How i want to see it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The story of BV seems to be bringing too many twists and turns and its almost a love square where somewhere i read its ek phool teen maali...i want to create a new topic to increase forum activity and mention how I would want the story to progress.

Nandini is brought home by Krish and his mother where she meets Kundan as Abhiram her FIL. She bows down and touches his feet and MIL feels good about it.

She is then sent to her room decorated with flowers. Krish comes in and consoles Nandini for leaving her home. He assures her of being with her forever. Nandini starts to sit and suddenly Krish feels dizzy and falls down. Nandini holds him and sprinkle water and Krish gains conscience. Nandini gets concerned and asks Krish if this has happened before but Krish dismisses that it might have happened due to fatigue. A concerned Nandini forces Krish to sleep tonight and take rest. He sleeps on her lap and she caresses his hair and feels nice being with him.

Next morning neighbors come for muh dikhai and Nandini is all happy for her new life. She gets up early and reaches to touch feet of MIL and Kundan. When Nandini touches Kundans feet, he feels tickled and reacts and mocks that new bindini is naughty. Both Nandini and MIL does not like this remark and Kundan smiles inside and says it's only a beginning and he will stain her image infront of Krish and Karuna very soon.

All does not goes well with neighbors and the age factor crops in when one neighbor asks her her age. Knowing she is 7 years elder to Krish all women walk out stating they cannot appreciate such relation and soon Krish would find another girl his age he will leave Nandini. MIL also comes to know Nandini's age and makes a face and goes away.

Nandini reaches hospital and is disturbed. Dr Amit sees and asks her why has she come to hospital today as she should enjoy her married life but Nandini tries to hide her disappointment. Dr Amit sees through and pushes Nandini to share. When she still doesn't he understands what is troubling her and consoles that she has married Krish and till he is with her she would not feel the thorns of the society. Nandini feels lighter after talking to Dr Amit.

She shares last night Krish had a blackout and had fainted to which Dr Amit says that she is unnecessarily getting anxious. Nandini replies that she has never loved anyone like she loves Krish today and she cannot bear even any thought of Krish in pain. Dr Amit only stares at her and feels the sting of love in his heart.

Nandini returns home to find Krish waiting for her outside. He takes her with him to a orphanage and gives her blankets to distribute. Nandini keeps looking at him with surprise to which Krish replies that a true lover knows what will make his beloved happy and nothing could have given Nandini more pleasure than helping others therefore he has brought her this as wedding present. Nandini's eyes swell with tears mixed with respect and love for Krish. She remembers the comments of neighbor women that Krish will leave her when he will find his age gf and dismisses this though when Krish kisses her on her back. She feels a sudden gush of emotions which she had never felt before and shrinks. Krish moves his fingers on her neck sliding to her back and slides his other hand to her waist. She feels her hair rising to its ends and closes her eyes. Krish whispers in her ears that he will make her each day beautiful like this and will not rush to make her his instead he will make her experience every step of love which she always deserved but did not allow herself.

Next day Nandini and Krish go to Nandini's house for pag fera and when he starts to leave again feels immense pain in his head and falls down. Nandini fears something big and takes him straight to the hospital and puts him through CT scan and MRI scan and post scans get back to Nandini's home where Krish drops her and goes. Dr Amit come after few hours looking pale and reveals the bad news about Krish that he has tumor and just few months of life left. Nandini falls down and faints and Dr Amit picks her up in his arms and caresses her hair with concern. Maasa and Bapusa starts wailing. Dr Amit warns Nandini that she should not tell him to increase his life and should refrain Krish from any physical activity and should keep distance from him. Any strain on the nerves can be fatal. Nandini just looks at Dr Amit without any soul in her body.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmm let's see what happens
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kundan trying to stain Nandini's image and neighbours talking about the age is understood but Krish having a tumor is not possible since the CVs will not kill Krish. If he died Amit would have to get centre stage and CVs will not let that happen. Krish is the CVs apple of their eyes. How can anyone take his place. Though I would be very happy with this track.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Kundan trying to stain Nandini's image and neighbours talking about the age is understood but Krish having a tumor is not possible since the CVs will not kill Krish. If he died Amit would have to get centre stage and CVs will not let that happen. Krish is the CVs apple of their eyes. How can anyone take his place. Though I would be very happy with this track.

Totally agree as this K guy who was supposed to be a side role --the cvs have made him the male lead they will never let any harm come to him ---the story is getting very interesting but if the actors who are good are side lined then what to expect
Like today Amit was seen all of 2 mins and this...forget it I just skipped his parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maya-kk

Totally agree as this K guy who was supposed to be a side role --the cvs have made him the male lead they will never let any harm come to him ---the story is getting very interesting but if the actors who are good are side lined then what to expect
Like today Amit was seen all of 2 mins and this...forget it I just skipped his parts



Don't know what to say. I'm speechless. Come to think of it,Krish is very carefree and irresponsible. Though he married Nandini he doesn't how to deal with married life. He's only interested in having fun and ... marraige is not all about... there are many things like looking after your spouse,family etc. Sharing the same bedroom is not everything. Krish might try to get close to Nandini and somewhat succeed in that but will fail in other things. Nandini will realise Krish's true intention and this will most probably lead to a seperation.

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