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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Sujal is a student but does part time teaching too n students do not miss his lectures.Wow...He loves his childhood friend Kashish.she too loves him but thinking that sujal luvs Archie she baked off.but loved Sujal confessing his luv 2 her.He even told Arhie that he luvs Kashish.Kashish too confessed his luv.wow.But will archie create probs?I hope not.Other than Rishi n Archie any character?

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

nice start
so sujal n Kashish have confessed their love
sujal has loved kashish since childhood
Archie loves Sujal n told him but he explained he has n will only love kashish
will Archie become negative character???
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

The Story is getting so Interesting.😊

The Pics were so Nice.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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ameena671

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

wow awesome update loved it thank you for pm.

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Laxmi Kumari

@laxmi247

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Awesome update Kavita 👏 thanks for pm

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Nice I love Rajeev Khandelwal n any work on him

SK best couple

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Well written short story...👏 👏

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Fantastic...

awesome...

so much emotions...

issues

Thanks for the pm...

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

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kavita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

Sujal & Kashish go out for a date. Both go to the restaurant to have candle light dinner.

Kashish said, "I'm sorry Sujal. I could not understand you."
Sujal kisses her hand & said, "If I was in your place, I would have definitely got jealous & think about different ways to get you. Though Piyush is my best friend, I was jealous when I used to see you with him. Promise me that you will never leave me."
Kashish said, "Forget about really leaving you. I cannot even think about it. I love you a lot."

After the dinner, it starts thundering & raining heavily. Kashish hugs Sujal in the rain. Both get wet.

https://i.ytimg.com/vi/oR4mETxyVPU/hqdefault.jpg

Both go inside the car, The background song starts with
Thoda sa pyaar hua hain thoda hain baaki.
Hum toh chahenge tujhe jab talak jaan hain baaki.

Thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai bakee - (2)
Ham toh chahenge tujhe -2, jab talak jan hai bakee

(Pyar humne kiya hai pyar tumne kiya hai
Yar phir imtihan kyon jamane ne liya hai) - (2)
Sath ham denge teraa -2 tujhse vada hai bakee

(Dard jitna milega pyar utna badhega
Apni chahat ka aaye yeh jamana jhukega) - (2)
Dil se dil mil hee gaye, apna milna hai bakee

Sujal drops her home.

Archie on the other hand gets depressed. She consumes sleeping pills. Her dad knocks the door but it does not open.
Finally, he breaks the door only to find her suicide note.

He calls the doctor who gives her the injection. Archie's dad goes to Sujal's place & inform Sujal about it.
Sujal & Piyush go to her place.

Sujal confronts Archie saying, "What was the need for you to do that? I know that you love me but my heart beats
only for Kashish. She is a part & parcel of me. If I lose her, I will do the same thing as you did. The choice is yours."

Archie said, "I'm sorry Sujal. I had dreamt a lot about you. I still love you but your happiness is
more important to me."

Sujal said, "Fine, I will always be there for you as a friend. Take care."

He then takes a leave.

Rishi on the other hand flirts with girls but falls for Mehek. However, she knows that he is a flirt & refuses to reciprocate
to his love. Mehek is in love with Piyush's brother, Varun.
There is a rivalry between Rishi & Varun.

Rishi goes in for Mouli. Archie gets attracted to Piyush & tries to woo him.

CHAPTER 3

Edited by katrinasalman - 10 years ago