RAGLAK OS : Pyarbhari Takrar

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RAGLAK OS : Pyarbhari Takrar

Maheshwari Mansion

At Morning

Ragini Laksh ke liye tiffin le kar aati hain,"Ye lihijiye Laksh aapka tiffin, pura khatm kijiye haan. Wo aaj maine apne hathonse aapke liye tiffin banaya hain". Laksh Raginiko side hug karke,"Aaaye haayere meri pyari biwi aaj tumne in najuk hathonse mere liye tiffin banaya hain toh pakka me pura khaunga. Par Ragini tumne itni taklif kyun ki?" Ragini apna muh banati hain, "Kya Laksh aap bhi isme taklif kya hain? Apne patike liye tiffin bananeme taklif nahi hoti aur pata hain isse pyar badhta hain" aur wo sharmati hain.

Laksh : Hayee... aise sharmaya mat karo... warna me aaj officehi na jau... wink karta hain. Lekin kya karu jana to padega... wo muh banata hain.

Ragini : Waise Laksh aap aaj officese jaldi aayenge? Laksh usse naughty smile deta hain,"Kya baat hain Ragini, aaj tumhare iraade mujhe thik nahi lag rahe. Kahi humare honeymoon ka toh plan nahi bana rahi na tum? Ragini sharmati hain,"Laksh aap bhi na. Darsal wo maine aaj movie jane ka plan kiya hain isliye aap aaj please jaldi aajayiye".

Laksh : Movie? Kya Ragini me yaha apne honeymoon ke bareme soch raha hu aur tum ho ki movie ka plan kar rahi ho.

Ragini : Haan toh aapko pata hain Laksh iss movieme mera favourite hero bhi hain aur mujhe yeh movie dekhnihi hain isliye aap bina bhule jaldi aayiye.

Laksh : Ok Ragini me aaunga. Ab me chalta hu haa bye aur wo office jata hain.

Shamko Ragini ready hokar Lakshka wait karti hain par wo jaldi nahi aata. Ragini Lakshpe bahot naraj hoti hain. Rat me Laksh ghar aata hain,"Hey bhagwan maine toh aaj Raginiko moviepe le jane ka promice kiya tha par kaam ke silsile me itna busy tha ki ye baat dimagse chali gayi. Ab pata nahi Ragini ko kaise samjhaunga". Wo apne room me jane lagta hain tabhi usse TV ki awaj aati hain. Ragini hallme TV dekh rahi thi. Laksh usse sorry kehta hain,"I am sorry Ragini. Wo main..."par Ragini usse bolne nahi deti aur TV off karke apne room me jati hain. Laksh bhagwaan ka nam lekar room me aata hain.

At their room

Laksh : Ragini I am really very sorry na. Pata nahi mere dimagse yeh movie ki baat kaise nikal gayi. I am sorry.

Ragini : Baat toh nikalnewali thi hi na Laksh. Aap mere saath movie dekhna chahtehi nahi the. Me hi aise ready hokar aapka wait kar rahi thi. Mujhe aapse baathi nahi karni Laksh aur wo so jati hain.

Next Day

Laksh Raginise baat karneki bahot koshish karta hain par Ragini usse kuch bhi baat nahi karti. Sanskar aur Swara yeh baat notice karte hain.

Sanskar : Swara lagta hain Laksh aur Raginime jhagda hua hain isliye Ragini Lakshse baat nahi kar rahi.

Swara : Haan Sanskar tumne sach kaha. Hume kuch karna chahiye na Sanskar?

Sanskar : Haa tum ek kam karo tum Raginise baat karo aur me Lakshse karta hu. Dono apna apna kam karne jate hain.

At RAGLAK's room

Swara : Ragini tum Lakshse naraj ho?

Ragini : Swara pata hain maine kitna achha movie dekhneka plan kiya tha par Lakshne sara plan chopat kar diya.

Swara : Par Ragini usko kam tha isliye wo late aaya na.

Ragini : Haan Swara kam toh tha par kam toh har roj hota hain na aur maine toh bas kalhi jaldi aaneke liye kaha tha na.

Swara : Haan ye bhi sahi hain par Ragini...

Ragini : Swara please ab tum mujhe convince mat karo. Me Lakshse baat nahi karungi matlab nahi karungi aur wo wahase chali jaati hain.

At Terrace

Laksh Sanskarko dhundhte huye terracepe aata hain, "Kya bhai aap yaha ho aur me aapko pure gharme dhundh raha tha. Kya kam hain bhai? kyun bulaya mujhe yaha?"

Sanskar : Wo Laksh tumse kuch puchna tha. Tumhare aur Raginike beechme kuch jhagda hua hain kya?

Laksh : Haan wo bas aisehi aur wo sari baat batata hain. Ab tumhi batao bhai kal me nahi aa paya jaldi toh ye baat Raginiko samajhni chahiyena par wo hain ki samjhati hi nahi. Wo toh bas uski favourite movie dekhneke liye nahi mili toh naraj hogayi.

Sanskar : Haan Laksh tum sahi toh ho par wo kya hain na bade bade logone kaha hain jab bhi pati patnime jhagda hota hain na toh chahe galti patnikihi kyun na ho par maafi patikohi mangni padti hain aur yahi best tarika hain apne married lifeme khush rehneka.

Laksh : Haan bhai me manta hu ye par maine subahse Raginise baat karneki koshish ki par wo toh mere taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi toh baat karna toh bahot dur raha.

Sanskar : Are Laksh tum usse pyarse manao dekhna wo jarur man jayegi.

Laksh : Wa wa bhai kya idea di hain. Waise lagta hain tumhe aise manane ka experience bahot hain. Kya Swara bhi tumse humesha naraj hoti hain?

Sanskar : Kya yar mere jakhmonpe aise namak mat dalo tum aur dono haste hain.

Laksh Ragini ko dhundhte huye kitchenme aata hain. Ragini wahape chai bana rahi thi. Laksh Ragini ke dayne kandhepe marta hain Ragini udhar dekhti hain par usse koi nahi dikhta. Laksh uske Bayne kandhepe marta hain Ragini udhar bhi dekhti hain par usse Laksh nahi dikhta. Laksh usse peechese hug karta hain aur uske chin aur gal khichta hain.

You Are My Love

You Are My Dove..

You Are My Curly Pudding Pie

Tere Kadmon Mein Dil Rakh Doon

Until I'm Gonna Die

Laksh apne ghutnope bethta hain. Ragini uske taraf jerkse dekhti hain. Laksh wink karta hain.

You Are My Love

You Are My Dove..

You Are My Curly Pudding Pie

Tere Kadmon Mein Dil Rakh Doon

Until I'm Gonna Die

Ragini apna sar hilati hain aur chai lekar wahase chali jati hain.

Bye Bye..Bye Bye..

Old Panthras, Please Don't Try

Bye Bye..Bye Bye..

Old Panthras, Please Don't Try

Laksh apna muh banata hain. Ragini chai lekar dinning tablepe bethti hain. Laksh usse ek ek rose deta hain.

You Are My Love

You Are My Dove..

You Are My Curly Pudding Pie

Tere Kadmon Mein Dil Rakh Doon

Until I'm Gonna Die

Ragini har ek rose ko kiss karti hain. Laksh turant apna gal aage karta hain, Ragini usse dheerese chata marti hain.

Bye Bye..Bye Bye..

Old Panthras, Please Don't Try

Bye Bye..Bye Bye..

Old Panthras, Please Don't Try

Ragini wahase apne roomme jakar wardrobe saaf karne lagti hain. Laksh uske peeche aata hain aur Raginike kam me saath deta hain. Actually wo Raginine jo kapde bahar bed pe rakhe the wahi wapas andar rakhne lagta hain. Ragini uske taraf gusse se dekhti hain. Laksh turant sare kapde bahar nikalta hain aur Ragini ke taraf pyarse dekhta hain. Ragini uske taraf attitude se dekhti hain.

Kyun Maska Marta Hai

Kya Mujhse Chahta Hai

Laksh Raginika hath pakadkar kiss karne lagta hain par Ragini apna hath hatati hain.

Kyun Maska Marta Hai

Kya Mujhse Chahta Hai

Laksh usse hug karta hain.

Maske Ka Ho Jo Tadka

Toh Pyar Easy Chadhta

Wo usse galpe kiss karta hain.

Maske Ka Ho Jo Tadka

Toh Pyaar Easy Chadhta

Ragini wahase jane lagti hain par Laksh usse apne taraf khichkar apne lap me bithata hain.

You're My Bun, You're My One

You're The Apple Of My Eye

Tere Kadmon Mein Dil Rakh Doon

Until I'm Gonna Die

Ragini khadi rehti hain aur gusse se Laksh ke taraf ungli karti hain.

Bye Bye..Bye Bye..

Old Panthras, Please Don't Try

Laksh Ragini ko dekh kar dar jata hain. Ragini pyarse uske chehrepe ungli ghumati hain

Bye Bye, Bye Bye..

Old Panthras, Please Don't Try

Wo usse kuch kapde aur iron de kar ironing board dikhati hain. Laksh gusse se kapde bed pe rakh kar wahase chala jata hain. Ragini hasne lagti hain, "Laksh me aapse gussa hui hu aur yun aise itne jaldi nahi manugi".

Thodi der baad

Laksh pareshaan hokar hall me bethta hain ,"Pata nahi Ragini ko kaise manau? Kya karu yar kuch nahi samaj raha. Ek toh Sanskar bhi gharme nahi hain warna usise puch leta". Pura din Laksh Raginiko manane ke liye bahot sare tarike try karta hain par Ragini nahi manti.

Laksh bahot pareshaan hokar bed room me jane lagta hain par darwaje pe hi khada rehta hain. Ragini Laksh ki photo hath pe lekar naraj hokar photo ki taraf dekhti hain.

Shaadi Ke Baad Tune

Love You Kabhi Kaha Na

Laksh hasta hain

Shaadi Ke Baad Tune

Love You Kabhi Kaha Na

Laksh turant andar aata hain aur Raginike pass aata hain. Ragini turant photo side me rakhti hain.

Love Karna Lazmi Hai

Ya Kehna Hai Zaroori

Wo Ragini ke taraf dekhta hain.

Love Karna Lazmi Hai

Ya Kehna Hai Zaroori

Ragini sharmakar jaane lagti hain. Laksh uska hath pakadta hain aur apne ghutnope beth kar rone jaisa muh banata hain.

You're My Life, You're My Wife

Do You Want Me To Cry

Tere Kadmon Mein Dil Rakh Doon

Until I'm Gonna Die

Ragini Laksh ko dekh kar pitty feel karti hain aur uske pass aakar uske chehreko cup karke uske gaal khichti hain.

Don't Cry, Don't Cry

Yeh Hai Masti, Sweetie Pie

Don't Cry, Don't Cry

Yeh Hai Masti, Sweetie Pie

Ragini usse galonpe aur forehead pe kiss karti hain.

You're My Date, You're My Fate

You're My Heaven In The Sky

Tere Kadmon Pe Dil Rakh Doon

Until I'm Gonna Die

Laksh turant khade hokar Raginiko hug karta hain

Let's Fly, Let's Fly

New Panthras Let's Try

Dono dance karte hain.

Let's Fly, Let's Fly

New Panthras Let's Try

Let's Try..Let's Try..Let's Try..

Let's Try..Let's Try..Let's Try..

Laksh : I am sorry Ragini me kal tumhe kiya hua promice pura nahi kar paya par tum mujhse jitna chahe jhagda karo par wapas aise mujhse baat karna band mat karo. Pata hain tum mujhse pura din baat nahi kar rahi thi tab aisa lag raha tha ki mere sharirmese meri jaan hi nikal gayi hain". Ragini turant apna hath Laksh ke muh pe rakhti hain, "Nahi Laksh aisa nahi kehte. I am also sorry Laksh me bhi aapse baat kiye bina nahi reh sakti. I love you Laksh".

Laksh : I love you too Ragini aur haan me tumhe promice karta hu aur wo bhi pakka wala promice ki me tumhe wo movie dikhane le jaunga.

Ragini : Nahi Laksh mujhe wo movie nahi dekhni.

Laksh : Kyun ab kya hua?

Ragini : Darsal me aapke saath kuch time spend karna chahti thi isliye maine movie ka plan kiya tha par mujhe ab wo movie nahi dekhni.

Laksh : Offf oh toh ye baat thi. Toh ek kam karte hain ab tum jaldise ready ho jao hum long drive pe chalte hain aur baadme baharhi dinner karenge.

Ragini : Are wah bahot mast idea hain Laksh me abhi ready ho kar aati hu par haan Laksh hum na bike pe jayenge car me nahi.

Laksh : Jaisi meri biwi chahe aapka hokum sar aankhopar biwijaan... Wo usse foreheadpe kiss karta hain.

--- The End ---

Edited by Ketaki19 - 9 years ago

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Diramylove thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww..so cute.raglak were so cute yaar😳
Thanks for writing such an amazing cute story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww so cute...
These kinds of cute nok jhok...
I love ur OSs..make more😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey can u write a os on current track plz..u write really well😳

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