||*Timeless Hues* : A ShraMan Paradise|| Pg 20- Ch 9&10- Pms later - Page 8

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I read it in one go...it's awesome..loved it...your way of writing is just superb 🤗

Glad you loved it. This means a lot, like real.
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|C H A P T E R - 6|
| Eros|

A/N : Early, Early, Early. This is solely dedicated to those who had commented here without any pms. I had been real greatful to all of you guys, those silent readers who likes- if not comment. The poem Eros is by Ralph Waldo Emerson. This is real short but holds a lot of depth. It tells a relation of a person - by nature, to nature and of nature, and like wise a humanly feeling.

Eros (m.) , (according to poem context.) : Love.
Hope You Will Like it, and this is by chance an early update -one is not forever greatful, Ye' know?

My Comment : The story will be going back and forth, from present to past. In Chapter 4 I took you guys to the past on Shravan's B'day. The past is still going on so in this chapter, we will come back from past half way because dude Ik that we also need Happy Shravan - Suman.

Love,
Sanju


NEW YEAR'S EVE, A DAY LATER

"Shravan, what about this one?" For the fourth time she asked him about the black color tuxedo, a different design though.

She was hurting,and he knew that. Afterall, who better than him knows her - apart from last some hours; he always get to know her real self. Right then what they were feeling was so different - they feel emotionally drained yet it continues to empower their mind. Emotions raw - that it could get the skin off if touched.

He could not handle this- not anymore. Both are hurt but she could not just fake happiness. Not infront of him atleast. He holded her hands and dragged her to a secluded corner.

"Shravan-, Shravan what are you doing?" She asked panting, as he dragged her all through the shop's corner to the other.

She shrugged his hands off her mid arms, " What's the matter with you Shravan?" She shouted whisper.

"You want to know the matter? So know it. I hate the way how you are faking, as if nothing happened. You are doing nothing than hurting me and yourself the most. Why are you doing this Suman?" As the last words left, all what he was left was tired. Tired of holding up too much but what he said made her angry.

"You want to know why? How could you expect me to stay like what I was at night. I do not want to ruin the jovial atmosphere around. I do not want people's pity for God's Sake. I am not faking it, but as a best friend, I am trying to do what the one do. I do not care what you think about me but I do not want people to know that some thing which should be confided b/w you and me. -" She breathed in and spatting out all her anger, she sat down on the floor. She looked up to his eyes, where he saw her tiredness, her weak self and ever so lightly she continued "- What? What exactly had happened to us Shravan?" and all what he answered was " Life happened."

"But that happened years ago, you know like we got into different social groups and we called it life happened and then we were connected via Journals, unknowingly and then- then when you came back, and left me with a note, then life happened. I do not think what happened to us is life." She spoke as she rested her head on his shoulder.

"Shravan when you aren't happy, why did you agree-" she tooka pause and continued "- agree for the marriage?" Finally she asked it. Yeah, that is what both of them thought, she because she got courage to ask a question whose answer she dreading and wanting to know at the same time, and he - he wanted her to ask him to kmow, she think that she have a right to ask but a lump formed in his throat and words couldn't form. It was like - " The sense of the world is short,
Long and various the report,
To love and be beloved;"


SHRAVAN'S BITHDAY - PRESENT

She came out of her thoughts as she finished her 3rd cup of caffeine, she need to control her caffeine intake, she thought and her Mobile rang with a shrill tone.

She quickly picked up without seeing the person who called, "Hello?" She asked but inly got silence and then she knew, something happened that she got silence from the other end and quickly saw the caller's name, Shravan, she read.

"Shravan, I know this you. Come on tell what happened?" and she got one answer.

"Life happend." He said with sorrowful expressions.

"Huh? Shravan tell clearly, what happened?"

"I lost the case." He spoke in a monotone.

The case, off course, he was so working hard on that particular case. She knew he could'd won because he was right but how did this happen? Shravan had always welcomes defeats with a smile, after all they always help us to grow so much more, but she knew this case was important and he had to win that but now he couldn't.

"Do you want to meet?" And he nodded as if she was infront of him.

"I am coming right away to your place and chear up Mr. B'day Boy. Suman Tiwari reporting soon." and soon she left as she felt him giving a cult nod.

She quickly drove to railway station to get the next train soon, as possible and as she got into the train, she took out the journal back. As she read not much of the pain and aghony was mentioned during engagement, afterall who got time to write in those days and the next entry in Journal was 2 weeks after engagement.

PAST, 2 WEEKS AFTER ENGAGEMENT

Suman soon after the engagement, a day later came back. She didn't get her answers any way, what she got to know was not just one is hurting, but both of them - equally.

It's been a busy a week. She had always loved spring, her favorite season - yes, maybe. But everything seems so fast and flowers aren't shinning and bloominh like every spring. She even hadn't got time to appreciate the season due to the work load. She didn't even get time to get to what she wants and she and Shravan hadn't talked with much words,in this not even a one or two.

As soon as she reached her home, she quickly got herself a hot caffeine and a left over sandwich of the morning. As she quickly settled down herself of the table adjacent to the window, her cell vibrated.

She quickly saw the caller name, surprisingly someone who she hadn't talked much.

"Haan Pushkar, bol?" She asked.

"Sumo wo - " He hesitated to pick up.

"What happen? Why are you sounding very tired?" She asked

"Sumo wo Shravan bhaiya -"

"What happened to Shravan, is everything okay?" She stood up from her chair.

"Accident, please come to the Hospital?" He asked.

"Which one?" and she got answer was "Texting you right now?" and she quicklu got ready to go to New York as soon as possible.

Present Day

Such a similar situation, she thought. She always had gone to New York in a hurry without any occasion, nor most of the time only he had come. She remembered the way they had tried to possibly be connected to each other each times.
Soon she got down - off the train and took a taxi to his address. There are times when they weren't knowing each other so well, not connected emotionally to be precise. Those 10 years, what she wanted to say but since they are reconciled, they are way more connected to eachother in an emotional consent.

Both of them had matured much to know what they want at times. She quickly got into a taxi and bought herself gummy snakes for the next , about an hour or two ride.

She moved back to reading the journal. It was captivating to know how each other felt at a time. He hadn't mentioned it all but when the incident was mentioned, she thought revive the memories.

Past, Sharavn's Accident

As soon as she reached the hospital, she got the floor he was, as pushkar told.
She was shocked to see the view, Sharavn was standing fit and fine but in a devastating appearance, broken - as we call it, to be precise.

"Shravan -?" She asked as she got near him.

He quickly hugged her and broke down. She made him sit on the chair, and cupping his face asked - "What happened?" as even her tears flowed down.

"Papa - " He pointed.

"Kya hua Ramnath uncle ko?"

"He got an heart attack and then got into a accident due to loosing control." He said as his tears flowed.

"Everything will be alright." and cleared his tears.

"If anything happens to dad,-"he was cutby Ria.

"Nothing will happen to him, my dad had called the best of New York Shravan." She spoke keeping her hands on his shoulders which made Suman gape back but was sitting in place because of Shravan's hold on her shoulders.

"Beta,don't take tension. I know he is your best friend and you are worried for him, but Ria is here." Ria's mom warned her in an indirect way to be away from Shravan. She nodded and was about to stand when Shravan holded her intact.

"Sharavn-" Ria's mom questioned for his doing, when he stood up and almost shouted at her, though not enough to disturb a patient.

"She will stay with me. If anything happened to papa, I wouldn't leave anyone of you with repaying." He pointed out to them.

"Shravan?" Suman asked.

"No, he is saying right Sumo. Know what they did?" Pushkar spoke up.

"Pushkar we should keep own's house talks inside. " Chachi Jo spoke which clearly meant to Suman, is an stranger.

"Mumma and Suman is a family member." He spoke to Kamini and continued to Suman -"They asked Bade Papa, that to keep this alliance Bhaiya have to move with Ria in a different house, or if Ria wanted, a different City. If this didn't happen, they would spread rumours about Bhaiya's firm about being all false promising."

All this angered Suman, how much both of them suffered, all because of someone who just care for money? Ridiculous, she stood up and point her finger towards Ria - " Miss Ria, what dou you think of yourself. I didn't think that ypu would stop this low. I would've gone back if you hadn't done this, but now I wouldn't. I would be with my best friend. " She spoke firmly in a Sumo mode and took Shravan and Pushkar to the hospital cafeteria.

Present Day

She came out of the thoughts, only to be disturbed by another sound of vibration sound.
A text from Shravan about the change of place to meet. She involuntary sighed.

_________________


The sense of the world is short,
Long and various the report,
To love and be beloved;
Men and gods have not outlearned it,
And how oft soe'er they've turned it,
'Tis not to be improved.

__________________

A/N : So finally! Yeah. Another chapter equal to three drabbles, but for me it was just a fun when I was hearing Ed - Sheeren on loop. Also if anyone of you are Theo James fan, then I must tell you that it is confirmed of him in James Bond next as Bond.
#PhanGurling

Anyways, Comment and Like.
PMs would be on Sunday.

Happy Days.

Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Two Parts were so Interesting.😊
It was so sad to see them like that.😭
The Poem was so Heart-touching.😭
The Two Parts were so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Superb 👏
Poor shraman hurting just becoz of riya...i sooo wanna kill her 😡
I really love the way u write emotional sequences ❤️
Thanks for the pm and an early update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Two Parts were so Interesting.😊
It was so sad to see them like that.😭
The Poem was so Heart-touching.😭
The Two Parts were so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

Hey Priya, not a problem yaa.
Thanks.
Glad you liked it.
Thabk you so much for your comment.
:)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Amazing
Shravan and Suman are always their for each other
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
hey sry actually got ur pm aftr i hv read u knw stalker me waits fr ur updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Arey wah! Itni jaldi update!
Loved it..
I like the present and past narrative... makes it all the more intriguing..
I like how Shravan stood up for Sumo, Ria's mom should a queue...
Can't wait for the next part!!
Thanks for the PM🤗
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update sis 😃
You have written very beautifully 😳
Continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW!! amazing update dear...loved it

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