Arshi FF- BREACH OF VOWS- Is posted again. - Page 17

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.

Read both your fics yesterday and i must say that you are super talented!
And this is an outstanding work! Hey, how are you? Thank you very much for your compliments, they really mean a lot to me.
Very well-written! Interesting plot! Love the emotional element! Connects me more to the story!
Lost the count of times i've been thinking about how much will Arnav have to suffer since yesterday! He does continue to suffer for few more days...actually since this story is written almost in real time, so it seems stretched a bit especially since, i keep on including their past in between the parts, which brings a true essence of their love and passion and their relationship...into perspective. It would all come around in due time.
I could almost connect to every character there except Shyam! Maybe a bit more about Shyam will definitely change it! Ahhh! Shyam would make little bit more sense when information about their other siblings would be revealed...Right now, Shyam is a patriarchal figure of Raizada clan. And he loves his youngest sister Khushi like his own child...Since Khushi left Arnav and came back seeming miserable, he thought Arnav couldn't keep her happy...

More about Arnav's and Khushi's married life would be revealed shortly...but it would be a while when the entire truth about Khushi's reasons come out.
Good work dear! This is lovely!

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Ritu when I was reading the Fair on how Khushi found Arnav and the way Arnav was observing her bought back so many memories for me , I used to go to the yearly fair in Hyderabad and go on rides sometimes with friends and sometimes with my brother and when I am with friends you know there we used to look at boys and pass comments on them it was all so much fun. Thanks a lot for bringing those beautiful memories back. Yah it was such a sweet memory of my childhood also, I wonder if we still have those types of Fair in India...as you know it's been while for me since I was back in Motherland😉...But yeyy! fav. past time was checking out guys for sure...and raiding those spicy food stalls. Yum! Writing this whole part and previous one was trip down memory lane...But dang!! I didn't meet any handsome "Arnav" in that Fair...Shucks...!..if only...heheh

The flash back was so beautiful , Now I really want to know what went wrong between Arnav and Khushi that she decided to divorce him. I know it will be a very big reason , but still how come such a beautiful fairy tale came crashing down. See, I told this to other readers, when they were reading it on Fan Fiction forum...the reason of hers was more psychological than anything...there was no black and white reason...Wait till u get to that part...I hope it would be able to clarify lot of things😃

Originally posted by: matosarah

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-

Awww!! This was so so so beautifully penned down. Thank you so much FriedriceJi, it means a lot to me when a comment comes from an accomplished writer herself😃 I loved how you bring the parts from flashbacks and weave it together. Its incredible.It did slow down the story a bit for those impatient souls who wanted to know about the problem instantly...But I just wanted to emphasize on their love and depict how strong that marriage was...And plus their past had some very unique component also...which was fun to write and I am so glad u are having fun reading it🤗 Their love and chemistry just make you swoon. Their first meet was si cute and funny at the same time. I'd say love at first sight. They sure fell for each other in first sight...It was that unique connection where souls connect without any rhyme and reason...I wanted to create that kind of love story...for this couple😳They were so in love.. I really really wonder about the reason she left him. There has to be one solid reason otherwise I won't be able to forgive Khushi for what she did to Arnav. Because his pain is si potent.. So his love. Haha! You know, it was very different kind of reason, which she thought was the right one...and when it would be revealed...it would require lot of patience and maturity to understand this woman's psyche...I would love to hear more from you on this🤗 Cant wait to read the next chapter. Happy writing ❤️