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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks god that the four pranksters interfered. loved the update.. Payal accepted Aman.. yay.. waiting for the next..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 15

The next day passed and it was night 11.45pm!

Just 15 minute more, and its Aman uncle's birthday.

Adi, Ruhaan, Ruhi and Sonu were tiptoeing to Aman's room. They had strictly warned the elders not to wish him tonight as they want him for the whole night. Their parents laughed and agreed to the kids demand and the four pranksters got ready to implement their plan - SURPRISE for Aman Uncle.

Suddenly Adi stopped them and whispered, "If we open the door, he may wake up! We can take the poolside route. Khushi maasi's room poolside is connected to his'!"

Others nodded and they sneaked into Khushi's room where Arshi were snoring lightly. They laughed softly hearing their snores and sleuthed to the poolside.

Aman was sleeping peacefully when he felt something wet hit his body. He chose to ignore it and murmured something inaudible and drifted into sleep.

But he again felt something wet on his body and slightly opened his eyes. Leaning to the bed table, he switched on the lights and sat up on the bed.

He looked around and found none. He lifted his hand to his cheek where he felt wet and felt some wetness. He then smelt his hand and found it to be a very pleasant smell.

What is it?" He asked to himself and sat confused when suddenly the MP3 played in the room began to work.

Happy birthday to you...

Happy birthday to you...

Happy birthday to you Aman Uncle...

Happy birthday to you...

Aman chuckled hearing the voice from the MP3 player. It is Rockstar Ruhaan's voice, he knew it!

He looked at the clock and it showed sharp 12.00 am!

He laughed and called out, "Come out pranksters, I know you people are here hiding somewhere!"

No one appeared.

Aman rolled his eyes and called out, "Look, I know how to bring you four out okay?"

Still no one appeared.

And he used his 'Aman uncle technique''.

"Sonu darling...where are you..." Aman sang, "I want to hug you and give a wet noisy kiss on your cheek so that you'll giggle like a baby!"

As he expected, he heard a giggle, beneath his bed.

Aman laughed and bent down on the floor and saw baby Sonu hiding under the bed.

"Got you!" Aman said and pulled her out while she giggled.

"Happy birday (birthday) Aman uncle..." Sonu said cutely.

"Aww...thank you sweetheart!" Aman said giving a wet kiss on her cheek and she giggled.

"Now where are the other three?" Aman asked her and she shrugged indicating she don't know.

Suddenly, the three pranksters jumped out of their hiding space and screamed, "HAPPY BIRTHDAY AMAN UNCLE!" and squeezed the snow-spray they held in the hand.

WOOOSSSHHH

In seconds Aman was covered in white snow!

"You pranksters...come here!" Aman screamed and the four pranksters laughed out loud. Sonu slid from his hands and joined her siblings in snow spray attack.

"Ok...enough...bas karo!" Aman said wiping the white snow from his eyes.

The four stopped their attack and then hugged him tight by waist. "Happy birthday Aman uncle" four of them sang together.

Aman smiled and bent to their height and said, "Thank you my four rockstars."

Adi ran to the curtains and took out a packet wrapped in gift wrapper and gave it to him.

"Arrey wah, what is this?" Aman asked holding the packet.

"Gift..." Sonu squealed.

"Aww...thank you!" Aman said and opened the gift.

His smiled faded seeing the gift. He held it in his hand and gazed at it. A lone tear escaped his eyes and he looked at the four babies before him.

"Aman uncle...you didn't like...?" Sonu asked wiping the tear from his eyes.

Aman smiled and again looked at the gift.

It was a clay model of four children hugging a man!

He looked at the four and the kids hugged him tight from four directions and cried, "We love you Aman uncle!"

His mind drifted to the day when he met her for the first time. He had gone to Laxminagar for some work and had asked the driver to park the car outside the lane. But the driver took the car inside the lane and was about to hit a child when an angelic girl came in between and saved the boy.

Her cute and beautiful face had been imprinted in his mind that day! Everywhere he saw her. In the mirror, near his poolside, on his laptop, everywhere he saw that angel.

He learnt her name - Payal! She was Khushi ji's sister!

A smile adorned his lips recalling the days of their marriage. Everything was so perfect! Their new years eve, mehendi ceremony where he had tried to meet her, marriage where they both took vows for lifetime...

But what had gone wrong?

Akash lied on the bed and thought of the days after marriage.

Everything changed.

He recalled the day when Shyam brought out the truth of the Gupta sisters. His heart broke beyond repair! The girl he loved was nothing but a s**t, a gold digger. She and her sister was trying to ruin the Raizada parivaar! They were trying to ruin his di's life!

Akash felt disgusted of himself that day.

If only, he had not fallen in her charms, everything would have been so perfect!

But she...how could she do that to him? He loved her so much and she...she was just faking it. She and her sister were planning to get the Raizada property! It was all fake.

Still he loved her. He loved her but wasn't able to believe her once again!

He was over the moon when he came to know that he is going to be a father. But the next moment, his jeejaaji had asked him,

"Akash, how can you be sure that it is your baby? These Guptas sisters cannot be trusted. I wonder how many men these girls have trapped!"

His heart broke beyond repair.

Still he loved her. But he was broken. He didn't even know whether the child in his wife's womb was his or not! He felt devastated and when his bhai and di got into an argument, he couldn't stop himself.

And today, after long 10 years, he talked with his baby! His son!

And hear it My-so-called-FATHER, you mean nothing to me!

YOU'RE NOT MY FATHER! WE MIGHT SHARE SAME BLOOD BUT FOR ME YOU ARE THE PERSON WHO BETRAYED MY MOTHER, MAASI, CHACHU AND OTHERS! FOR ME MY FATHER IS AMAN UNCLE!

MR. AKASH SINGH RAIZADA, STAY AWAY FROM ME!

No matter how much you try, I WON'T STAY WITH YOU! So don't even try

He sat up on his bed and covered his face with palms.

He felt an unbearable pain in his heart. His son, his baby hates him! He considers him as betrayer. Akash wiped tears from his eyes. How much does he wish to hear the word papa' from his mouth? Will he ever hear that? How much he wishes Payal to run to him and apologize for her mistake and they three would be a happy family! How much he wishes her to be back!

"I know she is a s**t. But I love her! I loved her all these years but hid it from everyone. I love her like I do before our marriage. She is still my life, my wife! I have right on her, not Aman! I have every right to scold and shout at her, not Aman!"

FOR ME MY FATHER IS AMAN UNCLE

FOR ME MY FATHER IS AMAN UNCLE

FOR ME MY FATHER IS AMAN UNCLE

FOR ME MY FATHER IS AMAN UNCLE

Aman!

His blood boiled thinking about him.

His son considers him as father. His wife considers him more than her own husband. His brother considers him more than his own brother.

"Aman Mathur, you snatched everything from me! My wife, my son, my brothers...everyone! I won't let you win! You'll never have my son calling you papa! It's my word! Akash Singh Raizada's word!" Akash said to himself.

After making the pranksters go to bed, Aman came back to his room and was about to switch off the lights when his mobile beeped indicating a message. Frowning, wondering who is messaging him at 12.30 in morning. Aman took his cell and read the message.

Come up to the terrace. I want to say something.

- Payal

He frowned. What does she have to talk? Anyway I'll go!

He climbed up the stairs and reached the terrace only to get rooted.

There, before him, was Payal Gupta standing in all her glory wearing a dark blue chiffon saree, diamond necklace, and a pair of diamond earrings, with her long hair left open - for the first time after 10 years!

"Payal..." words didn't come out of his mouth.

Smiling faintly, she asked softly, "How do I look?"

"Beautiful!" The word flew from his heart.

She smiled widely and said, "Are you gonna stand there or come here?"

Aman jerked from the trance and slowly walked towards her. Payal smiled and wished him, "Happy birthday" He smiled and whispered, "Thank you"

"Wo...I wanted to ask you something..." Payal said and he stood before her waiting for her question.

Looking at his eyes, Payal asked after a long silence, "Will you be my Adi's papa?"

Aman stared at her and she looked down and said softly, "I'm ready Aman! I want to marry you. I want you to be my Adi's father."

Not getting any response from him, she looked up and saw him standing like a statue.

The next moment, she felt herself being pulled for a tight hug. She felt his arms wrapped around her little frame and his face in her crook of neck. She closed her eyes and unknowingly her hands lifted up and caressed his back.

"This is the best birthday gift ever!" She heard him whisper it in her ears and she smiled and hugged him tight.

Standing far apart, Akash Singh Raizada watched the scene before him and realized the truth.

He has lost his wife...FOREVER.

"Aman Mathur, you'll pay for this!" Akash whispered under his breath.





PRECAP

"NO!" Akash said standing up, "I cannot lose my son! He will stay here with me, forever!"

"For that you need to degrade Aman in front of him! Adi values him more than anyone. So to win Adi's heart, you should make him believe that you're a far better person than Aman!" Anjali said.

"But how di?" Akash asked.

"I have a plan!" Anjali said.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.

Akash is so pathetic.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Akash is once again falling into Jha trap! Wonder how he ran AR without analyzing things!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry... I am really very sorry Achu!

I know I din unres Chapter-14 yet. But now when I got ur PM for Chapter-15, I realized I haven't yet read Chapter-14. So going back to Pg-54 I read it. And I am really sorry for not unresing it.

I'll comment for both here itself..

No doubt Chapter-14 was awesome. Loved how Payal realized who she really is. And how badly she needs Aman in her life. The love is yet to make a way in her heart but I am sure it will do.

Loved her monologue and the pranksters planning a surprise for Aman. I just loved it. I loved how Adi stood up and said that he considers Aman as his father and that he doesn't want to stay with Aakash.

Chapter-15,
The surprise was just so beautiful. First the snow spray and then the gift. Wow! I really loved the gift u gave. First when u wrote that 'The smile faded from Aman's face' I thought they must have gifted something related to Payal but then sighed in relief knowing the gift. The four rockstars hugging Aman. Wow! So thoughtful yaar!

I hate Aakash. He himself isn't sure of what he wants. He says he loves Payal bit even calls a **** If he really loves her why doesn't he trust her? Did he marry Payal or Shyam? I think he did marry Shyam and that's why he is so blinded in his love for Shyam that he can't see the truth just like Pooja Thaal.

Payal finally confessed to Aman that she wants to marry him. Wow! a marriage is upcoming.

But What the hell! Aakash is thinking of taking revenge. Argh! I hate him. Let Aakash know that he already lost his wife 10 years back when he called her with abusive words and kicked her out.

Aman's birthday for him is the most memorable. But it was like someone was gonna come on his bday. Who is she? I can't wait to know about that lady. Someone who Shyam betrayed???? I'm scratching my head.

And I really hate Aakash & Anjali. How dare they think of degrading Aman's image in front of Adi? I HATE THEM.

I hope they both don't get successful on ruining Adi's brain. Pls.. Pretty please. After All Adi's brain is still a child. Pls don't let him even for once doubt Aman. Pls he considers him his father. If even an ounce of doubt is created in Adi's mind against Aman, their relationship will get tainted and I don't want that.

Please please please update soon. Thank you for the update Achu!

I am waiting for ur reply

Love you loads.. Muahhh!!!

Love,
Kiddo
Edited by Kiddo_Star - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Akash cannot make up.his mind about what he wants.
May be payal and the others should never have come back. They were and would have been happy in their own world far away from all of these cunning people.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update
I like Aman and Payal as a couple
Loved the four pranksters surprise for Aman
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Akash will never learn...
Hope anjali nd his plan are a big flop...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey lovely update love it sooo much finally payal say yes to aman but akash hear them
precape is quit scary as anjali again brainwashing akash I hate her sooo much
I hope they both don't get successful on ruining Adi's brain. Pls.. Pretty please. After All Adi's brain is still a child. Pls don't let him even for once doubt Aman. Pls he considers him his father. If even an ounce of doubt is created in Adi's mind against Aman, their relationship will get tainted and I don't want that.

plz plz update next part soon waiting eagerly for next part plz give us next part today itself as Sunday bonus 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
but what adi told akash is true ... he is not a fool lke akash
akash believed shyam over payal... really a fool
waiting to read further

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