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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: KostinsQueen
SANNO...FABULOUS FANTASTIC 🤗

AHHH ..THAT VOICE MAIL , I THINK ITS THE MOST HONEST VOICE MAIL IN THE WORLD 😳

U R KILLING ME LITERALLY SANNO..I SO WANT TO SEE SHRAVAN & SUMAN LIKE THIS...PREGGO SUMO & SHRAVAN CONSOLING HER

LOVE U DARLING ❤️

Honest 🤣
Yes. it was definitely the most honest voicemail 🤣 People will stop calling them😆😆
Thank you so much Hasu ❤️ 🤗

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Awesome yaar
Especially voice mail and stolen kiss
🤗
Sani love u

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Payal

@Grenade

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: -AvadaKedavra-
@Payal- Bro, you are my favorite person on the earth right now 😆
Thank you so much for taking the time to review every fable. I will respond to your comment properly, later on😊
But here, have a jhappi 🤗

Originally posted by: -AvadaKedavra-

It is okay, I love reading long-ish reviews😆
Thank you for taking time to riview each and every fable of mine. I am glad you liked it😆😳

You're most welcome! 😳

Aww 🤗

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Eeshaal

@Eeshaal

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

You are so gifted I amloving every single fable , I hope writers can see this and take hints . Amazing writing .

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

FINALLY, I got to this, Baaji Bellatrix 😆

The fourth one. AJDJDSKLJKKDSSK. Absolutely fan-frcking-tastic!

"She paused as she met his eyes with a small smile and a wistful look."

I could imagine the Khamba smiling with his eyes squinting at the corner. Like, no, I can imagine the entire scenario.. GO TELL THEM TO GET MARRIED ALREADY. I CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE.

"... and she literally relies on me everytime she wants something from the top shelf."

either you stop writing such adorable fables on their married life or go get them married in the show because it's beautiful yet painful at the same time. LIKE I WANT THIS IN THE SHOW!! I want such adorableness on my screen. *sniffs*

"But the actual reason I love my height is because of her hugs."

They need to hug properly in the show, like I CANNOT WAIT.

Well, the seventh one. HOW ADORABLE

Dude, that part about leaving wet towels on bed and toothpaste open, it reminded me of Zaroon and Kashaf somehow. At that very instant, an image popped up in my mind of Kashaf picking up a wet towel from bed and capping all the perfumes xD

"If this is not love, then I don't know what it is."

Like all these fables are so adorable that now I think I need synonyms for adorable to use a different word for each fable 😆

Chachi Masterchef dekhti hai. That woman can't pronounce pizza theek se, masterchef mein kya samajh ayega unhe about those complicated dishes XD

Sumo's love for cricket is quite similar to Nikita's obsession with cricket and it's so aodrable.. le it's here once again. *decides to improve vocab*

"Woah waoh. You will not look hideous Sumo. You are beautiful."

"Really?"

*nods vigorously* "I will punch anyone who will laugh at you, okay?"

THAT IS SO FREAKIN' CUTE!! He is trying to pacify her as if she's some child. BUT MAN, Shravan is my precious cinnamon roll. He's up there... giving competition to all other fictional crushes of mine

You see, this is the reason why I wrote a separate para on your writing skills. YOU ARE SLAYING IT, SANIKAA!! LITERALLY SLAYIN' IT.

all these short pieces are so worth reading amidst all the long OS/SS. Not that I dislike the long ones but still, your fables. THEM. They really take the cake. (I stole your line because I can 😎)

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-
FINALLY, I got to this, Baaji Bellatrix 😆
Baaji Bellatrix? 😆 Please don't 😆
The fourth one. AJDJDSKLJKKDSSK. Absolutely fan-frcking-tastic!

"She paused as she met his eyes with a small smile and a wistful look."

I could imagine the Khamba smiling with his eyes squinting at the corner. Like, no, I can imagine the entire scenario.. GO TELL THEM TO GET MARRIED ALREADY. I CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE.
Me too, but unfortunately we have too😭
"... and she literally relies on me everytime she wants something from the top shelf."

either you stop writing such adorable fables on their married life or go get them married in the show because it's beautiful yet painful at the same time. LIKE I WANT THIS IN THE SHOW!! I want such adorableness on my screen. *sniffs*
How am I supposed to get them married, mein show ki writer nai hun😆
"But the actual reason I love my height is because of her hugs."

They need to hug properly in the show, like I CANNOT WAIT.
IKR?! THEY EVEN STOPPED HOLDING HANDS NOW😭
Well, the seventh one. HOW ADORABLE
Tum numbers le rai hon and I go back to check kaunsa hai😆
Dude, that part about leaving wet towels on bed and toothpaste open, it reminded me of Zaroon and Kashaf somehow. At that very instant, an image popped up in my mind of Kashaf picking up a wet towel from bed and capping all the perfumes xD

"If this is not love, then I don't know what it is."

Like all these fables are so adorable that now I think I need synonyms for adorable to use a different word for each fable 😆
Google baccha😆
Chachi Masterchef dekhti hai. That woman can't pronounce pizza theek se, masterchef mein kya samajh ayega unhe about those complicated dishes XD
🤣 😆
Sumo's love for cricket is quite similar to Nikita's obsession with cricket and it's so aodrable.. le it's here once again. *decides to improve vocab*

"Woah waoh. You will not look hideous Sumo. You are beautiful."
"Really?"
*nods vigorously* "I will punch anyone who will laugh at you, okay?"

THAT IS SO FREAKIN' CUTE!! He is trying to pacify her as if she's some child. BUT MAN, Shravan is my precious cinnamon roll. He's up there... giving competition to all other fictional crushes of mine
Yeah dude, he is in like my top ten list now😆 maybe 15, I need to make a list, but haan uppar hi hai woh😆
You see, this is the reason why I wrote a separate para on your writing skills. YOU ARE SLAYING IT, SANIKAA!! LITERALLY SLAYIN' IT.
THANK YOU HERMY⭐️
all these short pieces are so worth reading amidst all the long OS/SS. Not that I dislike the long ones but still, your fables. THEM. They really take the cake. (I stole your line because I can 😎)

😆
@BOLD- Only you can😆
Bro, thanks for reviewing, you slay the art of appreciating 😆😆
🤗
-chinty😆😆
p.s- Sabrina is going to be so pissed at us when she finds out Ramnath is alive😆

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

14. Crayolas.

Shravan poked his tongue through his teeth as he concentrated on coloring insidethe lines. He never liked it when it went outside the lines. It made his drawing look shabby and Rose miss gets upset and gives him only one star; there would be no smiley face. And he was very happy as he was coloring with the new set of Crayolas his mom got him- all straight and pointy and shiny. He brushed his hair out of his eyes as he concentrated even more while coloring the edges. His eyebrows furrowed when he felt someone tapping at his shoulder.
He straightened his glasses and turned around. It was Sumo.
"Savan" said Sumo, unable to pronounce his name properly, "Do you have the red color?"
"I am using it "He said, indicating to the flower he was coloring. Suman's eyes brimmed with tears as she realized she would not have a red flower.
"Don't worry." Shravan said, trying to pacify her. He tore the cover of the color he was using with his small hands and then broke the brand new crayon into two and gave one to Sumo.
"Here, now we both have one."
Sumo gasped as the crayon broke, he sacrificed a new color for her.
"Thank you." She said.
"No problem." Said he, as they both continued to make their masterpieces.
*****
13. Argh Shravan!
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Thanks for the 10000+ views guys 🤗

Edited by -AvadaKedavra- - 9 years ago