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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: Tulip.
Sorry couldn't comment on the previous chapters. Forgot my password again. But I did follow it. And as usual it's awesome. I usually don't like to read stories that doesn't go along with the current track but this is different. You are doing a wonderful job. By the way are you going to post the new chapter today? Pls update soon. Eagerly waiting.

It's alright, dear. You commented now. 😊

Thanks for your lovely and kind words, and it makes me extremely humble and glad to know you're reading my story despite the different tracks it has. ❤️

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: Sashnihaa
Hey Lara,
Thanks for the pm. This chapter was just amazing! Like how you're taking the story. Did not expect the marriage to happen so soon. :o Can't wait to read about the drama post marriage. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! :D
Do pm me when its up !

Thank you,
Sashi

Hey! Thank you so much. 😳

And of course, I'll pm you.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: SahSah
Oh wow update and what a fab one ...
Jeez this is so not done like why oh why does he have to be so self obsorbed and she has to be the bad one in his eye.. come on man maybe just like just once try to think from her pov..

Suman my poor baby has to go through all this mess all alone and who hugged her .. it was you Mr and you are equally liable for it ... hmppp

Well maybe once in a while it will be fab to know what is going thru his mind...

Oh oh marriage already on the way not what we expected it to be..

Is he trying to portray her as desperate in front of everyone ... Grrr he better not

I am waiting for more to unfold and where this relationship will land..

Oh ya he is going to regret big time

Waiting starts again

❤️

Thanks! 🤗

Hmmm... I'll then have his POV included but not now, let's the mystery intensify.

It's true, he'll regret his actions royally later.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#654

*Removed*

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My heart went out to Suman. 😭 But then again, I'm the one writing her fate. (clears throat)😕

So, friends, let me know if you're enjoying reading the story as much as I'm enjoying writing it?

Which part of this chapter you liked reading the most, the part which seemed momentary to you? Let me know, huh. And how many punches for Shravan after this chapter? 😈

But... but, let's not leave it unnoticed that he's suppressing some emotions here, and one day, hopefully soon, he wouldn't be able to suppress anymore. That would probably be the moment of revealation and then - the humongous redemption. I'm already getting so excited!

Before you leave, please please please don't forget to press the like button and comment. I would be eagerly waiting to hear from you all. Even from the silent readers as well, I've not lost hope on my silent readers, you know. And I wait, I wait with all my heart for the day you will not remain silent any more and I'll be happier than ever. 🤗

Lots of love,❤️
Lara.

Note: People who've been liking and commenting regularly, yet find themselves not receiving a PM from me. This note is for you guys. Your PM inboxes are full, you need to delete the PMs and make some space so that I can send you PM when I updt. A full inbox will reject sent PMs.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#655

Lara🤗

I was waiting for your update!!

Firstly, I loved it! Given Shravan was a complete jerk in the chapter, but he will come around.. Your writing is such a treat to read, its just so easy to visualise everything and that makes it even more fun to read.

Secondly, my absolute favourite part was where Shravan was looking at her with sympathy, well I for one think sympathy is was Suman saw, it was probably something deeper Wishful thinking..

No punches for Shravan as off yet.. He might just receive some if he goes on like this..

I can't wait to read the next part.. Hopefully they reach a joint decision about their situation to make living together a little easier😕 And I want to know reactions of the family!!

Thanks for the PM!

Until next time😛

Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#656

Res
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Unress

Ok, totally dead 🤢 after reading this chapter.

Reporting from heaven

Oh gosh...this chapter...
Awww
Outstanding 👏

Girl you are an amazing story teller.
You have no idea how excellent this chapter is, totally awesome
Seems I need new dictionary to find words that can stand best to appreciate your work
Seriously, it's just like *everything is happening right now infront of my eyes,and I am enjoying with popcorn,cola 😆 *

Totally *theatre feels*

Now, you have to update next chapter as soon as possible
Otherwise you are responsible for my actions...yes you
Heard it right...i will flood your inbox with my pms.
So better you do update the next chapter asap.

Well u can consider this as a warning 🤣

*HATTS, OFF...*THE GREAT STORY TELLER *

PS:You Don't Need to PM ME 😳
*bookmarked*

Daily I check this thread .
😳

*my favourite part of this chapter is *

"I told you not to move"

😳
It just showcased shravan's care/concern for sumo.

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#657

It was wonderful as always!!😊

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#658

My heart goes out to Suman. Poor girl doesn't deserve this. Hopefully Shravan will learn the truth and his redemption will follow. Can't wait for u to update soon. Thanks for the PM x

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#659

Hi Lara!!!! Thanks for PM... So finally shraman are married.. I loved the part where despite of his issues with suman he gets worried when she gets hurt... Awesome chapter 👏

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#660

Awesome update

I will give punches to Sharavan for his every action of the day except the moment he showed sympathy.

They are married, without band, baja and baraat. That is unfair to Suman. My heart went out for Suman. I am so eager to read the update when misery will finally leave Suman.

I wonder what will be the reaction of Suman's family on her haste marriage.

Can't wait to read more.