by u... loved it...
with loadss of love
-anupriya❤️
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Originally posted by: shinegirl100

oh... it was amazing... well written by u... loved it...

with loadss of love
-anupriya❤️

Thnx dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os
Finally Shravan got to know the whole truth at least in this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurveen

Nice os
Finally Shravan got to know the whole truth at least in this

Thnx and yes because according to me no one can be so blindly trusting even it's once parents
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Last part she wanted to give him shoulder to cry which she couldn't last time it shows whatever will be situation she will keep aal her feelings aside for Shravan a quality of true friend or lover...nice update

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