MANAN OS- MANIK... MY HERO - Page 4

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

just one word wow

Originally posted by: manancraze

Wow...so mesmerizing os...😳...I was reading it in trance...!!!

Love the softy version of Manik... Nandini's father is totally a rocking person...😎 .

Love the line Manik said in proposal time...😛.

Take care...😃

Originally posted by: Partholic_Girl

Awsum one
Manik is totally adorable in this character
Contiue writing
keep rocking

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Wow... Such a beautiful story...
Pic's edit are awesome...
And emotions carried very well
Keep it up dear...
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Originally posted by: gtilwani45

wow. very beautiful os.. totally loved it. amazing. pics r amazing. concept is nice.. do write more. STAY BLESSED

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Well all over story was good i like the selfless manik and selfish nandu or there was a lot of grammar issues umm being i can suggest you something its a suggestion okay no bashing
This M said and N said its not the proper and correct way to write a conversation part
"Dialogue"expression and other stuff like he said she said other lines as well write them like this it was your first attempt and u need time to polish your skills story was actually good but skills polish hone me time lgega observe other persons work like how they write flawlessly and something i hope u won't take it as a bashing its just a suggestion okay

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

Superb os dea..!
Manik ws truly her hero..!
Sorry if u feel bad.. Bt.. I really want to say dis.. Dnt use hindi mch..!!
We r ok wid eng..!

n cmng to d Os.. So I loved dis too..!
It ws amazing..!

Do write sch more.. Wud love to read.. :)