Fark padta hai!!...A ShraMan OS

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"Enough is enough!!!"shouted Shravan.There was no one in the house except Ramnath, Nirmala, Shravan and Suman who had come to see Shravan who was not keeping well.Suman and Shravan were chatting in Shravan's room when they heard the noise of a vase breaking.They ran out and much to their shock, saw Ramnath and Nirmala who were fighting for Shravan.
"Tumhara Shravan par koi haq nahi hai!!Kaha thi tum jab Shravan ko tumhari zaroorat thi?Tab bhi main tha uske pass aur aaj bhi main hi rahunga!!" shouted an enraged Ramnath.
"Tumhara matlab kya hain, haan?Tumhe kya lagta hai, 11 saal pehle Maine Shravan ko yun hi chorr diya tha?Aur tum to chup hi raho Ramnath!!Tumne kya kiya tha, haan?Tumne to...un
Bas!!shouted Shravan, who was listening to them all this while.His voice was loud enough to make them silent and scare Suman who was unaware of this side of her best friend.
"Aap log decide karne wale kaun hote ho Ki main kiske pass aur kaha rahunga?Main ab 5 saal ka bachcha nahi raha jo aap Ki har baat manne ko raazi ho jaungaa!!"
"Dekha Nirmala, aaj tum ek baap se apne bete ko alag karne par tuli huyi ho!Aaj to main..."
"Kaun kisko kisse alag karne Ki koshiah kar raha hai, woh to dikh hi raha hai..."
"Bas kijiye aap dono!Bhagwan ke liye ye mat bhool jayiye Ki aapke bete ko bahut tez bukhar hai!" shouted Suman who was very much afraid that Shravan might not be able to bear this any more.
But before she could complete, Shravan who could not bear it anymore, took a knife in his hand, rushed to his room and locked it.Ramnath,Nirmala and Suman immediately rushed and banged hard on the door but in vain.
Suddenly,an idea struck Suman.She went to the garden and got into Shravan's room through the open window.She was about to breathe when she saw Shravan placing the knife on his wrist.
"SHRAVAN!!!!!!!"shouted Suman as she tried to snatch the knife from him.
"Nahi Sumo.Mat roko mujhe. Mere jeene ka kya fayda?Bachpan se main apni maa ke liye taras raha hoon.Aur aaj jab woh jaake mujhe mili, to mere parents alag ho jaana chahte hain.Kya unhone ek baar bhi socha hain Ki mujh par kya beet rahi hai?Mere zinda rehne se kisiko koi fark nahi padta!"
"Mujhe padta hai Shravan,mujhe fark padta hai!Tumne socha bhi kaise Ki tumhare zinda rehne se mujhe koi fark nahi padta?Tum jab haste ho, tab mujhe lagta hai Ki mujhe duniya Ki saari khushiyaan mil gayi.Tum jab rote ho, to lagta hai jaise meri duniya hi khatam ho gayi.Tumhare hasne se,rone se,khuahi se,gham se,har cheez se mujhe fark padta hai kyunki..."
Suman stopped as she realised what she was going to say,
"Kyunki kya Sumo?Kyunki?Bolo Sumo!Mere khush hone se ya dukhi hone se kyun tumhe itna fark padta hai.Bolo Sumo please...BOLO!!!!"
"Kyunki main tumse pyaar karti hoon!!I love you Shravan!!I love you!!
Shravan was silent for a while.He still could not digest Suman's words. He could not believe his ears.He shouted
"Kya?Pyaar?Sumo tum mere saath aisa kaise jar sakti ho?Maine humesha se tumhe apna best friend mana hai par tum?Maine kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki humare beech dosti ke alava..."
But he was cut off by Suman.
"Main chalti hoon."she said as she realised that Ramnath and Nirmala were still banging the door.
Suman opened the door and rushed out.
"Hame maaf kar do beta!!Hamne kabhi is baat ko tumhare nazariye se dekhne Ki koshish hi nahi Ki.Aaj se tum hum dono ke pass rahoge aur is baat ko lekar hum kabhi bhi nahi jhagdenge.We are sorry beta!! said Shravan's parents who were crying uncontrollably.But Shravan could hear only Sumo's voice ringing in his ears.He still could not believe that his Sumo, whom he trusted the most, had broken his trust.
So, this is it for now!Will update soon.But since I have given a lambi update, I want lambe comments too!Roses se leke tomatoes aur chappals, sab chalenge.Lekin plz do comment.
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Shikha

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally Suman confessed that she loved him
How Shravan could think that she betrayed him
He also loved her in the past
This Shravan is very aggressive
Hope he doesn't misunderstood Suman and break her heart
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for all the beautiful comments.Will try to update in an hour.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's fantastic ...beautiful update soon I'm desperate to read next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice!
Update real soon😳
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PART 2
5 days later...
"Beta tum is shaadi se khush to ho na?"said Nanu.Suman nodded her head sadly.
Jeevan's family was coming to see her.Suman was hurt by Shravan's reaction and she had made up her mind to marry anyone her Nanu chose for her.Dressed in a blue chiffon saree with a low back blouse,silver jhumkas, a blue eye liner, a little bit of blush and light pink lipstick, sge looked prettier than an angel who resides in heaven.With a heavy heart, she served tea to Jeevan and his parents.
"Beta,tumhaare papa kahan kaam karte hai?Tumhari ma kya karti hain?"asked Jeevan's mom who was taken aback when Suman answered her question with a tear trickling down her cheeks.
"Mere ma-papa is duniya mein nahi rahe" said Suman managing to control her tears.
"Kya!Ek bin maa-baap Ki bachchi kabhi bhi hamare ghar Ki bahu nahi ban sakti!Yeh rishta hame manzoor nahi hai!!"said Jeevan's parents and stormed out of the house.Nanu stood still for a while and hiding his tears, he went back to his room.Suman stood still, rooted to the spot,
It was 2 o'clock at night.There was no one in the house except for Nany and Sumo.Everyone had gone to Chandigarh. Sumo was standing at her window, thinking of Shravan and crying. She was so engrossed in her thoughts that she had not even changed her clothes.She was crying bitterly when someone hugged her from behind.She closed her eyes as she knew that it was none other than Shravan.
"Mujhe chodo Shravan"said Sumo but Shravan did not listen to her.He said,"I am sorry Sumo.Mujhe tum par is tarah se chillana nahi chahiye tha.Actually mam-papa ke jhagde Ki wajah se..."he was cut off by Suman.
"Tum mujhe sorry kyun bol rahe ho?Mere aansuon se tumhe kaha fark padta hai?Main to tumhare liye koi Maine nahi rakhtiShravan leaned forward
Shravan untied the dori of her blouse and kissed her back.An inexpressible pleasure grasped Suman who enjoyed it but wad reluctant to show it.
"Ab samjhi Ki tum mere liye kya Maine rakhti ho?said Shravan but Suman kept quiet.
He slowly kissed her back again, then he leaned forward and kissed her shoulders and then her neck.A tear trickled down Suman's cheek.He turned her and then kissed her forehead and cheeks.
"Ab samjhi?"he asked.Suman kept quiet as she was quite taken aback by the unexpected bliss.
Shravan leaned forward and gently kissed on her lips.Though hesitant at first but Suman reciprocated with equal desire.They were so lost in each other when they realised that they were out of breath.
"Kyun kar rahe ho yeh sab?" said Suman crying.
"Kynki main tum se pyaar karta hoon.Aaj nahi, pichle 10 saalon se par kabhi tumse kehne Ki himmat nahi juta paya.Ma jab mujhe chod kar chali gayi, tab laga Ki duniya Ki saari aurtei matlabi hote hain.Lekin aaj main samajh gaya Ki tumhare bina main adhoora hoon.Ek din tumhe nahin dekhta to meri jaan nikal jaati hain.Tumse baat nahi kar leta toh gale se awaaz nahi nikalti hai.Jab tak tumhari awaaz nahi sun leta, tab tak kuch sunai hi nahi deta hai.Sumo, main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta.I love you Sumo!I love you!I love you!"
He hugged her tightly.She was so overwhelmed that she forgot everything and hugged him.Time stood still.They were so glad in each other's arms that they forgot about time.
After a while, Shravan bent down on his knees and took out a ring from his pocket.He held Sumo' hand and made her wear the ring.The ring fit so perfectly as if it was made for only her.He said,"So,Miss Suman Tiwari, are you ready to tie the knot with me?Are you ready to become Mrs Shravan Malhotra?"
Suman smiled and said,"Arre wah, mera Qutub Minar poori tayiyari ke saath aaya hai!Haan, taiyaar hoon main, tumhare saath chalne ke liye, tumhari humsafar banne ke liye.I am ready to become Mrs Shravan Malhotra!"
Shravan was so delighted that he grabbed her and kissed her again.Suman gave in and reciprocated with equal passion.That night became the witness of two people ready to take their relationship to the next level after friendship who promised to be there for each other, always.
THE END!!
So finally its done!Enjoy reading!And this time also I want lambi comments from each one of you!
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Shikha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely story with a perfect ending ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was really good.
So shravan understood at last
And i hate that jeevans mom
But i love her too
Wo maan jati to ShraMan kese hote?
It was beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
that was superb
absolutely loved it
thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW it was superb, i wish ye saab true hojaye very soon.

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