Nibir-SS Me ,My Love & the girl I met at the airport.(ch 1 on pg4) - Page 4

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

i want a sad ending 😉 u know m evil

K khainki 😆

Awesome update sarthak 👏
Loved the u told AvnBir past😳
waiting fr Nisha😆
the best part of this story is that this is in first person😉
PS. Todha lamba waala comment diya maine😉
PPS. Next update (kisibhi story ka) Jaldi dena😆

Awesome Start Sarthak ...!!!
From the point that Kabir is already with someone else ... its looking very interesting ...!!!
Will love to read further ...!!!
Continue soon ...!!!

Hi dear:-)
sarthak awesome yaar
loved the way u described each and everything
kabir is going to be the narrator and you the listener
i loved the details you put in the narrations
the way u narrated everything and even told us about kabir ' s preception of things i liked that a lot
fr kabir it seemed he is wid anvi coz she loves him

waiting fr more
thanks fr pm
ritika

Lovely update

They story is really interesting

awesome part ... descriptions are so nicely written ... the bonds they share ... family relations .. the personality of avni and kabirs relation with avni ... everything is so nice ... 😊

Awesome start bro 👍🏼
Wen I started reading na I thought its kabir who is talking to his frnds but it was u 😆
wen I read sarthak. . I don't know y but mujhe bahut hasi aayi 🤣
U r actually narrating the story... In ur POV.. like professional writer... Matalb how do I say it!! U involved urself in the story so awesomely!!! Hats off ...
Science camp is like 3 day holiday 🤣
Itna torcher hota h kya college/classes me? 😲 🤣
Kabir is sad ... Why? 😲
Airport me spend ki hui night can change ur life 😳
Excited to know more... 😃
Going to read next chap... 😊

Kabir ki already girlfriend h?? 😲
Saurav ki sleeping skills 😆
Avni name us enough for I guess every mishkatian to imagine kanchi Singh in place 😳🤣
(Umm don't think I m avraj fan 😆 or I have watched APHG but after watching him as kabir .. Loved him a lot that thoda bahut info uski prev show ka b nikal li h meine 😉 and I think almost everyone have done that!!! )
But I want nisha... Not avni 😔
Nisha ki entry kab hogi??
I wish that unfamiliar voice to be nisha's 😃
Plz plzzz plzzz continue it... Update sooon ...
Waitingggsss...