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Posted: 9 years ago
Gah! Reading these has filled me with warm, fuzzy Shraman feels.😳😆

You're a fantastic writer!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
The voicemail wala seemed more NiMik than ShraMan, the 'we' factor that they emphasize on in the IVs and the way Namik is full on bold, frank mastikhor guy.. and way the behave when they are together, be it sc or IVs...I am reading it again and again!!!!

The Argh Shravan is also very NiMik as Nikita's always fretting over food and Namik's always trying to calm her down..coaxing her to relax, telling her she's always pretty and not at all fat.. and yeah it's very ShraMan too.

And Sanika, Happy Belated Birthday!!!!!!
Regards from a fellow Mumbaikar..
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Posted: 9 years ago

HI Sanika! 😊

Guess what? I tried to quote you too and realized you have the no-copy thingy enabled too! 😆

So many ShraMan tales under one roof? I can't control my excitement!

EEe! 😃😳 Guess I'll comment as I read. :D

1. She Fit Right In

The tale read just like a chunk out of ShraMan's lives. So true to their characters!

Shravan foreseeing the winning moves on Pushkar's behalf and Suman helping with the food before Vandy could ruin it were exactly things I can see Shravan and Suman doing!

Cute and funny! Loved it! 😳

2. Her Look

I think we all have a part of ourselves, however small it be, that comes out only in the presence of the special someone. Its true for every relationship. ShraMan's too. I love how you pay attention to the little details. Your writing is endearing. 😊

3. Mornings

Sumo selecting a blaring morning alarm. Haha! So like me! 😆

His cute puckered-lips look! That's SO adorable! Judging by the sleepy Shravan scenes aired on the episodes, I can totally see Shravan, the anti-morning person doing this to Sumo every morning! 🤣

4. Best Kind of Stories

Best friends falling in love. That is a gift from the heavens, so pleasant to watch and lucky to experience! I couldn't agree more with you. Those really are the best kind of stories. 😊

5. The K.I.S.S.I.N.G Song

LMAO. Such a cute and hilarious ShraMan setting for the infamous Kissing Song! 😆

And did you make the next one up? It was genius! 🤣

6. The Perks of Being Tall

Shit. WOW! The last paragraph turned my insides into a warm, fuzz ball. The hugs and the tip-toed kisses. I swear, nothing could be more adorable! 😳

I think I'm falling in love with your writing. 😳

7. She Knows

I was SO beautiful. I'm falling short of words to describe the effect it had on me. Precise, to the point and yet your writing hits the reader like a ton of brick. I bet you know that. 😉

8 & 9. The McDonald's Order and The Rush

Its absolutely miraculous how you morph simple, basic daily occurrences into beautiful stories. Take a bow! 👏

The Rush was so relatable. It perfectly mirrored Sumo's thoughts. 😊

10. Shut Up

Haha! Pushkar watching Captain America again. I dunno why I find that so funny and cute. Idk why I find everything about Pushkar funny and cute! 🤣

The double questioning.

Did you, Shravan, did you?

Do you, Shravan, do you?

LMAO! 🤣 That takes the trophy! So hilarious it was! 😆

That ending though. 😳

11. Stolen Kisses

Relationship goals right there. I hope the CVs somehow stumble upon your stories and pick them for the show!

12. Voicemail

OMG. I so didn't see that coming. ☺️

If Nanu ever gets a heart attack, we know what to expect in his call history. 🤣

Man, I'm so sick. 😛

Loved every single dialogue! It was definitely my favorite!

13. Argh Shravan!

HAha! Loved the nok-jhok of Suman and Shravan. It is so likely of Shravan to keep teasing his Sumo till the very end and then some. I bet its his favorite pastime. 😆


I simply L.O.V.E.D. each little story you've penned down.😳 You've gained a stalker. 😉 Keep adding more beauty to this space!😊

Excuse the long-ish post. I have difficulty stopping once I start. 😛

Payal. :)

Edited by Grenade - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Payal- Bro, you are my favorite person on the earth right now 😆
Thank you so much for taking the time to review every fable. I will respond to your comment properly, later on😊
But here, have a jhappi 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG lol answering machine was like wow lol loved it the most
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome drabbles
absolutely loved them
thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

Oh my !
That was so heart warming . <3

Stolen Kisses : If that happens on the show . Dayum .
We all would be dead .
I know high hopes but this was love . :)

Maybe it will happen, way way ahead in the storyline😆

Voicemail : Would definitely scare the caller but it was Cute AF . :D

Argh Shravan : When best friends fall in love and get married . That was so adorable .
Whining Suman and Shravan to irritate her more . :D

Eeeks, That made my day . <3
-God bless


Thank you so much! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: potterginny

The voicemail wala seemed more NiMik than ShraMan, the 'we' factor that they emphasize on in the IVs and the way Namik is full on bold, frank mastikhor guy.. and way the behave when they are together, be it sc or IVs...I am reading it again and again!!!!

The Argh Shravan is also very NiMik as Nikita's always fretting over food and Namik's always trying to calm her down..coaxing her to relax, telling her she's always pretty and not at all fat.. and yeah it's very ShraMan too.

And Sanika, Happy Belated Birthday!!!!!!
Regards from a fellow Mumbaikar..


LOL NiMik, ShraMan.. it is the same to us anyway 😆
Thank you so much! For the birthday wishes and the review. It is always nice to meet a fellow mumbaikar anyway 🤗😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
SANNO...FABULOUS FANTASTIC 🤗

AHHH ..THAT VOICE MAIL , I THINK ITS THE MOST HONEST VOICE MAIL IN THE WORLD 😳

U R KILLING ME LITERALLY SANNO..I SO WANT TO SEE SHRAVAN & SUMAN LIKE THIS...PREGGO SUMO & SHRAVAN CONSOLING HER

LOVE U DARLING ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Grenade

1. She Fit Right In

The tale read just like a chunk out of ShraMan's lives. So true to their characters!

Shravan foreseeing the winning moves on Pushkar's behalf and Suman helping with the food before Vandy could ruin it were exactly things I can see Shravan and Suman doing!

Cute and funny! Loved it! 😳
😊 This is what I envisioned a Sunday afternoon would look like, even after Sumo marries Shravu.😆

2. Her Look

I think we all have a part of ourselves, however small it be, that comes out only in the presence of the special someone. Its true for every relationship. ShraMan's too. I love how you pay attention to the little details. Your writing is endearing. 😊

Aww, thank you so much!

3. Mornings

Sumo selecting a blaring morning alarm. Haha! So like me! 😆
I too have a weird-ass alarm, but that does not wake me up!😆

His cute puckered-lips look! That's SO adorable! Judging by the sleepy Shravan scenes aired on the episodes, I can totally see Shravan, the anti-morning person doing this to Sumo every morning! 🤣

4. Best Kind of Stories

Best friends falling in love. That is a gift from the heavens, so pleasant to watch and lucky to experience! I couldn't agree more with you. Those really are the best kind of stories. 😊

5. The K.I.S.S.I.N.G Song

LMAO. Such a cute and hilarious ShraMan setting for the infamous Kissing Song! 😆

And did you make the next one up? It was genius! 🤣
Unfortunately, no. It was and always will be the part of the original😆

6. The Perks of Being Tall

Shit. WOW! The last paragraph turned my insides into a warm, fuzz ball. The hugs and the tip-toed kisses. I swear, nothing could be more adorable! 😳

I think I'm falling in love with your writing. 😳
You are such a cutie pie😆

7. She Knows

I was SO beautiful. I'm falling short of words to describe the effect it had on me. Precise, to the point and yet your writing hits the reader like a ton of brick. I bet you know that. 😉

8 & 9. The McDonald's Order and The Rush

Its absolutely miraculous how you morph simple, basic daily occurrences into beautiful stories. Take a bow! 👏
A relationship is filled with these small moments that make the whole experience memorable, these are the moments worth mentioning😊 That is the whole point of this thread😛 Glad you liked it😊

The Rush was so relatable. It perfectly mirrored Sumo's thoughts. 😊

10. Shut Up

Haha! Pushkar watching Captain America again. I dunno why I find that so funny and cute. Idk why I find everything about Pushkar funny and cute! 🤣
Pushkar is like the greatest thing since sliced bread, everyone loves him 😆 ❤️

The double questioning.

Did you, Shravan, did you?

Do you, Shravan, do you?

LMAO! 🤣 That takes the trophy! So hilarious it was! 😆

That ending though. 😳

11. Stolen Kisses

Relationship goals right there. I hope the CVs somehow stumble upon your stories and pick them for the show!

Well, wouldn't that be a dream come true😆

12. Voicemail

OMG. I so didn't see that coming. ☺️

If Nanu ever gets a heart attack, we know what to expect in his call history. 🤣
🤣 This line cracked me up so bad 🤣

Man, I'm so sick. 😛

Loved every single dialogue! It was definitely my favorite!

13. Argh Shravan!

HAha! Loved the nok-jhok of Suman and Shravan. It is so likely of Shravan to keep teasing his Sumo till the very end and then some. I bet its his favorite pastime. 😆

I simply L.O.V.E.D. each little story you've penned down.😳 You've gained a stalker. 😉 Keep adding more beauty to this space!😊

Excuse the long-ish post. I have difficulty stopping once I start. 😛

Payal. :)


It is okay, I love reading long-ish reviews😆
Thank you for taking time to riview each and every fable of mine. I am glad you liked it😆😳

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