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Posted: 9 years ago
EPILOGUE
After 1 1/2 years
dear shlok...,
I can see the light in my life...
When you hold me to your chest I can't able to recognize anything around me... I know a life with you is something that I craved in my entire life... When I got it I know how much I loved you... I don't know how much I loves you...yes love is can't be measured by anyone... I know as life goes on... As we get old... I want to hold your hand... And I want to walk along with you carelessly... We want to cherish the old memories with our grandchildren... I want to lay my head on your chest and closed my eyes forever but you need to promise me you will come with me... Because I forget how to live without you... Because without you there is no heaven...
astha shlok together forever...'
I closed the dairy... And kept it in my bag... I looked outside the window... The snow is starts to cover the hills like a blanket... I turned towards shlok he is so much engrossed in playing with avantika... Our little baby... I take one more sweater from the bag ... And put it on her... It was too cold outside... When I leaving from home ayi is tensed about baby's health.as it is too much cold... But I can't post pone this trip... As my parents in old age home want to celebrate their little grand child's first birthday there... And shlok and ayi is so sweet to allow it... As I complete her dressing I heard my phone rangs...
'hello kumud...'
'hello... Astha did you reach there...?'
'no, few minutes more.' I said looking outside...'
'where is avantika?'
'She is with shlok...'
'where is your little chap...'
'oh he is learning a new game from saras...' I heard a cry form the other side...
'astha... I will call you later. He done something mischievous...' She hang up the call...
'what's said...' He asked
'nothing... As usual he is sometimes too naughty...'
'oh!just like our little devil...' He smiled looking at her...and she didn't forget to return the smile to her dearest dad...
I kept my head on his shoulder and looked at my princess face... He warped his one hand around me and make me close to his heart where I really belongs... In his heart...
'astha... Do you know how much I love this moment...?' He asked me looking at my eyes deeply... I felt I starts to forgets the wind the coldness the dews the rains everything... Only I can able to think about is his magical eyes that make me hook into his heart forever...
'sir... We reached ...' I looked outside when hearing the driver's voice... I get down the car and looking around me... I felt my heart freeze out of cold... I loved the cold wind here... I felt he warped his hand around my shoulder and keep me close to his Heart...
'are you cold...?' He asked looking at me...
I nodded my head and move little more close to my warm cat... We looked at our child who is just drifted into sleep...
Life is never become more perfect than this... This is not the end. It was the start... A start of a new life...
************
'saras,what happened? Why he crying?' Kumud take him I her hand...
' his toy is broken...'
'don't worry my little chap... We will buy a new... Don't cry now... Mummy Ki payari...'
Advik saras smiled at his mother... She take her along with their room while saras kept looking at them from behind ...
Love is something that we find on our life... If we found it once it will eventually change us totally... He smiled at his own thoughts...he looked outside. The rain is starts to drizzle like a perfect love song...

THE END


Just scroll down for the note...
Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hai guys...

It was an amazing journey with you all...
Everyone of you make a place in my heart in one way or another...
I want to thank you all for bearing me and my useless writings...

And I want to thank specially

Neha di, syavalini di,sudha Chechi.., jasmine (my motivator),hiya di...

Without you all it will never possible...


And how can I forgot my dearest readers Catherine,nadeeka,ritam,chickyhonny,pooja (sorry I forgot anyone's name)... Thank you to you all...

And my silent readers who never forget to like my updates... Sathuraj..,sandy,kirshnarkrishna,sashra dv19,ss and so on...

Thank you to all for making this story a memorable one...


Yes I going to remember this for the rest of my life. . ..


AND I NEED TO SAY A SHORT GOOD BYE TO YOU ALL...
AS I HAVE EXAMS FROM THUS MONTH..I AM ALREADY IMMERSED IN MY BOOKS... AND I AM GOING TO RETURN BACK TO MY EVER LOVING HOSTEL FOR A BRIEF...
SO I HOPE YOU ALL WILL BE HERE UNTIL I RETURN... I PROMISE I WILL CONE BACK AND GIVE YOU ANOTHER STORY... THIS BREAK IS ONLY FOR LAST JULY... AFTER THAT I WIL BE HERE...

PLZ PRAY FOR ME... I DON'T KNOW Why BUT I ALREADY STARTS TO WORRIED...

HOPE YOU WILL MISS ME...AAND PLZ WAIT FOR MY RETURN...
THANK U FOR ALL YOUR SUPPORT...

LOVE YOU ALL...



Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Anu mole nice ending with two small kids.
Enjoyed it very much dear. Please write more.
Haan ashlok is always together and forever.
Thanks for ur beautiful story dear.
Continue writing mole.
V r waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Anu mole nice ending with two small kids.
Enjoyed it very much dear. Please write more.
Haan ashlok is always together and forever.
Thanks for ur beautiful story dear.
Continue writing mole.
V r waiting...



Thank u Chechi...

Check the note...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ashlok with their child n Samud with their child.Loved samud n kid scene.Ashlok scene was short,but i found it romantic.loved aastha getting hooked 2 shlok's heart thru his magical eyes.loved rain drizzling like luv song.

All d best 4 ur exam n come back soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you Anu
Do your exam well all the best
We will wait till July no worries
Waiting for nice ashlok ff
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice & superb happy ending,happy ending will always stay in our memory. Nice ff short & sweet.
Missing ashlok a lot,your ff reminded them and had happy time.


Thanks for including me in the comment,so nice of you

Above all study is inportant for our personal life & career,so keep studying for your exams.

All the best and i will include you in my prayers,God bless you.

Come back Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow it was such a happy happy ending
Ashlok with their princess Avantika
Samud with their baby boy
All leading a peaceful and happy life
Loved this writing from start to end!!!

And yes all the best for exams and we will wait for you till end of July!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles




Thank you di...
I loved the way you summarize the story...

Don't ask sorry I can understand that you are so busy...
So no worries...


thnks 4 understanding... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey NU..
lovely epilogue...
it was trully beautiful...
loved it..
avantika.. sems cute name...
advik.. again nice names..
ashlok with their gal, gng to celebrate her birthday with old age home...
kumud though hw much busy in her life never fails to enquire astha..
true fnd...
well written👏👏

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