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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Awesome FF

Read it in a go

Jus loved it

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

such an awesome
brilliant piece of work.
loved reading all parts in one go.
beautiful and amazing story line.
suspense keep me hooked up until end.
all characters including shayam and his network were placed brilliantly in story.
wonderful work done by u.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

I had no idea that u had updated the story... had read it quite long back... happy to see that u gave it the beautiful ending the story deserved...
It's a wonderful story... loved it :)

Edited by aarrsshhii - 9 years ago

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

You made my Christmas weekend! I spent the whole day today reading this thriller and thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you !

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Why were the updates so short? but yeah I loved the whole story. Very thrilling. And totally action packed. Gave the effect of watching a full length action drama. I did see a little of Lavu in little of Khushi. Few places, maybe it is not. But yes I don't know why, I found few.

I liked the whole new sketching of Amar. He was brilliant man. He just invaded my kutti heart you know. I loved how you had slowly shown the.growth of his love and.how.Anjali completed it. That was a beautiful trio. Here Arnav was.highly protective and though he was ASR, I liked him better. And few scenes were Khushi tried to pacify an Angry and.silent Arnav made me.go all oohs and awws. The story was flawless and extraordinary with just one villain. Yes, that is the best part. You had one villain,yet it.didn't seem too boring that it was the same fellow. In fact it only made me.curious.

Anyhow I am surprised you have named the story after a threat from the villain himself!

I.am.glad you did it finish this somehow and the ending was just beautiful. I loved this story and I am being the judge here. This story was damn good and dot.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Wow what a wonderful story it was.. feels so lucky to get to read such a amazing piece of creativity.. mind blowing.. loved every part of it.. thanks a ton for such a wonderful story dear. 😊

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