Manan TS story of selfless love birds - Page 2

Hey dear 😊
Thanks for the PM.

Coming to the TS, it was nice reading it.
The concept was beautiful with indeed brilliant portrayal of the feelings and emotions as well.

As you mentioned in the first part, its not necessary that everyone will get their love... from that I assumed this story might have sad ending.

But it was a beautiful ending. I personally don't like to read stories with sad ends ...

In second part, when you showed the hospital scene, that time also I felt Maanik must be having some serious disease but thankfully he didn't have any.

Very nice TS...
Liked it a lot.

Stay blessed
- Harshada

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hey dear 😊
Thanks for the PM.

Coming to the TS, it was nice reading it.
The concept was beautiful with indeed brilliant portrayal of the feelings and emotions as well.

As you mentioned in the first part, its not necessary that everyone will get their love... from that I assumed this story might have sad ending.

But it was a beautiful ending. I personally don't like to read stories with sad ends ...

In second part, when you showed the hospital scene, that time also I felt Maanik must be having some serious disease but thankfully he didn't have any.

Very nice TS...
Liked it a lot.

Stay blessed
- Harshada

thnks dear ..

ur comment mean alot ...
it give intrest in writing n encourage In writing ...

stay blessed
samkhan ...