FF: Dil ko kuch pata hi na chala Chapter 11 : page 121 Aug/10

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Hima Bindu.CH

@himabindu.ch

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

A new concept dear..👏..

Perfect start...

Ishita is an orphan...😭

Sr.bhallas are using Raman just for property😲...

But puttar loves his family a lot...😭

I hope ki both ishra get their true love in one another and both support each other in thick and thin...

Please update soon

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Nice build up... Ab jaldi se point par aao hehe *impatient mode on* ;)
This shaggy looks positive
N thanks for considering that point

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sheeja

@sheejarjn

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

a very good ss. ishita and Raman's togetherness is like a pieces of puzzle coming together. they need each other. please update soon.

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Sk-Sharmin

@Sk-Sharmin

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

looks like bhallas r cunning...
how poor RKB nd ishu is orphan!!

intresting teaser...

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Sk-Sharmin

@Sk-Sharmin

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

@1
something new...
hvnt read something like this before..
really feeling bad for rkb nd ishu...
beautiful update..
Raman ..he is a gem as always
ishita she deserves happiness..she lost her parents in early age like RKB..
bt atleast. RKB has a shelter to live..bt ishu living in orphanage...
lets see how both will meet
Mihir is cute..raman only well wisher
shaggy as always behind ashok..

Edited by Sk-Sharmin - 9 years ago

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Sk-Sharmin

@Sk-Sharmin

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

@2
so kamine ppl..

i hate such kind of ppl..always behind money..
bt their cunning plan going to make Ishra one..
so i am happy...
shagun character..
she is having positive character..
smthing new..
romi..
i really hope he will change..
looking forward Ishra ki coffee date...
update soon..
waiting impatiently..

Edited by Sk-Sharmin - 9 years ago

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9900

@9900

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Awesome story rida di😃

Loved it loads😃

I just love the concept 😃

Bhalla family is so selfish 😕

But hope ishra would live happily😃

Don't make ashok negative di😊

We have seen him always negative nuh😆

Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

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shasha

@shasha1989

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

New concept & interesting story dear..

Plz update soon..

Thanks for pm.

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Hello readers... Finally back home... Sorry for keeping you all wait... Well you all wanted to have a long update.. Here goes update jiska bohat wait karwaya mein be ...
Hope you all are fit and fine...I am not happy with the response friend... If you all are not enjoying the story tell me I will discontinue it...please do comment and hit like also..
Enjoy reading
Dil Ko Kuch Pata Hi Na Chala

Chapter 3
Raman and ishita sitting in coffee shop.. Both were silent.. Raman was first to break the silent says: be comfortable... No need to be scared Mein apko kha nahe jaonga...ishita smiles listening to Raman comment... Seeing ishita smile Raman feels different peace around him...
Raman: I am Raman Kumar bhalla... Working in bhalla industries... Mom dad romi my younger brother and his wife sarika... This is my family... I am not a socialize person... Mihir and ashok shagun are my friend... My life revolve around my work and my family... That's it... I will not say that I am honest, good at heart because ye to apne mooh tareef hogi... This is me Raman Kumar bhalla...
Ishita smiles and say: I ishita iyer, lives and works in orphanage my life is this nothing more nothing less... She looks at Raman while Raman was lost in her words...her pain her loneliness her eyes which are only reflecting the emptiness of her life...
Their eyelock break as waiter comes up with coffee... They silently start drinking coffee while kept stealing glances of other when other was engrossed in sipping coffee... After finishing coffee Raman again initiates the conversation..
Raman: what's your expectations regarding this marriage... From me...
Ishita: I only want respect and love which assures me that I am not alone in this world...
Raman smile and says: you will not ask any questions
Ishita sees Raman and says: I always learned from life that don't ask anything you will only get which is in your destiny... Its the reason that we are able to survive in this world.. Warna shayad ghut ghut kar marjain...
Raman sees ishita who was lost in her own world... His heart feel pricked as he is understanding the depth of the real meaning...
He shook his head at the innocence of the girl sitting next to him and says: I will definitely try to be best for you.. Respect support everything in my hand... Ishita sees Raman... Both thought about love...
Ishita (st): what about love??? She again laughs at herself and thought really ishita you think about having somebody who love you...you should not dare to dream how can a orphan being loved without any conditions...
Raman thinks I don't know will I be able to give unconditional love or not but I didn't want to give you false hope ...
Ishita: I am not accepting this marriage proposal.. Raman looks on...
Raman: may I know the reason
Ishita: I have compromised on everything in my life but not on my self respect... I don't want anyone who hold my hand as he feel pity on me...
Raman: but I does not feel pity on you... I just want to tell you that I want to marry you with all my heart and I am promising you that you will always find me beside you no matter what... Respect, support, space everything you want... And... Off course we will have our share of love also without any conditions...
Ishita sees Raman and thinks how can someone be like this without saying anything he understand my feeling...
Raman forward his hand and says: so can you become my life partner...
Ishita sees him and holds his hand both smiles at each other...
Raman phone rings he takes the call and nods his head.. He looks at ishita and tells her that he has a meeting... Ishita nods and gets up.. Raman calls her.. Ishita stops and turns to see Raman...
Raman: I said I have a meeting.. He looks at watch and says itna time hai Kay apko drop kardoon...
Ishita: its okay.. I can manage...
Raman: I know you can after all you are very strong girl... But still I insist...
Ishita sees Raman and thinks I don't want to be a strong girl anymore...
Raman holds her hand and moves out from coffee shop ishita was looking at Raman without blinking her eyes...
Raman: now sit... Ishita nods and sits in car... Raman drops her and goes to attend meeting...
Orphanage
Incharge sees ishita laying on her bed all lost... She goes towards her and sits beside her and lovingly pats her head and says: ishita...
Ishita sees incharge with teary eyes.. She gets worried.. She says: what happen ishita... You don't want to marry Raman okay.. Don't get worried... I will say no to Mrs bhalla...
Ishita shook her head in negative... Incharge ask then what is the reason being her tears...
Ishita: Raman bohat achy hain...
Incharge nods...
Ishita: how come I become so much lucky to have Raman...
Incharge: because you are very good... Achy Kay lite achaa hora hai beta...
Ishita put her head in incharge lap.. In charge kisses her forehead and says: khuawb dekho Meri jaan.. Dekhna zaroor pory hongay...
Ishita looks at her... She nods and says: have some rest... Ishita closes her eyes and sleeps.. In charge pats her head and prays to give every happiness to ishita...
Raman working ashok and mihir comes in and says : hi Raman...
Raman smiles and shut his laptop and gets up... Mihir hugs Raman and says: today you are looking extra happy any special reason...
Raman smiles...
Ashok: off course yaar today he met with Bhabhi...
Mihir sees Raman who was still smiling.. He feels amazed...
Ashok: oho blushing Raman...
Raman hits him and says: teasing me haan... Shall I call shagun then look at your self..
Ashok blushes... And says: kiya Raman...
Mihir was surprised to see that Raman is indeed happy... He feels happy for his friend...
Ashok: acha yaar I am going will pull your leg some other time... Raman smiles.. Ashok leaves...
Mihir holds Raman shoulder and says: you are happy Raman...
Ramam : tumhain kiya lagta hai...
Mihir: mein tumhare lite bohat khush hoon...
Raman hugs mihir... Then both sits...
Raman: ishita...
Mihir: hmm??
Raman: ishita naam hai..
Mihir smiles...
Raman: she is inoccent... She afraid see dream... Her self respect is most important for her... Yet you know she is a inoccent scared kitten... He smiles...
Mihir: hmm...
Raman: she is too inoccent that seone can easily take advantage of her.. He says seriously...
Mihir: but now you are with her you will protect her from this evil world...
Raman: yes...
Mihir sees Raman and thinks apne liye na sahi per at least Bhabhi Kay liye Raman ghar waloon Kay samne khara hoga...
Night
Mrs bhalla sitting in her room and waiting for Raman.. Raman comes and sit on ground and put his head on her lap... Mrs bhalla pats his head...
Raman: mom...
Mrs bhalla: hmmm
Raman: thank you for choosing ishita for me...
Mrs bhalla: you are happy with the alliance...
Raman nods...
Mrs bhalla: nice... Tommorow is surprise for you my child...
Raman hurriedly turns and smiles widely like a child and say: kiya maa...
Mr bhalla comes and sees Raman first time in his own self.. He smiles and caresses his hairs and says: I am sure you will be happy with the surprise tommorow...
Raman: I love you...
Mrs bhalla: now go and sleep.. I want my son to be fresh tommorow...
Raman nods and happily goes to his room and sleep...
Mr bhalla: can't we change our plan... Raman was happy...
Mrs bhalla looks at him... And says: what do you mean...
Mr bhalla: we are using Raman.. Its not right... I feel...
Mrs bhalla: we are just taking our right back from Raman... Not cheating... Just go with flow...
Next day
Raman standing in front of mirrion while mihir was making him wear coat and says: my perfect friend...
Raman smiles... Mrs bhalla comes and blesses him and says: chalain...
Raman: yes maa...
Raman enters the lavish hotel decorated with flowers.. He smiles... As he was getting so much pampering and love from his family first time... His eyes struck at the stairs... He sees her there standing clad in golden silver lehnga red chunri on her head... Looking an angel...
Mrs bhalla: today is your engagement.. And marriage after four days... You like the surprise????
Raman lost in ishita says: I love it...
On the other side ishita was feeling butterflies in her stomach... His continuous gaze was making her nervous more... Red blue crept on her cheeks making her more gorgeous...
Kiya na Jane humko aj hogayaDil ko Kuch Pata hi na Chala...
Ansuna tarana koi am humne hai sunaDil using ki dhun mein kho gaya...
Kiya na Jane humko aj hogayaDil ko Kuch Pata hi na Chala..
Hmm...
Both walks towards each other and stands in the center... Flowers were thrown on them... Raman forwards his hand ishita gives her hand... He slid the ring in her finger... Ishita smiles... All claps... Ishita slid ring in Raman finger... Both smiles...
Raman moves closer to ishita and whisper: looking beautiful... Ishita shyly looks away and her cheeks turn pink... Raman smiles seeing ishita blushing... Two pair of eyes were happy for his friend... While some one was not happy with the closeness of the two... Mrs bhalla...
That's it my dear friend... Waiting for your response on update do share your view and don't forget to hit like also...

Edited by ishrasoul - 9 years ago