ArShi FF : UNSPOKEN LOVE #1 [Chapters 1 to 13] (Thread 2 link given)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bellarosa
read chp frm 9 to 13 in one go
i love it so so so much
felt bad for khushi , she deserve better ,she is a hard working girl

Thank you so much dear 😃 I am glad you loved it 😳

Everything will be fine 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: matosarah
Chapter 1
Hi Opti, I had been eyeing this story for a while😆 and today I got the chance...Just read the chapter 1 and I love it. I am eager to read more. 😃

Hey... Thank you for reading 🤗

I hope you enjoy the story 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: matosarah
Chapter 2
Ahhh! Khushi, over dramatic and belligerent as usual😆 and adorable to the core. Awww poor baby didn't get the job...but I am sure they have offered her job this time. I like it Anjali is Khushi's friend.
Good going dear!

Haha... Khushi will always be that way 😉😆

I am glad you are enjoying 😃

Originally posted by: matosarah
chapter 3
Oh dear ! Shyam aur hand some 😆 ok and why hotwa is OTt with this anger . Khushi as cute as always with confused self . Love it . 😆

Haha 😆

Hotwa will cool down after an event that will change things 😉

Thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: matosarah

This was an ok chapter so she got the job and Arnav seem to be already setting her up for failure . Shyam hmmm I am curious about him :)

Shyam is a nice guy, don't worry 😊 He will be a very "close" friend to Khushi 😉

Originally posted by: matosarah
Chapter 5
Hmm Arnav is tad over the top to me . Why Payal said to him " new girl?" Does Arnav always gets all bend out of shape with all the new girls in office . I am sure there is more to it and I would keep patience :) . Otherwise wonderful update dear .

Maybe he has got upset like this earlier too... He gets upset whenever any girl or maybe any action of a girl reminds him of Sheetal...

You will know the reason soon... Keep reading 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#975

chapter 12:

update was beautiful..

But still arnav is being a jerk to her and why is he doing so, only he knows..

But I don't think he did something with the lights..

continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#976

chapter 13:

he was so much concerned for her.. Now atleast they felt something, may be for sometime but they did...

Khushi bowled over in her presentation...

Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: shalbi
chapter 12:
update was beautiful..
But still arnav is being a jerk to her and why is he doing so, only he knows..
But I don't think he did something with the lights..

continue soon

Thanks dear... 😳

Haha... You will know the reasons soon 😉

Originally posted by: shalbi
chapter 13:
he was so much concerned for her.. Now atleast they felt something, may be for sometime but they did...
Khushi bowled over in her presentation...
Continue soon

Oh yes, he did care for her. They do have feelings for each other... Just that they haven't realized it yet 😉

Khushi did well with the presentation 😊

Thanks for the comments dear 😃

Edited by ..optimist.. - 10 years ago