A Short Love Story - Tum Ho Paas Mere Saath Mere OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ahem died of an accident. Gopi is completely broke after his death. After 6 years, Gopi suffers from Cancer. Kokila asks for help from Jigar and Paridhi. Both are rude and unwilling to help her.
Dr. Krishna takes all the responsibilities taking her to the hospital and getting her treated but Gopi's condition becomes worsens.

Kokila wails to Lord Krishna, "O Lord Krishna, You have taken away my ghar ki chiraag. What a blunder I've committed by allowing Paridhi's entry in MM. I didn't listen to my faithful Gopi Vahu against pairing her with Jigar. Even Baa and Mota Bhabhi, Mota Bhai and Ahem's dad isn't there. Now you are taking away my Gopi Vahu with you forever. I know that will end her suffering in this current hell but to whom can I cling on to? Do one thing. Please take me away too."

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Gopi dies. Kokila removes all her jewelry and spends her rest of her life in an Ashram.
Paridhi: Thank God, this old lady will not bother us anymore.
Monica: Seriously, now we are the owners of this house.
Jigar becomes a sadu type and tells Paridhi, "Don't come to me for petty issues. You wanted money and I've made provisions for you wherein you will get monthly income without doing any work."
Paridhi: I want your time.
Jigar: I don't have time for you or anyone else in the family.
However, Gopi sees Ahem. Both unite again.



Ahem: I knew you will definitely come. My Shrimathiji, how do you feel about this new world?
Gopi: It is really great.

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho
Tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karoon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

Ahem: We have come to the world...
Gopi: Where There Is No Cruelty, No Exploitation...
Ahem: No Business Tension, No one between you & me...
Gopi: No aging, No Anita, No Mansi, No Anurag...

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Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, tumko main jeeta hoon.

Ahem: No Kidnapping, No Accidents, No Murder...
Gopi: No Doctors, No Nurses, No Heart Attack...
Ahem: No resolving of anyone's differences, No differences of opinion between us...
Gopi: No Blames, No Disowning, No Confrontations, No Evil...



Oooh ho...
Tum ho
ahmmm...
Aaah haa aa...

Kahin se.. kahin ko.. bhi
Aao bewajah chale
Poochhe bina kisi se
Hum mile

Ahem: No Tears, No Character Testing, No Hatred...

Gopi: No Education, No Laptop Washing, No Jewellery...

Ahem: No Abuses, No Insults, No Food, No Green Tea...

Gopi: No Marriage, No Kids, All Our Wants Are Here...



Bandishein naa rahi koi baaqi

Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karooon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

Oooh ho ho...

Ahem: No Restriction, No Domination, Full Freedom Here...

Gopi: No Lies, No Deceit, No Kalakaris, No Need To Answer Anybody...

Ahem: Full Of Peace Here, Nothing To Prove...
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Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon

Oooh hoo ho...
Tum ho
Hoo aa...

Ahem: No Attachment, No Bondages, No Selfishness, No Ego...

Gopi: Only Selfless & Unconditional Love...

Ahem: Your Love Has Been Selfless Even On The Earth...

Gopi: No Death Here Too...


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Ahem: Only Love Here, A Pure Unconditional & Selfless Love...
Gopi: Which Isn't Available Anywhere In The Earth So As To Purchase It...

Both Say, "Nothing To Prove Here."
They Hug Each Other... And Live Happily Forever. No Tomorrow For Them Hereafter.

********************************************THE END****************************************************

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256748 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Nice little short story
Love it .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
After ahem's death gopi died due 2 cancer.Kokila in ashram.oh no...Paridhi n monica have no feelings n r selfish.How cud paridhi change?bcz of this jigar has become a stone.While all r in pain monica n pari enjoying.oh..wish they were punished.Gohem united in heaven.liked their conversation esp no death,no accident kidnap,no vamps..only luv which is not there on earth.nice pics

plz write another story bringing a twist that ahem did not die n was saved from d accident.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Really nice...loved the way it ended...let them unite in another world...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
wow wonderful os loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awe that was lovely
that jigar n Paridhi were nasty pieces of work
Paridhi got her money n status but didn't get love
whilst Amen n Gopi died but got to be together in love forever
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
Edited by Heatsha8176 - 9 years ago
Sd1978 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Loved it! Id rather Gopis track end this way and soon..show can focus on the nxt generation..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Wonderful...fabulous work done...it made me emotional q
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Beautiful short story! 😃

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