UNCONSCIOUS PROPOSAL... OS...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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happy birthday avika...Stay blessed dear...
I know I am late.. sorry for the late wishes Avi darling...
I am fine.. my little princess also doing good..
I will update my stories soon..
Meanwhile enjoy this os...
I know its completely crap but tried...
I wrote it at midnight 2am...so don't expect much...
Plz give honest comments...
Thank u all for the wishes...
Love u all...

Avika this os is specially for u baby. My birthday gift for u... love u darling...

Missing u loads girls...


UNCONSCIOUS PROPOSAL...


Jalal is 28 years hot guy , great & youngest business tycoon, most handsome bachelor.. richest but full of attitude.. loves his family.. owns a multi national company.. work is his first priority.. don't believe in love like things.. he don't like all this marriage & everything.. still in dilemma.. but agrees to get married for his mom...

Hamida jalals mother wants jalal to be married & had a family kids etc etc.. she made a alliance with her close friend mainavathi daughter jodha Sharma...

Jalal I searched a girl for u.. plz stay in home today... I want u meet her & talk with her.. if u like we will proceed.. pleaded the bothered mom about his sons future...

Mom.. today?? No way I can't.. I have urgent client meeting.. I have to go.. u know na it's damn important for me.. tell them to come tomorrow.. said jalal..

Plz jalal try to understand.. tomorrow she has exam.. her last semester exams.. she has to prepare right.. plz jalal.. asked Hamida...

Mom for her exam is important same for me also I have a deal.. so I can't waste my time on this bloddy proposal..

Jalal if u won't meet her today I won't talk with u & I won't touch food.. blackmailed Hamida...

Arrrgh... Mom.. plz don't blackmail me... said irritated jalal...

Jalal remember I am tooo ziddy like u.. in fact u got this ziddy nature from me only.. so better accept said confident Hamida...

Aaa.. ok.. fine.. but tell her to come my office.. or else I won't do marriage.. I will meet her after my meeting.. Bye mom.. I am leaving.. it's getting late.. kisses his mother goes out...

But Hamida yelled.. what I suppose to tell them.. yah Allah.. what kind of son u gave me..

Jalal just smiled & goes to his car.. goes to office...

Jalal completely forgot about jodha & immersed in work...

Meanwhile Hamida called to maina to tell jodha to go to jalal office..

Maina understood her bestie but jodha was irritated with his behavior..

Jodha pov:

First I have my exams & this jallad making me to come to his office to waste my time.. I hate u jallad..

End of pov..

Jodha don't want to go but maina convinced her to go.. finally jodha accepted to go his office reluctantly...

Meanwhile jalal cracked the deal.. he was pretty happy with the deal..

He is doing some work in laptop.. suddenly ac( air conditioner) was off..
Being a mechanical student he wants to check what's the problem in ac.. y suddenly it stopped working...he don't know himself y he wanted to repair it.. May be its his destiny to connect to his love..

He removed his blazer , waist coat.. While removing little amount of his white shirt came out from his neatly tucked pants.. folded his sleeves.. takes out the tool kit..
Starts working.. he opened the stabilizer & checking..

While checking his hands , dress & his beautiful face are painted by dust.. his charming face is gets painted by dust.. now he is really looking like mechanic...

Meanwhile his secretary called him...

Sir jodha Sharma is waiting for u.. should I send her to ur cabin..she is saying she has appointment with u..

Jodha?? Who jodha.?? Oh god.. it's maina aunty daughter.. oops I forgot.. Ok priya ( jalal secretary) send her in..

Jalal pov:
I think I must clean before she come.. gets down from the stool..
End of pov..

Before he goes to washroom jodha already entered...

Jalal was awestruck by her beauty.. she is wearing simple peach floral anarkali.. she left her hair open.. she was looking like angel to him..

Jalal just rooted at his place while staring at her...

Hmmm..nobody is there.. where the hell is Mr jallad gone..
She saw jalal in mechanic avatar but she didn't see his photograph so she don't know that he is the jalal.. Oie who are u?? What are u doing in Mr jallad cabin...

Jallad??? With a questioning face asked jalal...

Yeah Mr jallad.. First tell me ur name.. I will tell u who is this jallad...


Jalal pov:
She don't know me.. Ok wait I really want to know y she called me as jalllad.. is it me or someone..but wow jodha u look so beautiful.. this is going to be fun...

End of pov...

Hello hello are u there asked jodha while she moved her fingers in front of him..

Oh sorry madam.. I am akbar.. I came here to check ac.. Sir complained about it.. so.. but who is jalllad madam?? Asked the innocent jalal...

She moved aside his laptop & Sat on his table...

Oh.. Hai akbar.. he only.. Mr jalal.. the great business man.. I hate him.. can't he understand my state.. I have exams from tomorrow.. & mumma forced me to see this jalllad.. I said ok for mumma & Hamida ammi.. the attitude jalllad want me to come to his office.. what he know about me.. tomorrow I have toughest exam..I hate that subject.. but I have to write na...to pass.. to get the certificate.. & this jalllad asked me to come to his stupid office.. actually boy should come to girls house na.. but still I accepted to go to his home.. but but this attitude loaded guy asked me to come here.. said the angry jodha to akbar oops to jalllad..

May be he had some work madam.. that's y he asked u to come.. said politely controlling his smile..

Work my foot.. jodha the princess is coming.. actually he should wait for me.. after marriage if he says work first I will just divorce him...
Said jodha dreamily with a cute smile adoring her pink petals..

Did u accepted jalllad rishta madam asked the happy jalllad...

Hmmm..what to do.. i already fell for this guy.. I loved him yaar.. when mom said about his rishta I was literally danced.. & actually u know I want to see him.. in starting I thought of searching in net about him but I quit myself.. I just wanted to look in his eyes & wanted to ask him whether he love me or not.. but look this jalllad, I came here for him still no sign of him.. I will say no to this marriage.. don't know y I fell for this stupid jalllad.. even I don't know his face.. May be my heart connected to his heart said jodha with smiling... & remember don't call him jalllad.. it's only my right to call him as jalllad.. my jalllad..
Blushes..

Jalal nods with happy...

But but this guy.. wait I will kill him... I hate waiting.. & & what to say.. I am not getting words.. this duffer idiot buddu made princess jodha waiting.. very bad.. said jodha with angry...

But jalal doing dance in his mind.. he fell in love with jodha at the moment.. May be love at first sight. He don't know what it calls but he himself fell for this bubbly girl.. he loved his name jalllad which is given by his new found love...

Oie akbar.. in between y I am telling to u?? Scratch her head.. Don't tell to jalllad yaar.. he will get mad on me.. angry fellow.. after marriage I will less his salt in curries to stop his high bp ( blood pressure).. how much angry yaar he is.. said jodha.. while playing with the things on his desk..

How do u know he is angry?? Asked akbar...

Yaar..I know.. in fact I know everything about him.. when mumma & ammi talks na mostly they talk about jalllad only.. I love to hear about him.. all my friends are crazy about him.. says he is like that he is like this.. but silly fellows don't know that he is going to marry me.. hahaha.. smiles ...my jalllad.. my only love jalllad...Said jodha


U love him?? U didn't see him.. Without seeing , u love him?? Asked The confused jalllad...

Yeah yaar.. even I don't know..but I loved him... I never seen him.. if I try I can see him but I wanted to see him directly not in the stupid photos..shhh don't tell to others but do u know because of his angry he is not getting rishtas so ammi pleaded me to get married with her son.. poor aunty don't know I already fall for him.. u know I acted very well in front of mumma I don't want to get married to this jalal & blah blah... hahaha.. they don't know my trick.. what to do yaar the great jodha fell for very bad jalllad.. see still he didn't came...I will say no to him.. yeah i will do it... said jodha...


Jalal was very happy.. someone loved him unconditionally.. without seeing his face she loved him.. she loved all his flaws.. from now onwards he loves her more..

Oie akbar?? Where were u gone?? Thinking?? But where is this jalllad yaar.. he is testing my patience.. while saying she stepped down from desk came near jalal seat..

She sat on the chair.. jalal chair.. which he never allowed anyone to sit on it..

But today his love happily settled.. she is enjoying...

Wow.. I think my jalllad loves this chair.. that's y he is not leaving his office.. hahaha.. see I invented the biggest truth of his life..

Jalal was awestruck with her smile.. he never saw a girl like jodha.. full of smiles & happy.. he promised himself to make her happy always...

Arrey yaar.. y I am telling all this to u.. I know u just 10minutes back... y y y y ??? Y akbar y ?? Smiles again...hahaha...

She opened his laptop touches it...

She froze in her place.. looks at the picture...

U u u ??? Akbar??? Oh god..
She slapped her head..

Jalal moved near to her.. placed his hands on both sides of the chair..bends his face near to her face.. his breath is touching her face...

Jodha still on the chair..

He looked at her face.. both share a eye lock...

So will u marry me miss jodha?? Will u change ur name as Mrs jodha jalllad??? Asked the jalllad.. ( sorry akbar sorry sorry it's jalal... hahaha)

I... am... so... sor... She stammered her words..

Jalal cups her face.. I love u jodha.. Will u bear this jalllad rest of ur life plz.. I am not getting any rishtas.. plz marry me.. winks at her...

Jodha started crying.. I am so sorry.. sob.. I felt it.. sob..May be I didn't recognized sob..u.. but my heart felt ur.. sob.. presence .. sob..so I Said.. sob... all this to u.. sob sob...plz sob... She started crying with loud...

With this jalal got tensed. He was just teasing her.. She is crying..

Jalal don't know what to do.. so he just slammed his rough lips on her rosy petals sealing her fate with jalllad...

Their beautiful love journey started...

Plz comment dears...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww so sweet..
Jodha and jallad
Hahahaha
Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice os
update your story also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh di you are back
Nice os
Thanks for Pm dii
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Akka welcome back
Nothing to hurry Akka u take care of urs n baby first then update
Ll post another comment after going through the OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful jodha call him jallad but she loves him please give us second part of os soon😃😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a beautiful os akka
i think u should make one more shot to continue this
i fell in ❤️ with this os
innocent confession
thought of urs is awesome akka
thanks for pm akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a beautiful gift for avika akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for info about our little princess too
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I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU ARE BACK...WE ALL MISS YOU TOO😃
AND LOVELY THING IS YOU AND BABY BOTH ARE FINE
DI IF POSSIBLE PLEASE UPDATE BABY'S PIC I REALLY WANT TO SEE YOUR LITTLE PRINCESS
TAKE YOUR TIME FOR UPDATING YOUR STORIES...YOUR HEALTH IS MORE IMPORTANT
TAKE CARE OF YOU AND PRINCESS
LOVE YOU TOO❤️

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