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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: CRAZY4_SARUN
awesome update Thanks dear!
loved the mangalsutra part
arnav made for her and now
She remembered the mangalsutra and
getting emotional She would start remembering everything real soon...
both arnav and shyam loved khushi but
What does Shyam wants now No, I don't think he is creating any rift, he is just concerned about his sister. He thinks, Arnav couldn't keep his sister happy and that's why she planned to leave him.
creating rift between
Arnav and Khushi ...
khushi lost their child thats why
she leave him

Losing a child was a big issue with Khushi...and then her inability to have anymore.😭

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mansijani21

@mansijani21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Superb update...!! 😊👏

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Arshisarunfan

@Arshisarunfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Such a beautiful update ❤️ With each update I'm falling in love with this story more & more ❤️ I hope some miracle happens in the next 3 or 4 weeks to prevent this impending divorce in the court of law!

Edited by Arshisarunfan - 9 years ago

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Arshisarunfan
Such a beautiful update ❤️ With each update I'm falling in love with this story more & more ❤️ I hope some miracle happens in the next 3 or 4 weeks to prevent this impending divorce in the court of law! Thanks dear! Yah I am sure you would love this story...Some miracle can only happen when she remembers everything😉

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Nitya

@nik1310

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Firstly keep the PMs on please...I do not stalk the thread 🤔

Secondly, I love love your long updates. The emotional turmoil of Arnav was so tangible here. Gosh the upheaval he is had to endure and now this. Khushi loves him so, thats cute too. I got disconnected at the blog part so not sure if the Divorce deadline will be overcome...will wait and see.

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Just come across this story and read all parts in one go dear

Must say its highly emotional but sweet love story

Arnc and Khushi are madly in love with each other

And reason and theor sepration may be Khushi's inability of getting pregnant

Now Khusi is again in her teenage but Arnav is in worse situation

His heart is breaking again and again by Khushi's love and passion which is lost in their present

And in other hand Shyam is making his pain worse by tunting him about their falled marriage

Both want Khushi's happiness but Shyam is being hard in his protective brother's role

Lets see whats coming next in their way

Hope till Khushi get her memory arnav to get the reason of their sepration

And i think in three weak she will be fine thats why their divorce get late

Overall i can say you are wonderful and brilliant writter

You put every emotions very beautifully

Love the way you are presenting their past in between, looks like putting all the pieces in place to solve the puzzle

I really love your writing too muh

Bound by blackmail is my favourite one till now but this story come in that list already

Waiting for next update eagerly

Edited by star_fan1 - 9 years ago

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Thanks for being a part of this story...

But now since this one is coming to an end, this story is removed from this forum.

As of now, it is not available on blog.

Thanks again for reading it and appreciating it.🤗

R❤️

Edited by matosarah - 8 years ago

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Ritu darling I dont know how you manage to put so many emotions in one update. I have become a great fan of you. In this update there is a disappointment , agony , anger , happy , flirting , romance , unwanted feeling so much more.

Arnav , I petty the boy who wanted to study but could not who has to scarify everything for nothing , he lost both his parents but I am happy that he found his own happiness and is exploring it. The Fair scene was so beautiful while reading that scene I was grinning like an idiot hahha. It felt so natural and so serine I loved it.

Khushi no words to say there are many kids like Khushi who's parents think that by giving expensive gits and joining them in a very rich educational institute their duty as a parent is complete , but what they dont understand is a kid needs love , care and attention form parents. They crave for these and when they find these they just leave everything behind and go. I think that is what Khushi's Karuna Didi did.

Now I am confused if Shyam loves Khushi so much then why did he leave her when she was young and needed him the most. I agree that he was also young but he is elder to Khushi , as Khushi thought families stick together they why did not it click to him that his younger sister needs him the most.

Edited by Srilathalolla - 9 years ago

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: star_fan1
Just come across this story and read all parts in one go dear
Must say its highly emotional but sweet love story
Arnc and Khushi are madly in love with each other
And reason and theor sepration may be Khushi's inability of getting pregnant
Now Khusi is again in her teenage but Arnav is in worse situation
His heart is breaking again and again by Khushi's love and passion which is lost in their present
And in other hand Shyam is making his pain worse by tunting him about their falled marriage
Both want Khushi's happiness but Shyam is being hard in his protective brother's role
Lets see whats coming next in their way
Hope till Khushi get her memory arnav to get the reason of their sepration
And i think in three weak she will be fine thats why their divorce get late

Overall i can say you are wonderful and brilliant writter
You put every emotions very beautifully
Love the way you are presenting their past in between, looks like putting all the pieces in place to solve the puzzle
I really love your writing too muh
Bound by blackmail is my favourite one till now but this story come in that list already
Waiting for next update eagerly

Thank you very much dear! I am so glad u are reading this story...please do keep reading..it is incredibly sweet love story for sure...And slowly it unravels with each part... and this one is my special work for sure.😃