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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Amazingg updattee Lara !!!! really loved it !! 👏👏👏

the way u described Suman's fear is totally amazingg seriouslyy and the way u described her emotions ...her self control in front of pushkar too was mesmerizing 😳😳
i cant wait to see shravan's doubt clearing and his little regret for his harsh actions against suman 😆
and i also cant wait to see his immense hidden love for suman that pure love again emerging on the surface 😳
plzz plzz updatee soonnneeerrr 😳😃
And thankss very thanks for the PM 😳


Hey! Thanks! 😳
We'll work with Shravan's mental disorder and bring him to order soon but the process will be bitter-sweet I warn yaa...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi27

Very well crafted story.


Thanks! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm a silent reader, but your FF is beyond amazing! Loving the characters, Suman and Shravan. you have crafted them beautifully 😃 You are very talented👏
Looking forward to some great reading filled with romance, passion and angst😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank U so so so much for your likes and comments!

Creative minds, take my cordial thanks for you dhasu ideas about how Suman can earn those two and a half crore. 👏👏👏 Most of your ideas are going to get selected and processed in Suman's upcoming battle. 👍🏼

---awe10some---, pearl100, kennashreign, vishti.dvd, orion23, ezbeedscrittore, andy1245, jhankarbeats87


This chapter is dedicated to "jhankarbeats87" for your direct tiffin service idea that is going to be the first step for Suman. ⭐️




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That was a surprise, wasn't it?


Shravan notices a lot of things and he definitely care for Suman. He's just a little insane and blind at the moment. But don't worry friends, I'll give him a shock treatment soon and hopefully that will be enough for his brain and eyes. 😈 And about his heart - well, I hope you guys have been noticing that it is already a work of progress. The progress is slow, but you never know what will trigger the speed and when.


And Suman - the oblivious girl! She's started her fight, first step has been taken. But her confusion on Shravan's behaviour, that is the thing I'm enjoying so much writing recently. How about you all? Are you enjoying Suman's dilemma?


Akhri Pasta - remember Chunky Pundey? Mamma mia. 🤣


And about that map of Afghanistan roti, 😆 when I made roti for the first time, it actually was like that. Couldn't help but include it.


So, if you've enjoyed reading this chapter, then please press the like button and comment. I'm eager to hear from you all.


And I'm so very happy to read all your superb ideas about how Suman can earn that huge about of money and payback her debt. My readers are really so smart and inventive, hats off to you guys! 👏👏 It's because of your suggestions that I now got the final idea of how Suman is going to fight this war. I'm going to mix up your ideas. So, thank you so so so much for your help. Love you all! 🤗


- Lara.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Lara dr that was just fab. Total paisa vasool
Loved the staff cncern 4 suman. N that serial killer cmmnt was bang on.
Ah that fight over food n poisn was in a manner cute! That akhri pasta thingy made me all smiles. Mamma mia suicide.
Pushkar, the cutie. He did probe on the matter n the khadus our chaman is, he didn't like that.
Well shravu is a switheart. He sure noticd his love's pain. Loved him 4 that. Nw wa8ing 4 hm to be fully enlightend bout hw wrng he is.
Fanx 4 pm dr that ur gonna send me n update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...i really like the potrayal of suman here... would be waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay first of all, update this was a treat!! Don't remember when was last I was so excited to read the next part of an OS, I guess I got to commend your writing for that👏

Secondly, my idea will be incorporated eventually🥳thank you!!

Thirdly, coming to the chapter, it was wow! A few things that stood out,
- Sumo the resilient soul! I love her for that.. she decided she wanted to pay off the loan and she's already moving towards it.. Can't help but admire her strength of character!

- Aakhri pasta🤣 everytime I make or eat pasta that's all I say.. it's the kind of thing that sticks in your mind😆

- First the pasta in the freeze and then a bottle of pain killers, this Shravan ain't so bad.. he has his own mind, own perceptions and then does what he deems fit, but he's got a heart and it's thawing.. and I'm loving it❤️

Shock treatment eh? Bring it on! I can't wait to see what's in store! You fabulous writer! I'm sure you're gonna give us another treat!
Waiting for the next🤗
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's fantastic and waiting for the shock you said ...update soon desperate for it yr and you are a talented writer dear...and thanks for speedy update thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey lara!!! This update was a bang on!!! Our Mr.Khadoos is back 😉
I really liked sumo's determination n efforts to pay off her debts. She wants to get freed asap instead of being trapped in a loveless forced marriage. But it isnt a total loveless marriage coz our hero do cares for her 😉 ...shravan needs a jor ka jhatka 😉 .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
I like this suman more
Seriously shravan is such a jerk
Maybe suman was wrong in the past but shravan had no right to be villain to her
Love their scene that he do care for her
What is this?? Two more accusations on suman
Her mami is a gone case
But when will truth come out
I'm eagerly waiting for revelations and aftermath
Continue soon

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