FF: Love, Cherish me ~~ Epilogue ~~ - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
I read all the parts in one go and I must say I loved it...❤️

I specially love the way you portray their thoughts about each other...😆...the hotel scene where the waiter tries to asses them was so real...and loved how they both teased each other.


About Vasu what can I say anyways even if we forgive her because she is not in her senses the same courtesy cannot be extended to Dhruv...he should at least have tried to gauge what Thapki wanted than openly declaring his love and wish to get married to her...😡

And lastly good that Thapki did not beat about the bush and confessed straight away...eagerly waiting for the next one...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
that was absolutely brilliant piece of work😃😃😃😃
just loved it ...
didn't mind the "ANTI-THARUV" scene...on the contrary I guess that was a very important and great part...now I understand the meaning of the evil laughter.😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent Updates...
Read All in One GO...❤️
Vasu🤢
Tha...Ruv...🤢
OMG Ds n His Cheesy liners...🤢
But LOVED the Last Update... n The last Para...Their Kiss...
Do Continue ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

I just realised that when I was commenting after reading I forgot one or the other thing...
So its a kinda live commentary...
Aadat daal do Mai aise comments k lie hi famous hoo (on other forums ;))

Ok meri favourite line from first para
I don't want to be a charity case... ...but someone she cant live without <3

Dhruv aya... Meri reaction :|
Me singing for Dhruv - I hate you... Like I really really really really really really HATE you :P

Dhruv and his cheasy lines #no more comments on him

Sab apni apni tarrah se interpret kyun karte hai har situation KO...

Can I dance???
Why to take permission...
I m going to dance...
Challo bai band walo shuru Ho jaao...
PE pein pe pe *local band* :P
Aahun aahun aahun...
A.F.T.E.R D.A.N.C.I.NG.
I am so happy... :D :D
Song to Thahaan... Lip to lip de Kissiaannn ...
Thank you love you Kudiye...



HAHAHAHAHA...that is adorable...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
And everyone else out there!! I read your comments like:
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Posted: 9 years ago

Warning: This update might give you diabetes. Read at your own risk.


Love, Cherish me

How long had it been?? Minutes?? Hours? Days? Did it really matter? The lovebirds kept on devouring each other. Months of pent up frustration couldn't be satisfied so soon...Bihaan kept kissing Thapki like there was no tomorrow and Thapki kissed him like she never ever wanted tomorrow to come...


Bihaan picked her up in his arms like she weighed nothing and settled themselves on the sofa...as he kept raining soft kisses to her jaw, temple, cheeks, he rasped possessively,


"Tell me Thapki, tell me who do you belong to?"He kissed her eyes which were puffy red because she had been crying before...


"You B-B-Bihaan. Only you." She said between her own nibbling kisses along his stubbled jaw. She licked his dimples the way she had been wanting to.


"Whom does your heart belong to? "Bihaan insisted..kissing...


"My heart, s-s-soul, body everything t-t-that I have belongs to you Bihaan"


"Why?"


"Because I love you"


"Good" He went back to kissing the point where her neck and shoulder met...


At this, Thapki bit his shoulder and tugged his hair real hard jerking his head up...


"Aouuu...ouch, what are trying to do, you Naagin?" Bihaan yelped.


Thapki didn't relinquish her hold on his hair and brought his head over hers not letting him break their eye contact. Her grip on his hair became more viscous...


"Okay, fineee---- I will say it, if I must----- as you insist, -----I lubh you too , my chuk chuk gadi" he said finally with a smile.


Thapki loosened her hold on his hair and let him go back to her neck...


Good, she said with a smile too.

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"YOU DID WHAT?" Thapki screamed.


"You know na I am motibuddhi, I can't think straight when I am angry, I am sorry" Bihaan gave her an innocent smile, looking so angelic like butter wouldn't melt in his mouth.


"You are an Idiot, m-moron, stupid fool --------for god's sake s-stop smiling at me like that...You k-k-know I can't concentrate when y-you smile at me like that"


"Like what wifey???" Bihaan dimpled and quirked his eyebrows up and down...


Thapki couldn't help but smile at antics of her husband who really was nothing but a child in a man's body. He just told her what he said to his family, that he consent with Ma and wanted Thapki to marry Dhruv.


"Now t-t-tell me how we will get out of this mess, Bihaan? "


"Don't worry about it Chuk chuk gadi, when I will explain everything to them, they will get it and be happy for us, even Ma. She might not show it but she actually loves me a lot...when she will see you and I are in love, she will give us her blessing just like that...everyone will rejoice at our love u just see, arey the whole family knew we love each other before us even..."


Its funny how the whole family knew what they felt for each other except themselves...Love really turn people foolish...they had wasted so much time...


"We shouldn't waste anymore time Bihaan, let's go now and tell everyone that we want to stay married, let's go---utthooo----uthonaaa"


She started to push Bihaan's head away from her lap, trying to make him move but at this he turned towards her body and wrapped his arms more firmly around her waist and tried to bury his face into her stomach.


Thapki squealed, "Bihaaan, it tickles...s-stop it ...s-stop please...let's go" she said between laughter..


"Not now.. laters...I don't want to move from where I am right now, I am too comfortable..."


"okay 5 minutes more then we will go" Thapki agreed as she combed her fingers through his thick locks of hair...She sighed...today was the happiest day of her life even with all Ma drama and embarrassing Dhruv Sir encounter. She needed to set him straight as soon as possible...


The newly confessed love-birds were still basking in their new-found love in their bedroom. They had not left it since morning and now it was almost noon, time for lunch...Thapki hadn't went downstairs today to help bhabis make lunch and they had not come knocking. God knew what they were thinking Thapki doing in her room...maybe after Ma fiasco they thought Thapki needed some time alone...


After their marathon making out session in the morning, both of them just huddled together and talked about everything and nothing. They had so many confessions to make to each other, so many things they had in their heart but couldn't say to each other before...time just flew...Now they were vegetating in the bed, Thapki was sitting, leaning against the headboard and Bihaan lying with his head on her lap...Life couldn't get better than this ...

Whatever happened they would never let anything happen to their love they vowed.


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Chapter - 8 Dark Clouds


Edited by dushturain - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update...❤️
It was very good ☺️...waiting for the next update to see how they get out of the mess Bihaan created...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it ☺️☺️... Thahaan ❤️
And i dont mind getting diabetes from this😉
Waiting for next part😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
😳 damn this is just so cute..loving it..aww..
I can't stop smiling...
My thahaan..so cute🤗
Well first half was..sexy..and was loveable.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I never thought diabetes would be so sweet😆
So cutee they are! My ThaHaan❤️

I loved the promise they made of not to let anything happen to their love! #GoThaHaan😉

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