MG *My Papa* PART 10 @Pg 69 ~15th JUNE 2018~ - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
wow nice start..
would love to read further..
thanks for the PM.
RK won't disturb her more na?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
awesome concept
madhu
who is the father of her child I guess that's rishab
but I want it to be maan

agar maan hoga toh drama jyada hoga 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
awesome chapter 2
loved it
I can understand RK's character hope he is not a h Casanova

maan loves Geet there is no doubt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
my expectation not fulfilled
wanted maan in a grey shade
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
lovely start and
congratulations
I forgot to say in the start
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

(Banner credits to me😉)


@jasminerahul Di Geet and Madhu both are her name..they will have alias name na like that.
@Mona_90 Sorry for disappointing you😆To be candid I don't like Rishab Khundra.So most probably you will get to see him as a villain in my stories😉😛
@Suhi Di You want Maan in grey shade😃In my next story(In case If I write😛)I will try to give grey shade of Maan's char.Thank you soo much for ur comment😳


I didn't get time to give reply for all the comments..Sorry for that😛Thank you soo much for your likes and comments🤗This time I got few New Readers too😉



PART 3



Rishab Khundra's Mansion


Rishab's parents and Geet's parents were cursing her to no extend.Geet's parents asked forgiveness for their daughter's sinful act and left the home saying that they completely disowned her.Rishab's phone started buzzing and he seeing the caller he moved out towards the garden and attended the phone.

Rishab:Hello Uncle

Other Side:So how was my arrangement my future son in law.Media..fan's protest kaise laga?

Rishab:Uncle don't you think this is too much for a TV actor..I mean fans coming and protesting and creating problems just for a mere TV actor!!

Other Side:Oh ho...this all media is for gaining sympathy..due to fans creating such havoc the matter will get big and media will play their role perfectly!!Just wait and watch how much popular u will become..and its very important too.These plans will definitely will help you.

Rishab:Uncle aap kehna kya chahathe hai?

Other Side:Don't stress about this..I will handle it!!Just few months left for ur first film and after that soon your marriage..so for now concentrate on ur career and of course my daughter too haha..Ok ab mai phone rakthi hoon.

Rishab:Ok Uncle!!Bye..

Rishab(self thought):Soon my dream are gonna fulfill..he was truly happy with that thought.

City Hospital,MUMBAI


A nurse came inside Geet's room and said"Mam..yeh aap ki discharge papers. Aur yeh aapke hospital bill"Geet stared at the bill papers..she doesn't have a single penny with her and how she is going to play the amount she thought.At that time Dr.Shilpa and Dr.Maan entered her room."Mere pass paise nahi hai.."Geet told the nurse sadly."Dhekiye.."but the nurse was cut by Maan's voice."Nurse plzz give the bills..I will pay for her" said Maan.And for the first time Geet looked at Maan.He looked soo familiar..but she couldn't recall where she met him.Maan gave a small smile left to pay the bill and Dr.Shilpa did Geet's check up.


After paying the bill Maan came to Geet's room.As as soon as Maan entered the room Geet removed one of the rings from her finger and gave it to Maan."Please keep this ring..mere paas paise nahi hai aapko dene ke liye" said Geet."Geetanjali plzz in sab ki koi zaroorath nahi..you can think me as your friend" said Maan.Geet don't know what to tell.She was not feeling good to get help like this from othres but she couldn't do anything..she was helpless.Maan and Dr.Shilpa left for their duty.


Now she got discharged. But she had no place to go. Media will not let her to live in peace.She must leave this place and go somewhere where she can start a new life with her baby.All her certificates,passport everything was in Rishab's place.She can't go there too.She was thinking what to do.


As if god had came to help..an old maan came with a bag to Geet's room.Geet was surprised to see the security guard of Rishab's house.He came near and asked "Mam ab aap ki tabayeet kaise hai?"."Kaka mai teek hoon..par aap yahaan.."Geet asked him.He pointed to the bag that he was holding and said"Maan yeh aapki cheezan..Bari mamsaab aapki cheezon ko baar phek diya..maine sab cheezon ko ek bag mai daal kar yahan le aaya"he said.


"Thank u sso much kaka.."Geet said looking at him in a grateful way."Mam aap plzz hume shukriya mat kakiye..yeh mera farz hai.Hume pata hai ki aapne yeh sab nahi kiya..upar wala sab ko dekh raha hai mam...bagwaan aap jaise acche logon ke saath humesha detha hai aur uss bure logon ko apne bura kaamon ka sazza bukatna parega mam...ab mai chaltha hoon mam" saying this he moved from there.He had heard Rishab's convo in the garden..so he easily figured out that it was some plan and Geet was innocent. But he can't risk his job too..as that was only means of his earning. He did what he could do.He prayed for Geet once and left the hospital.


Geet opened the bag and found few of her clothes. Most of them got wet in rain.She really got happy when she found her Pink file.She had all her certificates,passport and other important documents in it.She thanked babaji several times for sending that security guard.She got ready to leave the hospital.Now she was confident that she can get a job easily.She was now determined to overcome all the hurdles for her baby.


She took that small bag and stuffed her things inside it and moved out of her room.She wished to see Dr.Maan once and thank him for the help.She went to the receptionist and asked for Dr.Maan.She said that Dr.Maan was not free as he was attending an emergency case in the Children's Ward.Geet asked the receptionist to thank Dr.Maan for his help and she moved out of the hospital.




SORRY for this small part😒

Yeah..I have completed the the basic need of the story..ab aur kya😛next part se full of Maaneet(I hope so😆)


Sorry for Hindi and English mistakes😛



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Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hum bhi kareng... resss...unress...yippee... first to comment. ... ...wonderful update... rishabs body guard helped GEET...she wants to thank Maan...but she missed him...thanks for the pm...
Edited by laughingpearls - 9 years ago
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