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hello dearies! I'm Apeksha.. and i'm a fresher here! its my 1st post in this forum and on shraman😳 so plz bear me for few minutes atleast till i complete my story...😆😛well i actually had a glimpse of EDKV for vishal but then started catching the whole episodes which made me fall in love with this beautiful lovable pair Shravan And Sumo😊 i recently caughtup with all the previous episodes and finally i'm a Shraman #addict now😆 i hope you all enjoy reading..
"Tumhari Problem kya hai ?? Chahte kya ho tum life se??jab mann aaye tab baat karli, jab mann aaye muh banaliye.. aise kyu behave karte ho shravan? kya kiya hai meine?? Shravan malhotra ka bharosa paane keliye insaan ko kya karna chahiye? Apna dil nikaal kar rakhde ya phir apni jaan de de???!!"
Suman shouted her lungs out fedup with this stupid ignoring game. "Koi kisi keliye apni jaan nahi deta!"
Shravan shrugged turning away.. He turns and is shocked to see sumo standing at the railing.
"Sumo!! Peeche hato.. kya kar rahi ho tum? Kya saabith karna chahti ho yeh sab karke.. peech hato warna girjaogi tum!! Sumo!!"
"Accha haina.. mein zinda rehne se ya marne se tumhe waise bhi koi farak nahi padne wala.. kyuki tumhe toh yahi lagta hai..ki mein tumhari life mein sirf aur sirf complications create karti hu.. bachpan se tumhari har pareshaani ki wajah sirf mein hi toh hu.. toh aaj, kyu nah tumhari iss lifetime pareshaani ko humesha keliye hi khatam karde" sumo slightly shifted an inch.
Her heart racing 'hey bhagwaan!! Yeh duffer toh sirf bole jaa raha hai. mein uthar jaau ya.. nahi-nahi sumo itna himmat karke yeh solid plan banaya hai.. ab peeche nahi hatna hai' She thought.
"Sumo!! Neeche uthro warna.." "warna kya?? Kya karloge tum?" "Sumo..!!"
Shravan's expressions horrified as he saw sumo shift a little further 'what the hell this girl is doing' he thought. the sumo he knew was not a coward who ran away from problems but faced them with all her might, without backing out. But what happened to her now.. is she the same girl whom he loved from childhood and is still in love with? 'Wait.. what did i just thought? Love??!! and sumo?!' These thought stired his confusion more. He was now nearing the railing on which sumo stood shivering a bit..
he slowly called her "Sumo!! Sumo listen.. aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahi ho.. give me your hand aur neeche uthro right now!!" little did he knew that she won't jump but his heart thumped wildly at the mere thought of loosing her..
sumo who had enough of this stupid and dangerous plan of hers thought to resolve this mess once after getting down but as she tried to turn around, she lost her balance "SHRAVAN!!!!" Closing her eyes in fear she thought she'll be engulfed by death in any seconds but a pause in the process made her to open her eyes which met with another pair of dark orbs filled with anger,concern & fear.
Shravan freaked out the moment she screamed he felt numb at the moment but his hands involuntorily grabbed her wrist preventing her from hitting the ground.
He then slowly pulled her up.. "araam se.." and once her feet landed on the floor of the terrace she enveloped him in a bone crushing embrace. continuous flow of tears from both the pair of eyes described the untold story of their life.. shravan broke the hug with a fierce tug at her shoulder "pagal hogayi thi?? Aisa koi karta hai kya? Soche samjhe bina aise kaise.. how can you just jump like that?? have you lost it!!" shravan roared at her as She shivered at the level of intensity in his voice.. "shr..shravan.. meine.. I-I didn't intentionally.. woh mera peir fisal gaya th.." "shutup sumo!!! Just SHUTUP and listen.. agar tumhe kuch bhi hojaye toh mujhe farak padta hai.. samjhi!! Farak padta hai kyuki I.." shravan stopped realising what he was going to say. sumo stood anticipating him to complete his sentence 'ab bol bhi do shravan.. boldo ki tum bhi mujhe utna hi pyaar karte ho jitna mein tumse karti hu..'
" kyuki,,kya shravan.." she managed to ask in a low voice.
Shravan took a deep breath closing his eyes for few seconds remembering all those moments they spent. reminishing the feel he had 10 years ago, the feel what people called 'love'. Yes, he was in love with sumo back then and he continued to be in love with her.. Infact he didn't ever stopped loving her and he knew he wont even in future.
Finally coming out of his trance he leaned closer to her "kyuki.. kyuki I Love you sumo.! I made myself believe that i've moved on, but the truth is that i always loved you since childhood till today and will always be loving you till my last brea..." his sentence was left incomplete as sumo covered his mouth by her palm before those dreadful words left his mouth.. "tum na, ek number ke buddhu ho! Itne saal lag gaye tumhe yeh baat bolne keliye?" Sumo said in a cracked voice as tears kept flowing down her cheeks.. "i love you too shravan.. i love you so much!" Her words met a small peck on her lips from shravan. sumo at first stood transfixed to the spot but then she leaned further sealing his lips with hers as shravan tilted in pleased...
They kissed passionately pouring out all their love for each other.. hearts raced in joy and anticipating a new beginning.. they felt content, they felt complete in each other's arms.. they felt home.
phew!! that's it.. 😃 i know when compared to the brilliant writers over here.. its a total crap! but plz bear me with this😛 and do share you views regarding..Criticism and appriciation both are welcomed..
and as sumo says 'feedback do lekin pyaar se!'😆😆
PS- No proof reading has been done.. plz bear if any spelling/grammar mistakes😃
"Tumhari Problem kya hai ?? Chahte kya ho tum life se??jab mann aaye tab baat karli, jab mann aaye muh banaliye.. aise kyu behave karte ho shravan? kya kiya hai meine?? Shravan malhotra ka bharosa paane keliye insaan ko kya karna chahiye? Apna dil nikaal kar rakhde ya phir apni jaan de de???!!"
Suman shouted her lungs out fedup with this stupid ignoring game. "Koi kisi keliye apni jaan nahi deta!"
Shravan shrugged turning away.. He turns and is shocked to see sumo standing at the railing.
"Sumo!! Peeche hato.. kya kar rahi ho tum? Kya saabith karna chahti ho yeh sab karke.. peech hato warna girjaogi tum!! Sumo!!"
"Accha haina.. mein zinda rehne se ya marne se tumhe waise bhi koi farak nahi padne wala.. kyuki tumhe toh yahi lagta hai..ki mein tumhari life mein sirf aur sirf complications create karti hu.. bachpan se tumhari har pareshaani ki wajah sirf mein hi toh hu.. toh aaj, kyu nah tumhari iss lifetime pareshaani ko humesha keliye hi khatam karde" sumo slightly shifted an inch.
Her heart racing 'hey bhagwaan!! Yeh duffer toh sirf bole jaa raha hai. mein uthar jaau ya.. nahi-nahi sumo itna himmat karke yeh solid plan banaya hai.. ab peeche nahi hatna hai' She thought.
"Sumo!! Neeche uthro warna.." "warna kya?? Kya karloge tum?" "Sumo..!!"
Shravan's expressions horrified as he saw sumo shift a little further 'what the hell this girl is doing' he thought. the sumo he knew was not a coward who ran away from problems but faced them with all her might, without backing out. But what happened to her now.. is she the same girl whom he loved from childhood and is still in love with? 'Wait.. what did i just thought? Love??!! and sumo?!' These thought stired his confusion more. He was now nearing the railing on which sumo stood shivering a bit..
he slowly called her "Sumo!! Sumo listen.. aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahi ho.. give me your hand aur neeche uthro right now!!" little did he knew that she won't jump but his heart thumped wildly at the mere thought of loosing her..
sumo who had enough of this stupid and dangerous plan of hers thought to resolve this mess once after getting down but as she tried to turn around, she lost her balance "SHRAVAN!!!!" Closing her eyes in fear she thought she'll be engulfed by death in any seconds but a pause in the process made her to open her eyes which met with another pair of dark orbs filled with anger,concern & fear.
Shravan freaked out the moment she screamed he felt numb at the moment but his hands involuntorily grabbed her wrist preventing her from hitting the ground.
He then slowly pulled her up.. "araam se.." and once her feet landed on the floor of the terrace she enveloped him in a bone crushing embrace. continuous flow of tears from both the pair of eyes described the untold story of their life.. shravan broke the hug with a fierce tug at her shoulder "pagal hogayi thi?? Aisa koi karta hai kya? Soche samjhe bina aise kaise.. how can you just jump like that?? have you lost it!!" shravan roared at her as She shivered at the level of intensity in his voice.. "shr..shravan.. meine.. I-I didn't intentionally.. woh mera peir fisal gaya th.." "shutup sumo!!! Just SHUTUP and listen.. agar tumhe kuch bhi hojaye toh mujhe farak padta hai.. samjhi!! Farak padta hai kyuki I.." shravan stopped realising what he was going to say. sumo stood anticipating him to complete his sentence 'ab bol bhi do shravan.. boldo ki tum bhi mujhe utna hi pyaar karte ho jitna mein tumse karti hu..'
" kyuki,,kya shravan.." she managed to ask in a low voice.
Shravan took a deep breath closing his eyes for few seconds remembering all those moments they spent. reminishing the feel he had 10 years ago, the feel what people called 'love'. Yes, he was in love with sumo back then and he continued to be in love with her.. Infact he didn't ever stopped loving her and he knew he wont even in future.
Finally coming out of his trance he leaned closer to her "kyuki.. kyuki I Love you sumo.! I made myself believe that i've moved on, but the truth is that i always loved you since childhood till today and will always be loving you till my last brea..." his sentence was left incomplete as sumo covered his mouth by her palm before those dreadful words left his mouth.. "tum na, ek number ke buddhu ho! Itne saal lag gaye tumhe yeh baat bolne keliye?" Sumo said in a cracked voice as tears kept flowing down her cheeks.. "i love you too shravan.. i love you so much!" Her words met a small peck on her lips from shravan. sumo at first stood transfixed to the spot but then she leaned further sealing his lips with hers as shravan tilted in pleased...
They kissed passionately pouring out all their love for each other.. hearts raced in joy and anticipating a new beginning.. they felt content, they felt complete in each other's arms.. they felt home.
phew!! that's it.. 😃 i know when compared to the brilliant writers over here.. its a total crap! but plz bear me with this😛 and do share you views regarding..Criticism and appriciation both are welcomed..
and as sumo says 'feedback do lekin pyaar se!'😆😆
PS- No proof reading has been done.. plz bear if any spelling/grammar mistakes😃
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