How's suraj inspired of ur kachori?π²hmm..poora pagal hi tha! πHonestly..i didn't like that "Spit it" dialogueπ...otherwise everything was fineπ
His attitude like " Jo karna hi Karo" π thats inspired from my Kachori π
wo hindi dialog " ab ugal do " ki bad translation tha π π π. As I said imagining dialogs in english was π€’ for me when writing. at same time I am not so confident on my Hindi ki I can write story ab jhelo bad translations ko π
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